https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0 Please write your name (roll) then identify a passage that "shows" using figurative language. Also, please explain how the Peruvian girl changed the author. en-us 2021-03-05 16:09:25 UTC 2021-08-04 16:44:26 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339907661 A passage that clearly uses figurative language was shown when she stated, "The rest of my trip unexpectedly became overshadowed by memories of the frighteningly thin, dark-eyed girl begging for sols to feed her family." This passage provides imagery of the young girl asking for food in a beautiful way.
The Peruvian girl changed the author by making the author realize how privileged and lucky she is. The young girl also allowed the author to take an opportunity and make change which shows her ways of being determined and mindful. ]]> 2021-03-22 19:39:40 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339907661 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339907975 I believe that the Peruvian girl changed the author by showing her how other girls and young women live without the option of education. She is able to use her privilege of her education to be able to help other young women around the world. She turns this into responsibility and determination to challenge the "impossible" and help people. "My almond-scented hairspray did nothing to overpower the smell of llama dung and cuy (roasted
guinea pig) emanating through the Peruvian flea market." I believe that this phrase shows rather than tells because it is very specific and you can understand the conditions in this Peruvian Flea Market without actually being there. ]]> 2021-03-22 19:39:45 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339907975 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339908199 This Peruvian girl allowed the author to see how girls live in Peru and how that struggle would feel from their perspective. This inspired the author to take this opportunity to make a difference in at least one persons life, after seeing what this girl has to go through everyday. The author felt that with her privilege it was her responsibility to achieve this.

A passage that "shows" using figurative language is "The rest of my trip unexpectedly became overshadowed by memories of the frighteningly thin,
dark-eyed girl begging for sols to feed her family."]]> 2021-03-22 19:39:49 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339908199 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339908439 The Peruvian girl changed the author because she willing to make a change even though she has privilege and show the living conditions. Motivating people to make a change in the world and that anybody can if they try to. A passage that shows figurative language ¨My almond-scented hairspray did nothing to overpower the smell of llama dung and cuy¨ this passage gives you sense of smell and paints a bigger picture of the scene.]]> 2021-03-22 19:39:52 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339908439 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339908517 A passage with figurative language is in the paragraph where she is talking about guiding blind skiers "They tasted the crisp air, smelled the sunshine, and listened to the whispers of tree
branches." This is an example of imagery, when you read this you can feel and smell and hear exactly what the author is saying. Also the girl changed the author by showing her the reality of the real world. She was worried about the smells while this little girl was fighting to have enough money to survive. This moment lived in her memory when she came home and she tried to help get involved and help others who were struggling with this same situation. This shows how much she cares for others and is thinking about more than just herself. She is also determined to make change because when she found an obstacle she did not give in, she kept pushing for change.]]> 2021-03-22 19:39:54 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339908517 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339909036 The author shows how she learned about how these young girls survive, and this one girl inspired her to open an opportunity for this girl to go get educated, and that anyone can change the world, even if its just one thing at a time]]> 2021-03-22 19:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339909036 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339909049 This Peruvian girl changed the authour by inspiring her, and providing a different persepctive to allow for empathy. She was inspired to use her own privledge to help others. 
The author uses imagery noting "the smell of llama dung and cuy emanating through the Peruvian Flea market" and "I doused myself with with water to counter the oppresive heat" This is an example of the authors use of descriptive diction and imagery. ]]> 2021-03-22 19:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339909049 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339928573 The Peruvian girl inspired the author by showing her her privilege, as well as showing her how Peruvian girls really live. The author saw this struggle, and used her privilege to help others with very little privilege. 

Figurative langage: "The stifling
heat and smell forgotten, naturally, I had to take a picture." ]]> 2021-03-22 19:45:09 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339928573 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339934308 A passage that "shows" using figurative language is "My heart lurched when
it dawned on me that this was how she survived." The little girl drastically changed how the author viewed the world. When the author was enlightened to the fact that the girl had to sell pictures of an Alpaca to survive it deeply saddened her. Instead of just moving on however she became determined to send other girls to school. Eventually she was able to raise enough money to send a girl to school and it motivated her to continue fighting for more girls educations.]]> 2021-03-22 19:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339934308 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339934384 Ross: "The stifling heat and smell forgotten"
This passage shows rather than tells by using the word stifling to create a sense of thick or stuffiness.

Natalie: She uses beautiful language to illustrate her personality, demonstrating determination without directly saying that she refused to give up. She demonstrates self-sufficiency at the end,  and how the little girl stopped her "with a slight tug on her skirt" from coasting through life with almond-scented hairspray and instead having a cause to fight for.

