https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2 Read one anothers' Literary Essays. Pick three classmates to give a compliment to. en-us 2022-12-12 12:30:39 UTC 2022-12-12 19:34:03 UTC hello@padlet.com alexisvercellino https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417698156 2022-12-12 12:41:58 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417698156 alexisvercellino https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417790233 2022-12-12 13:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417790233 alexisvercellino https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417795161 I liked it when you added transitional phrases to the beginning of your body paragraphs. I think this helped your essay flow smoother. Great job Alexis! 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I loved how you made the reader sink into the characters; the quotes and stories made me feel like I was inside the characters. -Emily]]> 2022-12-12 14:14:41 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417825153 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417825595 2022-12-12 14:14:58 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417825595 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417826564 2022-12-12 14:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417826564 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417827215 lily i love how u hooked the readers/me on ur intro and i think it was very detailed  -mia]]> 2022-12-12 14:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417827215 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417828240 2022-12-12 14:16:27 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417828240 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417828862 2022-12-12 14:16:50 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417828862 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417830637 Isabella, I loved how you showed what happened; nearly exactly how it happened in the story but with your own words! -Emily]]> 2022-12-12 14:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417830637 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417832767 reilly i rely liked how u made ur suported ur frist reason -mia]]> 2022-12-12 14:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417832767 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417833443 I like your thesis statement and reasons, very carefully thought. Good work!]]> 2022-12-12 14:19:51 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417833443 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417835527 Jacob, I liked how you used transitionaly correct phrases when moving onto different reasons/examples. -Emily]]> 2022-12-12 14:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417835527 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417840616 2022-12-12 14:24:25 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417840616 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417841745 i like ur claim and ur suporting reasons -mia]]> 2022-12-12 14:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417841745 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417843128 Leah, I think the way that you wrote your story really hooked readers like me! keep up the good work! -Emily]]> 2022-12-12 14:25:55 UTC https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417843128 https://padlet.com/alexisvercellino/o6c9vir7tb3u1rq2/wish/2417849475 Riley, I loved the way you used your talents and hooked the readers with a question! Most people did a normal hook! -Emily
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