https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9 Direction: Write the title of the story and your comments under the appropriate menu below. en-us 2021-10-15 17:49:52 UTC 2026-03-17 07:10:04 UTC hello@padlet.com acfleming https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1820171179 I like the detail descriptions that you provided. I could really picture the story in my mind. ]]> 2021-10-15 17:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1820171179 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825145791 I liked how you were able to make us visualize what was happening in the story.]]> 2021-10-18 19:30:05 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825145791 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825148820 I liked the twist on little red riding hood I think it was very creative]]> 2021-10-18 19:31:32 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825148820 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825151451 i like how as i read i could imagine what the characters looked like and what they were doing ]]> 2021-10-18 19:32:49 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825151451 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825151751 I liked how you changed the characters in the story. It made it fun to read.]]> 2021-10-18 19:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825151751 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825153163 The story was interesting and i liked it. Good use of words I could visualize well.]]> 2021-10-18 19:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825153163 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825153554 It was cool that you told the story from the troll's perspective.]]> 2021-10-18 19:34:03 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825153554 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825156720 I liked how you made Snow Black the bad guy and the Queen the good guy. ]]> 2021-10-18 19:35:50 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825156720 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825156779 I liked how the gingerbread man was so sneaky and the plot]]> 2021-10-18 19:35:52 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825156779 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825156965 I love the detail in the story it was very fun to read and a shocker what happened]]> 2021-10-18 19:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825156965 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825158240 I liked how it felt like you were turning corners to different surprises and the story just matched up really well]]> 2021-10-18 19:36:43 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825158240 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825158857 I really liked the twist on the name and characters and I think it was a good idea, the pictures helped me make the story vision in my mind even better.]]> 2021-10-18 19:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825158857 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825159084 Good building of the story  
hio i tem]]> 2021-10-18 19:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825159084 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825160124 I like how you put a modern day twist on a old story i really liked it.]]> 2021-10-18 19:37:50 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825160124 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825160416 I loved how detailed it was, it had very good plot twists. My favorite part is when the family re united. ]]> 2021-10-18 19:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825160416 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825160502 i like how you changed the big bad wolf to a mouse it mad it more interesting and and i loved how the became friends ]]> 2021-10-18 19:38:04 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825160502 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825161477 I love that you made your story almost seem like it would have been the oregnal! Like the holl story changed because you changed the wolf to a mice! I also like that you made your own pics, it looks quite nice!!! and I love the title aswell!]]> 2021-10-18 19:38:34 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825161477 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825161536 I like how you put the Gingerbread Lady's feelings at the end, it made me think that she regreted eating the Gingerbread Man because she was then lonely.]]> 2021-10-18 19:38:36 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825161536 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825161922 I like how you changed the charecters the story had a good plot]]> 2021-10-18 19:38:45 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825161922 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825162254 I like the images that you put onto your slide I think it really puts an imagination on to your story like it picture 5]]> 2021-10-18 19:38:56 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825162254 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825162461 I like how the pigs were chased out of the barn instead of being let go by their parents.]]> 2021-10-18 19:39:03 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825162461 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825164096 I love how you changed the whole main idea from the real Sow white and basically changed the characters personalitys it was nice to see them from a different POV. ]]> 2021-10-18 19:39:45 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825164096 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825165143 I liked how you put the setting in a more modern place with the sweatshirt. I also liked that nobody got eaten, they just got chased or locked up.]]> 2021-10-18 19:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825165143 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825168253 I like that they added a mouse instead of a wolf and a mama pig.]]> 2021-10-18 19:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825168253 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825169497 the twist was good and so was the dialogue]]> 2021-10-18 19:41:56 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825169497 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825169727 I liked how you told the story from the Trolls point of view, it made it fun to read.]]> 2021-10-18 19:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825169727 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825169924 i like the pictures and how you over all just told the story ]]> 2021-10-18 19:42:10 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825169924 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825170155 I like at the end where the mouse becomes friends with the three little pigs.]]