]]> 2021-03-22 19:46:44 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339934384 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339935054 The author uses a lot of imagery describing her experience meeting the girl. She described the "stifling heat and smell" to make the scene more lifelike. She also showed her determination by describing the word impossible in different ways, saying that she could always strive towards the impossible. This is what the Peruvian girl pushed her to do, by changing her perspective of the world and showing her a way in which people were suffering. This is what lead her to both start her philanthropy, as well as change her view of the impossible. ]]> 2021-03-22 19:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339935054 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339935089 The following passage shows and sets the scene with figurative language. "The stifling
heat and smell forgotten, naturally, I had to take a picture."

The young girl that the author meets helps her develop a sense of responsibily, and enables her to find a way to help those who need it the most. And even though in the end, she has not done the impossible, she's not discouraged by that. So long as there is more to do, she is there to help.]]> 2021-03-22 19:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339935089 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339935207 A passage with figurative language that Shows not tells is in  the second paragraph when she said ¨My heart lurched when it dawned on me that this was how she survived¨. This little girl opened her world view and made a change in her thinking, that fact that selling pictures of a baby alpaca to survive. This event had a life long affect on her life to the point where she could not ignore the feeling, insted of forgeting about it and moving on she grew as a person and made a change.]]> 2021-03-22 19:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339935207 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339935422 The Peruvian girl changed the author because it showed her a new way of life and challenged her to think differently about education. This girl stuck with the author, always in her memory as the author worked to make a change.
A passage that "shows" using figurative language is, "My almond-scented hairspray did nothing to overpower the smell of llama dung and cuy (roasted guinea pig) emanating through the Peruvian flea market." This passage uses sensory details such as smell, to put the reader into the scene. ]]> 2021-03-22 19:46:58 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339935422 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339936625 The author shows how she changed from when she saw how terrible the living conditions were in the passage The rest of my trip unexpectedly became overshadowed by memories of the frighteningly thin,
dark-eyed girl begging for sols to feed her family. All I could see in the following weeks was the myriad
of bright young girls who could not express their intelligence or passions because they happened to live in
rural Peru"]]> 2021-03-22 19:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339936625 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339938109 One passage that "shows" instead of tells is "When at
last I opened an email displaying the scholar’s beaming face next to her first camera, tears welled in my
eyes." The Peruvian girl changed the author by giving her a first-hand experience of the inequalities still prominent in many countries and areas of the world today when considering education. Many children are forced to be child laborers and do not have the opportunity to achieve an education because of the cost, which creates a strong barrier between the wealthy and the poor. This thought process gave the author a reason and a new perspective of education and what she can do to help.]]> 2021-03-22 19:47:41 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339938109 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339939007 A passage that uses figurative language to "show" is "The rest of my trip unexpectedly became overshadowed by memories of the frighteningly thin,
dark-eyed girl begging for sols to feed her family." The author doesnt say shes Peruvian yet but with the figurative language you can tell and get the feeling of what she means. The Peruvian girl changed the author by showing her other lives people live and that she can make a change]]> 2021-03-22 19:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339939007 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339944985 In the third paragraph starting with "The rest of my trip unexpectedly became overshadowed by memories of the frighteningly thin,
dark-eyed girl begging for sols to feed her family." shows us the deep meaning behind this little girl. The author uses metaphors and similes to show us what she actually looks like and what she's living through. The little girl changed the author by sharing the determination between the little girl and author. The author also talks about no matter how much money she'll raise it wont make a big enough impact, but including MLK, adds a explanation and a sense of determination.]]> 2021-03-22 19:49:38 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339944985 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339951928 The author of this essay used this trip to show her personal growth through this event in her life where met the peruvian girl in a desperate situation.However instead of telling us she uses figure language to bring life the importance how the frail peruvian girl impact her world view, in the passage where says her heart lurch tells us how physical reaction was at that exact moment.In the introduction the author describes what its like for the author to be rural peru to juxtapose the reality of those who call that environment home.The author makes it work because there are causes that deserve attention but her message that the smallest actions have the greatest impact .]]> 2021-03-22 19:51:38 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339951928 https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339958859 "the smell of llama dung and cut emanating through the Peruvian flea market"
The girl inspires the author to start her fundraiser and send impoverished girls to school and provide them with an education]]> 2021-03-22 19:53:36 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/o7bz2ctavth7bqc0/wish/1339958859