Home page:

I love how you added your name and a photo of you! Your second paragraph stating some facts was very intriguing and made me want to know more! All of those facts helped me learn something new! Your home page discusses lots of different problems and issues and i love how you added a “click here to donate” button! Maybe add a picture of a homeless person?

Photo Essay:

Your photo essay made me feel bad for all the people who have to go through that daily. I love your bibliography and didn’t know that 58% of homeless people are male and 42% are female! Maybe for the photos you could add an explanation to a few of the photos?

Research:

WOW! That is a massive paragraph! Maybe you should split it up in dot points to make it easier to read? I love how you added “what does year 6 think about homelessness?” It was really fun to look at the responses and looks like it took a while! How did you do it?

Call to action: 

Your petition sounds amazing! I totally agree with that and it would be a great influence to younger children. It is heartbreaking that a child thinks that about homelessness.. why don’t you add a link to your petition on the web sight so more people (me) can access it!

Bibliography:

It’s good that people add a bibliography, i think it is very important to credit your information. Thank you for making the title “bibliography and Padlet” because another year 6 didn’t add “Padlet” and i couldn’t find it!!