> 2021-10-18 19:42:17 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825170155 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825170355 I love how you added modern day food brands to the story and made the story a ton funnier it was really funny.]]> 2021-10-18 19:42:23 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825170355 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825170711 I liked the way you made Snow Black the bad version of Snow White. I also like the pictures you use bcause they help out with story. ]]> 2021-10-18 19:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825170711 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825173001 I love how you made mother the oppiset of who they are in the oragnal! I aslo think its kinda funny you put the kedo diet at the begening, i dont know why i found it funny...I aslo love the pics, i feel like they match the story purfectly!]]> 2021-10-18 19:43:36 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825173001 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825173039 I like how the Gingerbread man was very sneaky and i love how it was so well written]]> 2021-10-18 19:43:38 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825173039 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825173957 The detail is amazing. Its easy to visualize the story and makes it even more interesting to read.]]> 2021-10-18 19:44:04 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825173957 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825174295 I like how the grandma was the one to take down the wolf.]]> 2021-10-18 19:44:15 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825174295 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825175767 everything everything 
hio i tem ]]> 2021-10-18 19:45:01 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825175767 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825175942 I like the part in the story where you put the storm and described how it was. It made me feel like I was there.]]> 2021-10-18 19:45:07 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825175942 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825177115 I loved the twist in the story, it was really cool how they wanted to play hide and go seek.]]> 2021-10-18 19:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825177115 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825178429 I loved it. It was funny, I like the part where it says "breakfast he had his own kind pancakes. No, I'm just joking, he had waffles because pancakes and waffles are at war so he ate waffles." That part made me laugh.]]> 2021-10-18 19:46:17 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825178429 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825178746 I like how the storm came through the town and almost made him starve.]]> 2021-10-18 19:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825178746 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825179100 I like that they put two Ginger Bread men instead of 1 and they put them playing hide and seek.]]> 2021-10-18 19:46:39 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825179100 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825179762 Great use of words.I really liked it was super funny.]]> 2021-10-18 19:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825179762 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825179874 I live how you used a puddle image and merrered it to make it look like a reflection. But, I fell like you could add a little more in the story insted of three slides for like one perragraph, and that theres little amount of pics, but other then that I think its asmazing!]]> 2021-10-18 19:47:05 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825179874 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825180119 I like how its from the trolls perspective and how he is asked for what he thinks what really happened ]]> 2021-10-18 19:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825180119 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825180239 i like how it started out super suspenseful, i also like how you started the story as how they escaped the barn and then made their house etc. it was a really nice story good job!!

]]> 2021-10-18 19:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825180239 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825181523 i liked the how it made me visualize what was happening in the story]]> 2021-10-18 19:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825181523 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825181951 I like how they got chased out instead of just let out i also think it had a great use of words an d it was super easy to imagine what was happening.]]> 2021-10-18 19:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825181951 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825184215 I liked the pictures that you chose. It made the story come to life.]]> 2021-10-18 19:49:28 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825184215 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825184867 I love how detailed the writing was and it was creative and I loved the first picture of the pig in the chair.]]> 2021-10-18 19:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825184867 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825185925 I love the story! The pics are amising as well! Over all, I dont see anything bad about this story, its germaticly correct (i suck at spelling correctly so great job with that!) I love how it almost like drags me into reading it over and over again!]]> 2021-10-18 19:50:27 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825185925 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825186365 Good story telling and story telling events.]]> 2021-10-18 19:50:42 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825186365 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825187452 I liked how you started off were the wolf couldn't blow down the brick like in the orginal Three Little Pigs, but then made it were the Wolf got in to the house.]]> 2021-10-18 19:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825187452 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825189279 I don't really like how you killed of the egg at the end, but other than that, it was good]]> 2021-10-18 19:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825189279 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825191174 I liked that it was very well write, good story telling, and good climax.]]> 2021-10-18 19:53:25 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825191174 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825194758 I liked how you told a different ending. It was really cool.]]> 2021-10-18 19:55:26 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825194758 https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825195839 i love how you changed the story and it was really interesting ]]> 2021-10-18 19:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/o6t7gmyfj3lde3p9/wish/1825195839