Paper 1 Revision by Kate Ellicott https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy What do you need to DO/UNDERSTAND to be successful in each aspect of the assessment? en-us 2021-01-24 23:52:20 UTC 2021-01-25 01:32:20 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892305 no spelling mistakes]]> 2021-01-25 00:51:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892305 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892316 evaluate and analyse your chosen quotes in detail and explain their significance to the question/purpose ]]> 2021-01-25 00:51:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892316 purpose and intended audience https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892339 2021-01-25 00:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892339 Strong understanding of the text https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892361 2021-01-25 00:51:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892361 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892518 Purpose,Intended Audience, Context, Text Type]]> 2021-01-25 00:51:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892518 Structure of your essay (PEEL) https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892548 2021-01-25 00:51:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892548 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892593 Use the correct terminologies

Use varied language and syntax

Be consistent throughout (no misspellings, syntax or grammar errors)


]]> 2021-01-25 00:51:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892593 vocabulary should be used such that it impresses but conveys the message https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892597 2021-01-25 00:51:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892597 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892611 subject specific terminology - like labelling literary techniques correctly]]> 2021-01-25 00:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892611 Audience, Purpose dhruv_sharma_21 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892707 What is the author trying to tell their audience through the use of the text?
Who are their audience? Why?]]> 2021-01-25 00:51:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119892707 Linking back to why your chosen example is relevant to the guiding question https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893167 2021-01-25 00:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893167 Good use of literary features https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893353 2021-01-25 00:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893353 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893515 Introduction with thesis statement. Must also address the layers of the target audience, text type and summarise the key points that will be discussed in the essay.]]> 2021-01-25 00:52:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893515 PEEL, Coherent structure https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893856 2021-01-25 00:52:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893856 use of words evaluative words such as 'successfully' and 'effectively' https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893959 2021-01-25 00:52:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119893959 dhruv_sharma_21 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119894024 Understanding the different features present in the text and seeing what they achieve in conjunction with the message of the text
What is the significance of use of pathos or ethos in certain places
How is the writer using the the text to persuade?]]> 2021-01-25 00:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119894024 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119894135 references to purpose throughout the essay]]> 2021-01-25 00:52:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119894135 triangle of achievement https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119894337 2021-01-25 00:53:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119894337 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119894654 make sure the essay flows from paragraph to paragraph ]]> 2021-01-25 00:53:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119894654 do not misinterpret the message. FIND THE PURPOSE https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895175 2021-01-25 00:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895175 Relevant Language and Vocab https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895229 2021-01-25 00:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895229 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895310 use connectives and paragraph starters 

]]> 2021-01-25 00:53:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895310 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895574 Show insightful convincing analysis of textual features and/or authorial choices

Evaluate how features/authorial choices shape meaning





]]> 2021-01-25 00:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895574 dhruv_sharma_21 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895698 Diverse range of language that is effective + relevant to the text 
keywords: significance, ]]> 2021-01-25 00:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895698 'critical of' 'advocating for' https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895927 2021-01-25 00:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895927 Language, Structure, Tone https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895951 2021-01-25 00:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119895951 Essay flow and organisation (with substantial writing) https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119900416 2021-01-25 00:57:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119900416 Writing 3-4 pages instead of 2 does NOT assure you more marks. (It actually is just more risky) https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119904314 quality over quantity (but that doesn't mean you write very less)]]> 2021-01-25 01:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119904314 Be specific, concise with appropriate word choice (in connection with Criterion D) https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119905185 2021-01-25 01:01:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119905185 Answer the question https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119905427 Use the questions keywords in your point sentences to answer the question.]]> 2021-01-25 01:01:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119905427 do not repeat the same vocabulary. try to have a variety of synonyms https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119906513 e.g.s
clear - clarity
example - exemplified in
similar - synonymic to
story - anecdote
repetition - anaphora, anadeplosis, mesodeplosis (the link to all the literary devices)
lacking of substance - vapid 
(look at all the lists of vocabulary in all the slides throughout the year)]]> 2021-01-25 01:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119906513 Ensuring that you are linking back to the purpose at each paragraph you write. https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119913132 2021-01-25 01:07:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119913132 Critical of/advocating ellicottk1_2 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119917362 2021-01-25 01:10:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119917362 use 'critical of/advocating for' more than just ...once(purpose) https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119922251 2021-01-25 01:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119922251 Embed quotes https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119944724 2021-01-25 01:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119944724 Embedding quote ellicottk1_2 https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119946231 2021-01-25 01:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ellicottk1_2/o6wo4ndex2qo8asy/wish/1119946231