Tommy A. Google Sites Peer Feedback 2021 - 2022 by Thomas Anico https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-10-04 14:45:40 UTC 2026-01-16 19:27:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3c8.png Sam G https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1800095388 I really liked your about me I thought it was very well written the word choice is good the way you wrote it in general is very well done, but one thing you might want to do is shorten the amount of movies on your list]]> 2021-10-07 14:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1800095388 -Jon Kohler :) 28jkohler https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1800096975
I also want to get drafted in to the NFL.
I loved your writing peace its realy realy good. 
I just fell like you should add more but its realy good. ]]> 2021-10-07 14:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1800096975 Evan Alvarez 28ealvarez https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1800651164
A strength in your About me piece is that you explain many things about you so anyone can really understand. Another awesome thing about your essay is how descriptive you talk about football. It makes it obvious you have a real passion for football. Although it was great i do feel like it was a tiny bit rushed. You could have went into detail about movies and why you like certain things.]]> 2021-10-07 18:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1800651164 Em Emmmmmmmmmmm https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1921164350 I liked how it felt as if you were telling a story, the way you connected with the read was great. I liked how you weren’t as sophisticated as others and it felt like you were talking to me. One thing that I would suggest changing is when you said, “I just thought they were being babies.jeez there being babies.” You don’t need one of those  sentences because you said it twice. 


]]> 2021-11-30 18:45:11 UTC https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1921164350 Amazing work, keep it up! 28azajac https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1923126825 Hi Tom! It’s me Adam, and I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your writing piece! One part that I really like is the lesson, because it is really inspirational, and it basically tells you to not give up when something isn’t going your way and when you are down. Another part that I really like is that you were describing things very well, especially the turf. You said it was very sharp, but then you said that the turf was a knife. I also really liked the part when you said that you felt like you didn’t have water in 30 years, and that you felt like you were in a desert. 
However, I wish there was more to the ending because it was so good. Overall, I really liked your writing piece, and I look forward to more from you!


]]> 2021-12-01 15:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1923126825 Jon 28jkohler https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1923131306 I realy like this one becuse i also can realy relait to this. I also like the way you described the grass. 

]]> 2021-12-01 15:54:02 UTC https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1923131306 Dylan Myers https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1925607047 You have an amazing piece, details are amazing and the way you described the turf really helped me paint a picture of your story. The description of the other player helped me understand why you felt mad. He was 3 inches shorter than you but you still got “pancaked,” as coach Troy says. I don’t even have a wish! You are an amazing writer and I already want to read more!]]> 2021-12-02 16:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/28tanico/o082omd303uduc0b/wish/1925607047