Futures of NYC Run-Through by Jean Park https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg en-us 2024-02-15 17:19:49 UTC 2024-05-03 16:07:55 UTC hello@padlet.com Navdeep Badhan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979530663 What are some examples of how backward design was implemented in NY education during COVID-19?

]]> 2024-05-03 14:26:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979530663 Anonna Aditia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979531608 I like how Joanna used Kyoto as a comparison to New York's COVID education response, it showed what is similar and different and what can potentially be learned from each other.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:27:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979531608 Donna Wattimena – Comments https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979532367 Make the text bigger and try to make the text into bullet points or smaller in size because it is a little hard to read. It would be harder to read if your presentation is in person.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:27:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979532367 Nia C https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979532568 Can you talk more about being publicly shamed because of Covid and how that impacted social skills or mental health.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979532568 Aidan Pena https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979533374 I like the engaging conversation that I can relate to. (I haven't met my peer mentor once). The presentation was informative, clear, and covered a wide array of topics.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:28:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979533374 Shreya Kannan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979533878 On the last slide, I'd say to maybe split it up into two slides and make shorter bullet points so that it is easier to follow along while hearing you present.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979533878 Meriam I. https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979534011 The topics fit very seamlessly together, it would be really helpful if the point on peer mentors was expanded on.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:29:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979534011 Michelle Sosa https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979534337 Some slides are quite heavy in text. To try and lighten up you can put some words in bold to attract attention to specific topics. Overall, great presentation!

]]> 2024-05-03 14:29:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979534337 sydney johnson https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979534525 i found it really interesing to see the similarities and differences between the response of kyoto and the US and how the responses did or didn't help students! thanks for the insight

]]> 2024-05-03 14:29:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979534525 I really like how they did the before-and-after to show the effects of COVID-19 teaching, which showed the difference. I have one thing, which is just to make the text less wordy. SORRYYY (DIAA ZEDEIAAA) https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979535791 2024-05-03 14:30:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979535791 Sakura Smith https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979535933 I appreciate the time and energy placed into the design of the slides. Considering, the left over time you guys can expand a bit more on your ideas and points!

]]> 2024-05-03 14:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979535933 https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979539162 Anasthasya Purba

I thought the comparison between Kyoto and NYC's college response was interesting and showed the struggles from COVID.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:33:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979539162 Anonna Aditia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979542597 It's a lot of historical information in a few minutes, so I suggest trying to make it somewhat more digestible if that makes sense.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:36:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979542597 Sakura Smith https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979543624 The visuals on your slide are nice, I liked the green and white contrast. Having some bullet points, text, or images on the first couple of slides will make it easier to follow along. Especially, since it is a historically rich topic. The visuals started after the G.I section was really helpful.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979543624 Gina Celentano https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979545350 In giving the historical context, I think that it would be helpful to explain how the GI Bill and Morrill Act led and transitioned us to the context in which these colleges are currently being marketed.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:39:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979545350 Diaa Zedeia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979547281 I really liked how there were pictures and the slides were sweet and simple. Another thing is the timeline was a nice touch. It just adds a better understanding for the listener.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:40:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979547281 Aidan Pena https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979547519 I appreciate the time put into the presentation. I also appreciate the timelines and clear flow of ideas. Being able to see the events, dates, and information being brought up chronologically is both useful and informative.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979547519 Nia C https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979548247 I liked that you spoke about court cases and used visuals to show the timeline of important speeches and decisions made by the court!

]]> 2024-05-03 14:41:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979548247 Donna Wattimena https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979548382 On the "Morrill Land-Granting Acts" slide, add one or two bullet points of what you are saying instead of just the year to make it easier to follow along. Since each of your slides is different, I think having the same font (maybe having a unifying color scheme) will make for a cohesive presentation overall. 

]]> 2024-05-03 14:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979548382 Sydney Johnson https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979553372 I love how you incorporated examples as far back as 1800s and relevant examples from todays it shows how persistent this issue is

]]> 2024-05-03 14:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979553372 Joanna Chen https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979553951 I really like the usage of timelines especially since there is a lot of historical information as it helps with better understanding the information. Also the comparison of cases/acts is very interesting to see how something was good is now not helpful or vice versa

]]> 2024-05-03 14:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979553951 Navdeep B https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979555177 The timelines are essential for each of these topics, specifically the historical context and how that manifests to conditions today. Both first and third presentations have a big message at the end, for uniformity it'd be great to see that for the 2nd presentation as well (DEI)

]]> 2024-05-03 14:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979555177 Giorgio Wirawan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979555367 I like how the main point is something relevant to everything that is going on today. Just wondering how will you propose this idea to the dean during presentation day.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:47:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979555367 Escarlin Mercado https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979555504 it's a lot of information, I suggest focusing on the key points to allow everyone ample time for their presentations.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:47:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979555504 Navdeep B https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979562288 On the fence about not presenting the information about standardized testing on the slides. Although this would help audience follow along, the content presented by itself was easy to follow along and succinctly stated by Anonna which is great!

]]> 2024-05-03 14:53:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979562288 Joanna Chen https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979564848 I like the blocked groups as it organizes the information.However it is a lot of information, so splitting it into two or more slides might be better so the audience can see the information more easily.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979564848 Michelle Sosa https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979565145 Love the consideration of possibilities in the future section! I think if graphs are included maybe room can be made to make them bigger for the audience to see their importance

]]> 2024-05-03 14:56:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979565145 Diaa Zedeia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979565173 It was a very informative presentation, but I would suggest having fewer words on a slide since it would overwhelm the audience. I would suggest separating the information into different slides rather than fitting everything in one slide.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979565173 Giorgio Wirawan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979565570 For the past, present, and future slide, can you expand more on legacy? What legacy to be exact?

