City life can bring a great number of benefits for citizens. Firstly, urban residents living in the city can easily experience different formS of entertainment. They can go to numerous places, such as restaurant, zoo and bar club. Secondly, city life guaranteeS citizens well/ high-qualified/ appropriate/ proper/ elite education and medical services. Indeed, facilities in the city are typically invested by the government, so people will have ability to experience a lot of services with the highest standard.

To be honest, reading is a vital part of my life. I usually read self-help books and funny stories when I get stress. It helps me ease my mind, think in positive way and absorb knowledges. In additions, I read English books every day, so I can enhance my vocabulary and my memorization. My work is associated with technologies. So, I usually have a meeting with customers and introduce my technological products to them. For introduction perfectly, I need to keep myself updated with the latest technological news. In conclusion, my life is more and more excitement and happiness now when reading a great number of books.

FIRSTLY,.....

SECONDLY

THIRDLY

- the balm to the soul -> requires concentration and focus --> IMMERSE YOURSELF IN THE BOOKS- separate YOURSELF FROM the hectic lifestyles => REDUCE STRESS

Fx: comic books -> ImmersIVE experience

EXPAND YOUR KNOWLEDGE

Help a lot -> written by qualified people in the world -> can learn their lesson

In addition, build your linguistic ABILITIES-> fx: when start to learn English -> find stories in English for children -> learn basic grammar and vocabulary

Offers several benefits --> increased knowledge, improved empathy and understanding --> expand our knowledge --> delving into different genres --> exposed to new ideas, perspectives, and cultures

--> a great way to escape from the stresses and pressures/ DAILY GRIND--> has the power to transport us to different worlds and experiences

--> improve language skills, vocabulary, and overall literacy levels. --> enhance concentration, focus, and memory retention.            

VALUABLE COMFORTABLE

They can go to many places such as restaurants, zoos and bar clubs. Second, city life ensures good education and medical services for the people. Indeed, facilities in big cities are often heavily invested in by the government, so people will have the opportunity to experience services of the highest standard.

BODY:

• MAIN POINTS -> SUPPORTING IDEAS -> EXAMPLES

SUMMARY: SUMMARIZE THE MAIN POINTS, GIVE ADVICE

ASSOCIATED - KNOWLEDGE ABSORB KEEP IN TOUCH CURRENT, EVENT

BRAIN STORAGE: P

SITCOM COMICS

INDULGE YOURSELF IN

SCHOLAR

SET A SOLID FOUNDATION FOR MY GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY

HABIT

NURTURE

1st: cost of living (village) higher price (hosing, transport, food) --> crime, poverty >< rural

2nd: air quality: public transportation, area (poor people live SLUMP--> worst air quality) --> affect respiratory diseases

Solutions:

1st: job opportunities --> make more money -> increase income + 3rd (accommodation) --> impacts

IN CONCLU

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HUYỀN MUN

INTRO: UNCLEAR

-PROB:

• air poor --> government (electric bus (vinfast company VN contribute to reduce the air pollution????)

• street/ pub trans system : overcrowded ---> government use -> invested public facilities pub ( elevated/ subway)

• Work: harm

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TA:

Difficult reasons ??? listing: traffic, noisy, pollution

Traffic (rush) --> noise ==> IMPACTS

----> SOLUTION:

SINGLE SENTENCE: AFFORDABLE/

COHESION AND COHERENCE -->

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THANH HUYỀN

Moving to big cities ---> disad

1st: traffic

2nd: poor quality: power plant, factories industrial development recent years

---> SOLUTIONS:

Solve: 1st: require public transport _GOOD

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MINH HUYỀN

High cost, traffic, pollution

• social housing -> high cost --- concentrated

allocate resource to rural area development --> equal opportunities --> reduce the urban population --> mitigate associated problems of urban life

• Traffic : big hours --> rush hours

PROMOTE pub trans --> meet the need of residents --> reduce the number of traffics --> carbon emissions from vehicles

• More pollution: Plant more trees/ cleaner --

SOME

2nd: control emission.

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COST LIVING --> financial hardships -> tackle: allocate financial resources into social accommodation (LOW INCOME)

Pub transportation --> Fee of buying (TAX) own vehicles

For ex: HCM city ( route - navigate Too specific)

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TRÍ:

Challenges:

lack of green space, pollution

create more ---- mental health --> physical (NOISE LEVEL)