24.7. Lan Chi Writing - L1. GVDL by IELTS A&M

Nâng cấp - biến đổi câu

boostyourvocabaandmielts — 2024-07-24 02:13:47 UTC

synonyms: advantages of video games --> benefits of playing games on the Internet
Thay đổi chủ ngữ --> biến đổi câu
Play video games --> skills

Chính phủ nên khuyến khích người trẻ đi làm sớm
Thị trường lao động khó khăn khiến nhiều người không có bằng cấp khó có thể tìm được công việc tốt

CHI - SENTENCE WRITING

2024-07-24 02:15:03 UTC

Playing video games can help enhance several skills

--> If you play video games, you can improve several skills

--> Video games can help enhance several skills

--> It would be + adj + for sb + to do sth --> It would be useful for students/ people/ individuals to play video games

--> Soft skills can/ would be improved if people play video games

--> From an educational perspectives, video games can help improve linguistic skills

--> There is a need for sb to do sth

--> With + Nphr, S V O

--> By Ving, SVO

The government should encourage young people to start to work/ ENTER THE WORKFORCE AT AN early AGE .
Young adults should be GIVEN encourageMENT to begin to work/ GAIN WORK EXPERIENCE early by THE government
It can be BEFIFICIAL if the goverNment CAN encourage early LARBOR MARKET PARTICIPATION AMONG YOUNG PEOPLE

EARLY INTEGRATION OF YOUNG PEOPLE INTO THE WORKFORCE

NORMINALIZATION:

COMPETITIVE Job market PRESENTS SEVERAL difficultIES for people without FORMAL QUALIFICATIONS to get/ SECURE a good position/ QUALITY EMPLOYMENT
It would be difficult/ CHALLENGING for people/ THOSE who do not have any degree/ FORMAL QUALIFICATIONS to get a good job in the labor market/ FIND A STABLE AND FULFILLING EMPLOYMENT OPPORTUNITIES
There ARE NUMEROUS OBSTACLES for people without FORMAL QUALIFICATIONS to get a good job in the COMPETITIVE job market.
THE LACK OF FORMAL QUALIFICATIONS CAN BE A SIGNIFICANT BARRIER TO ENTRY IN A JOR MARKET CHARACTERIZED BY FIERCE/ SEVERE COMPETITION

DEGREE - QUALIFICATION - CERTIFICATE

WRITING TASK 2

boostyourvocabaandmielts — 2024-07-24 02:57:20 UTC

INTRO - 2 BODY - CONCLUSION

Lập dàn ý

Lợi ích của việc chơi thể thao

Giải trí: why --> impacts
Rèn luyện sức khỏe

Triển khai thành paragraph

Coherence and Cohesion --> TA

A B

Có một vài lợi ích (A) của việc chơi thể thao (B).

Thứ nhất, chơi thể thao (B1) giúp tăng cường sức khỏe (A1). Điều này là bởi vì chơi các môn như bơi lội (B11) có thể giúp xây dựng cơ bắp (A11) và hạn chế các bệnh về tim mạch (A12).

A --> A1 --> A11, A12

B --> B1 --> B11

Practice

Lập dàn ý A-B và viết Paragraph sau:

There are several benefits of living in a big cities

(không quá 120 từ) (90-110 từ/ đoạn)

2024-07-24 03:15:17 UTC

Lập dàn ý
Benefits of living in big cities
- A: accessibility to modern facilities
  A1. big cities have advanced facilities and public services --> satisfy people needs --> better quality of life
- B: living in a big cities
  B1: capital
  city dwellers, city residents
- Job oppotunities: giant companies located in big cities --> improve career prospects
  1. Firstly, staying in a big city can help you approach/ access facilities easily/ one of the major benefits of living in metropolises is an accessibility to modern facilities. This is because big cities tend to have numerous facilities and services which allow them to buy everything they need or use available advanced services. As a result.... For example, .......
- Additionally you can learn more modern technology updated daily on the world to upgrade your knowledge.