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      <title>Paraphrasing Practice Week 5 by Karen&#39;s class</title>
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      <description>Coo innovations and driverless cars</description>
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      <pubDate>2018-05-16 21:27:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Karen</title>
         <author>karen_fong</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Write your paraphrase....</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-16 21:29:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mitchell</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414757</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Bright (2017) notes that the situation of air pollution has been improved by some <del>valid</del>  <mark>clever</mark> methods being created by some city planners</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:22:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jonelle </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414774</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to Bright ( 2017 ), the levels of pollution in cities are becoming lower because of creative effective methods.&nbsp; &nbsp;<mark>OK </mark>KF</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:22:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zhou</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>As Ingenious&nbsp; <mark>clever?</mark>ways<mark> to address </mark><del>tackling </del>pollution are found by architects, designers and engineers, the environment in urban centres is becoming better</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:22:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mia</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414794</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to Cummings (2017), driverless cars are predicted by <mark>the </mark>industry <del>that they will</del>&nbsp; <mark>to </mark>be ready for <del>the <br>comprehensive development </del><mark>&nbsp;distribution</mark><del> </del>from 2018 to 2025. <del>He </del><mark>The author </mark>also emphasizes the difficulties and weaknesses of semiautonomous systems<mark>.</mark></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:22:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>DOU</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414807</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;According to Bright (2017), the air pollution in some urban cities&nbsp; <mark>is </mark><del>are </del>being reduced through some effective methods by city planners.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:22:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>May</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414809</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to Bright (2017), the urban airborne pollution is gradually <mark>being </mark>mitigated as city planners <del>have concentrated on adressing it through</del>&nbsp; <mark>have&nbsp; discovered </mark><del>creating </del>innovative strategies <del>, which leads to the improvement of&nbsp; </del>to improve air quality.&nbsp; </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:22:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Serena</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414819</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Cummings (2017) points out that these self-directed cars should be tested <mark>more </mark>in some small possibility accidents and extreme weather.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:23:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yvonne</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414843</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to Bright (2017), city designers have turned to focus on addressing air pollution <br>through creative methods for cleaner air.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:23:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title></title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414845</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Sherry</strong> <br>According to Bright (2017), <mark>covering </mark>the exteriors&nbsp; of&nbsp; <mark>buildings </mark><del>Vertical Forest</del> with a considerable&nbsp; <del>amount </del><mark>number of</mark> plants (a vertical forest) could <del>be attributed</del> <mark>contribute </mark>to <del>the</del> <mark>a </mark>reduction <del>of</del> <mark>in</mark>&nbsp; <mark>the </mark>dust in <mark>the </mark>air, as well as <del>release</del> <mark>producing </mark>a microclimate which generates oxygen and absorbs CO2.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:23:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tracy</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414860</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div> According to Bright (2017), addressing serious pollution in urban areas <del>to gain cleaner air </del>through utilizing creative methods <del>leads</del> <mark>has led</mark> to the improvement<mark>s </mark><del>of </del><mark> in </mark>the environment.  <mark>OR  improvements in air quality.</mark></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:23:21 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lois</title>
         <author>amire_lin1101</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414882</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to Bright (2017), making the air cleaner in urban centers&nbsp; <mark>&nbsp;through specific methods</mark> <del>has been concerned by&nbsp; </del><mark>is the goal of&nbsp; </mark>city planners <del>and addressed through specific methods. </del>&nbsp; &nbsp;KF</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:23:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title></title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414919</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Wesley<br>It is predicted by Cumming<mark>s (</mark>2017) that driverless cars will be pervasive between 2018 and 2025. <mark><del>However</del></mark><mark>&nbsp; &nbsp;but </mark>&nbsp; the fragileness&nbsp; and complexities of semiautonomous systems have been shown by two recent deaths of drivers of Tesla vehicles.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:23:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mike</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261414924</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Bright (2017) <del>claims&nbsp; &nbsp;</del>(<mark>this word suggests that others disagree...) &nbsp; points out </mark>that the dangerous level of pollution <mark>has </mark>decreased in some CBD areas.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:23:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Abby</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261415019</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Bright (2017) claims that the dangerous levels of pollution in several busy urban areas are starting to be addressed. The same author points <mark>out</mark> that architects, designer<mark>s</mark>, and engineers have concentrated more on deal<mark>ing</mark> with pollution in urban environments through developing unique means that improve the air quality<mark>.</mark>&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:24:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ross</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261415030</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to Bright (2017) , the air pollution in cities is becoming better because of<del> the tackling pollution in urban environments</del> <del>by the</del>&nbsp; creative ways....<mark>methods?</mark><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:24:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hui</title>
         <author>lsh571368116</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261415037</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Bright (2017) notes that dangers caused by pollution in some urban centres are being alleviated, as more attention <del>has been</del> <mark>is being </mark>paid to finding specific <mark>(clever?) </mark>strategies<del> regarding </del><mark>&nbsp;to </mark>generat<mark>e</mark><del>ing </del>&nbsp;cleaner air.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:24:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jill</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261415186</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>The pollution in some urban areas has been relieved through <del>focus on the prevention of pollution by</del>&nbsp; &nbsp;using unique methods which <del>is </del><mark>&nbsp;have been </mark>designed by Architects<mark>, </mark>designers and engineers (Bright 2017).</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:25:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Guang</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/karen_fong/o0dibj8io4yg/wish/261415340</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Bright (2017) states that <del>an</del> <mark>more </mark>attention <del>is</del>&nbsp; <mark>&nbsp;has&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;been </mark>paid by city planners <mark>in</mark> finding creative ideas to clean air, which has <mark>had</mark> a positive effect on improving the pollution levels.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 00:26:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title></title>
         <author>karen_fong</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[   ]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 02:54:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title></title>
         <author>karen_fong</author>
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         <pubDate>2018-05-17 02:55:00 UTC</pubDate>
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