https://padlet.com/elicos_team/o6zxfot6lhh8 Ensure you have a clear topic sentence and fit together your points, including clear explanations of how and why each piece of evidence is an advantage or disadvantage. Make sure it is clear how each sentence relates to the topic. en-us 2018-11-27 02:07:01 UTC 2021-10-25 09:24:30 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elicos_team/o6zxfot6lhh8/wish/1840879008 This essay will argue that the aging population is a serious problem in Australia due to the negative effects on society and economy. One of the negative impact of the aging population on society is that it may lead to labor shortages and increased social pressure. According to Smith(2011) and Jones(2015), the population of 65year olds and above in Australia will double by 2020. In fact, there were more than 3.8 million Australians at the age of 65 and above in 2017, which is 15% of the total population in Australia. The growth of the elderly population in Australia is rapid, which means that more and more citizens are retired. A study showed that three workers per one retiree in 2020(Messi,2010). In contrast, there were seven workers per one retiree in 2001(Messi,2010).  As a result, the social burden has increased, and the labor force has also become tight.]]> 2021-10-25 07:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elicos_team/o6zxfot6lhh8/wish/1840879008 https://padlet.com/elicos_team/o6zxfot6lhh8/wish/1840880690 2021-10-25 07:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/elicos_team/o6zxfot6lhh8/wish/1840880690