https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn en-us 2020-04-28 00:28:51 UTC 2021-05-31 01:58:03 UTC hello@padlet.com 7114180045 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/535129813 I like how you guys have a slide explaining how you analyse the topic question! And split the impacts into political/economic/social etc ]]> 2020-04-28 02:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/535129813 7114180335 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/535693709 i love how you guys were very clear in terms of your analysis of the question, and your approach in answering the question! the perspectives you took were distinct and you compared various sub points (political, social, economic, environmental etc.) with sources which made it your argument very understandable and convincing ]]> 2020-04-28 08:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/535693709 7114180335 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/535696232 perhaps this does not have to do with your presentation, but since you touched on america failing to keep laos and cambodia from turning communist, i just wondered what were the actual reasons these two countries turned communist?]]> 2020-04-28 08:51:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/535696232 7114180335 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/535699678 i think you did a great job overall, but maybe you could be a teensy bit clearer and mentioned right at the start and end that achieving one’s goal in warfare is the most important of all, because from your slides on the impacts vietnam seems to suffer more than america which may be slightly confusing to the audience]]> 2020-04-28 08:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/535699678 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537987044 i like how you use extensive details to support your argument and also split it into political, economic and social aspects which made it very clear]]> 2020-04-29 02:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537987044 7114180230 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537988738 i like how you guys had a very clear definition of the question! i think defining it well at that start made the presentation a lot easier to follow. good job!]]> 2020-04-29 02:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537988738 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537991058 how did vietnam and america accomplish their objectives in the war (to what degree of success were they accomplished) as the impacts aren’t really linked to this]]> 2020-04-29 02:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537991058 7114180230 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537991316 i was wondering why your "economic" and "environmental" were grouped together... while i do see the correlation between the two, i think it would have been good if you could explore them separately as well! for instance, was there any economic impact for america without considering the environment (since you guys mentioned that it was not as detrimental for the economy as the war had taken place in vietnam)?]]> 2020-04-29 02:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537991316 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537992683 you can focus more on the extent to which each country accomplished its objectives in the war, and whether accomplishing such objectives was worth the cost, as this will make your argument stronger]]> 2020-04-29 02:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537992683 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537992768 Your analysis of the question was thorough and you guys were clear in your stance. It gave the presentation a clear sense of direction  and made the rest of it easy to follow ]]> 2020-04-29 02:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537992768 7114180230 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537993728 i think perhaps y'all could have linked the sources to your elaborations a bit more! (rather than having an elaboration and then presenting a source that does not directly link to it; bc if not it defeats the purpose of historical investigation!) but other than that, the presentation was very good!]]> 2020-04-29 02:52:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537993728 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537998452 - While I understand your metrics (and would probably have also used the same one) it's a bit over-simplified. While it is true both countries went to war with a certain objective,  to what extent were they willing to go for to achieve this?  Achieving the objective isn't exactly an inherent "good" and maybe explaining why the objective is more important than anything else would have been good! ]]> 2020-04-29 02:56:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/537998452 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538000590 when you weigh out, you can use more relative comparisons.  (Eg percentage of soldiers who died/ time required for economy to recover) You have many stats which is good! But they aren't relative so it's hard for us to understand who suffered "more" for the various aspects.  Overall good job though :) ]]> 2020-04-29 02:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538000590 7114180045 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538145748 I think it was lowkey abit messy like halfway through i wasn’t following that well because I think you guys explored different areas of warfare and kept cross-referring to Vietnam and America all over again, also some of the slides didn’t have headings so i had no idea what the context was sometimes haha]]> 2020-04-29 05:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538145748 7114180045 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538146493 I think some of your parts could be more supported with sources and evidences, because the significant one I remembered was only agent orange and that was for social impact, the rest were not really quite so clear ]]> 2020-04-29 05:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538146493 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538593688 i think your stance was made very clear right from the start and you gave a slight overview of everything, which made your points afterwards easy to pinpoint/ identify. the signposting and how you split your points also made everything very neat. ]]> 2020-04-29 09:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538593688 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538596632 your evaluation was quite rushed and i feel like it could have been much more elaborated on, with much more analysis as to how each country managed to fulfil/ not fulfil their goal. ]]> 2020-04-29 09:27:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/538596632 ong_lee_hua11 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/539194157 Achieving the political objectives /political impact were more important in assessing the overall winner in the presentation? Conclusion in presentation that Vietnam won. What about the high cost (more than USA as pointed out in presentation)
-Cost worth it? Hence conclude Vietnam won

]]> 2020-04-29 13:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/539194157 ong_lee_hua11 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/539207876 Further explanation Economic impact and environmental impact]]> 2020-04-29 13:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/539207876 7114180147 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540642668

Inquiry questions were very clear

Discussed global implications (e.g. changed Laotian views of America, hence affected american prestige etc), sources were clear, overall well-organised information, statistics were clear and powerfully brought across their stands, very detailed

]]> 2020-04-30 00:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540642668 7114180147 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540643281 Perhaps you could discuss further about present-day implications?]]> 2020-04-30 00:37:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540643281 7114180147 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540644472 It was an awesome presentation overall, you could improve it by perhaps cutting down your info and sources to less but more focused points, because i felt like there was a lot a lot of info + sources :)]]> 2020-04-30 00:38:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540644472 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540714772 you were very clear on your stance and point of view!]]> 2020-04-30 01:40:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540714772 https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540716550 did other countries (eg. america) have a different view on who won the war?]]> 2020-04-30 01:42:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ong_lee_hua11/nzv6fdgijbz25rhn/wish/540716550