]]> 2024-05-03 14:56:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979565570 Shreya Kannan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979566153 This presentation is super detailed and informative, but the slides are a bit overwhelming and very differing in style. Making the slides more stylistically similar and more spaced out would be really helpful

]]> 2024-05-03 14:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979566153 Meriam I. https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979566164 The slides were very informative and concise, the speakers did a very good job condensing it. However, there is a lot of information/writing making it kind of hard to follow.

]]> 2024-05-03 14:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979566164 sydney johnson https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979572046 i loved your examination of how policies which are normalized in education are actually detrimental and discriminatory

]]> 2024-05-03 15:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979572046 Anonna Aditia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979591588 I like how you took us through the financial issues/crises and the college's responses to it, and how it affects students through things like work-study/scholarship/grants/etc., it makes me feel included as an audience member and student.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979591588 Michelle Sosa https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979593115 Great use of a range of knowledge! I think some slides would be useful especially when referring to reasons, years, different acts/titles, and monetary numbers

]]> 2024-05-03 15:25:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979593115 Navdeep B https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979594569 What is the average student debt a graduate has after finishing their higher education journey?

]]> 2024-05-03 15:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979594569 Giorgio Wirawan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979596490 Speaking of the current economic situation, does that makes college worth the investment if the graduates (if they did) ended up in huge debt?

]]> 2024-05-03 15:27:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979596490 Gina Celentano https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979598791 I found your solutions really interesting and informative and your background context helped illustrate the history of the problem and its evolution

]]> 2024-05-03 15:29:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979598791 Shreya Kannan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979600317 Very good information! use some more slides and visual content

]]> 2024-05-03 15:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979600317 Anasthasya Purba https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979600950 Liked the solutions you made, but would like slides

]]> 2024-05-03 15:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979600950 Nia C https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979601916 There was a lot of great content, but a visual aid will help keep the audience engaged so they can fully grasp this great information!

]]> 2024-05-03 15:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979601916 Diaa Zedeia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979608890 It is very informative and organized. I would just suggest adding some pictures for the audience. It would just make the slides more engaging.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:39:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979608890 Shreya Kannan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979609960 I like the way you organized your information, especially the slide titles like "Quick Insights". You should add some pictures because that would help grasp the reader. You don't have to include the sentence on the quick insights that mentioned the journal as you already cited it at the bottom

]]> 2024-05-03 15:41:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979609960 Navdeep B https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979611626 Love the inclusion of quotes highlighting the current landscape of affirmative action.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979611626 Gina Celentano https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979612637 All of the information was really well organized and the bolded words draw your eyes to the key terms that help highlight the main points in your slides

]]> 2024-05-03 15:43:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979612637 Meriam I. https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979613975 The information was very easy to follow along and presented in a seamless way!

]]> 2024-05-03 15:45:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979613975 Anonna Aditia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979614130 The layout of the slides is clean and easy to follow along. I thought the quotes on Donna's slides were a nice touch.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979614130 Michelle Sosa https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979614330 Great organization of information and images! Very easy to follow and understand as an audience member.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:45:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979614330 Nia C https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979614848 Lots of great information here and I think the audience will be really engaged when you present!

]]> 2024-05-03 15:45:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979614848 Joanna Chen https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979614990 I love the way the information is formatted, it's very clear. Talking about the future was really nice as well as comparing and talking about the different stances on affirmative action

]]> 2024-05-03 15:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979614990 Anasthasya Purba https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979615304 I like the information in the slides, the organization, how each section transitioned into each other!

]]> 2024-05-03 15:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979615304 Donna Wattimena https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979616235 This is gorgeous. You should shorten the bullet points a little more to make it easier to read.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979616235 sydney johnson https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979616784 i love how you covered everything important about affirmative action icluding covering the basics and nuances

]]> 2024-05-03 15:47:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979616784 Shreya Kannan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979623659 I think you could make a more detailed script because sometimes when people are speaking they jump back and forth and it sounds a little unplanned, but otherwise you had good information

]]> 2024-05-03 15:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979623659 Michelle Sosa https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979624092 Great explanations given for the bullet points! There is quite a bit of information provided. It may be beneficial for time to cut down some.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979624092 Giorgio Wirawan https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979624439 I like how you say "why not target the rich people?" when it comes to for-profit college. They probably try to reap more profit because the poor are less likely to be able to repay loan on time which means more money from interest. Just my opinion by the way.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979624439 Sakura Smith https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979624476 I like the simplistic theme used for your slides. Maybe making some bullet points shorter, so you can make the font bigger.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979624476 Joanna Chen https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979627899 The information is good but there might be too much of it. Picking the main points or a summary of each and talking on that will help cut down on time but still get your points across.

]]> 2024-05-03 15:59:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979627899 Escarlin https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979628724 I loved your explanation and the format of your slides as well. The transition between slides as each of you spoke was particularly effective and clear.

]]> 2024-05-03 16:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979628724 Diaa Zedeia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979631246 You did very great job of explaining and delivering the information, and the design of the slides is very nice and engaging to follow. Just try to summarize the slides so to get out the information as fast as possible.

]]> 2024-05-03 16:03:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979631246 Nia C https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979631681 The presentation was great! I think it could be helpful to focus on a few bullet points to keep the audience engaged.

]]> 2024-05-03 16:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979631681 Anonna Aditia https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979634583 The presentation is nice and simplistic and the information is laid out well, but some points can be shortened to get the message across more quickly and effectively.

]]> 2024-05-03 16:06:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979634583 Gina Celentano https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979635258 I think it might be helpful to shorten some of the text since it can be a little overwhelming at times


]]> 2024-05-03 16:07:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jeanpark23/o1tt6ztoafahlvrg/wish/2979635258