The War of the Wall: Period 1 by Joseph Peckham https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt Place the quotes anywhere on the page. en-us 2016-12-06 23:01:42 UTC 2026-02-26 06:17:38 UTC hello@padlet.com Precise Diction https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295407 2016-12-07 14:43:55 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295407 Sensory Language https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295484 2016-12-07 14:44:08 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295484 Descriptive Details https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295561 2016-12-07 14:44:19 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295561 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295740 "But the painter lady paid us no mind. She just snapped the brim of her straw hat down and hauled her bucket up the ladder." ]]> 2016-12-07 14:44:45 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295740 you'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kids' sweat. https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295768 This quote shows that the wall means something to the people living their and they don't want it to be changed. This uses sensory language because it is talking about smell.]]> 2016-12-07 14:44:49 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142295768 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296047 "It was like one of those old-timey movies."]]> 2016-12-07 14:45:31 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296047 You'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kids' sweat. https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296097 2016-12-07 14:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296097 "Side pocket came strolling out of the pool hall to see what me and Lou were studying so hard about. 456847 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296115 crown_g101]]> 2016-12-07 14:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296115 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296148 "The license plate on her old piece of car said New York." 
This is a descriptive detail makes the reader suspect that this is important for latter on in the story. This also makes the reader feel more suspicious about the painter lady.

]]> 2016-12-07 14:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296148 First Name and Last Name https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296181 Some good aromas were drifting our way from the plate.]]> 2016-12-07 14:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296181 "Later that night while me and lou were in the back doing our chores, we found out that the painter lady was a liar." https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296185 2016-12-07 14:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296185 "you'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kid's sweat." https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296200 2016-12-07 14:45:55 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296200 "The wall. Reds, greens, figures outlined in black. Swirls of purple and orange, storms of blues and yellows" 4289891 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296373 It thoroughly explains how the wall looks, and the colors that are on it.]]> 2016-12-07 14:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296373 You'll get a whiff of bubble gum https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296387 2016-12-07 14:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296387 Hauled her bucket up the ladder. https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296403 That has a descriptive and specific impact on the reader because that is a descriptive detail. Descriptive details have an impact on the reader because the more details and specifics you have in the text the more the reader sees what the writer is trying to show them.]]> 2016-12-07 14:46:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296403 sensory https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296420 Eyes full of sky show sensory detail as it makes the reader get an image on their head thinking of a persons eyes literally full of sky]]> 2016-12-07 14:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296420 "I butt him with my hip, and his elbow slid off the gum machine" https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296449 2016-12-07 14:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296449 "you'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kid's sweat." https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296482 2016-12-07 14:46:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296482 "The painter lady had found the chisel marks and had painted Jimmy Lyons name in a rainbow."This quote is impactful because it shows the painter lady knew about the death of him and dedicated the big painting to him which makes her really kind. It makes the reader feel sad about the passing of Jimmy Lyons and feel sympathy. https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296507 2016-12-07 14:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296507 The wall was slick with https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296552 2016-12-07 14:46:50 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296552 "The wall. Reds, greens, figures outlined in black. Swirls of purple and orange. Storms of blues and yellows." https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296572 2016-12-07 14:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296572 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296619 ¨ The twin with the red ribbon was hugging a jug of cloudy lemonade.¨]]> 2016-12-07 14:47:00 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296619 "some good aromas were drifting our way" https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296681

]]> 2016-12-07 14:47:09 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296681 Descriptive Details https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296755 "running string across the wall and taping it here and there."]]> 2016-12-07 14:47:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296755 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296775 "you'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kid's sweat."

]]> 2016-12-07 14:47:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296775 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296875 You'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kids sweat]]> 2016-12-07 14:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296875 The wall was slick with white https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296909 It gives the reader an idea of the wall, it makes them think a way that shows what the wall might look like]]> 2016-12-07 14:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296909 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296962 These are the flags of liberation]]> 2016-12-07 14:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142296962 You'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kids' sweat. https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297219 2016-12-07 14:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297219 "simply trieng to stay on a strict diet" is impactful because she's on a "strict" diet not a normal diet. 410284 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297280








]]> 2016-12-07 14:48:34 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297280 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297422 ¨You will get a whiff of bubble gum and kids sweat.¨]]> 2016-12-07 14:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297422 "you'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kids' sweat." https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297534 This quote shows that the wall means something to the people living their and they don't want it to be changed. This uses sensory language because it is talking about smell.]]> 2016-12-07 14:49:09 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297534 "simply trieng to stay on a strict diet" is impactful because she's on a "strict" diet not a normal diet. 410284 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297558





















]]> 2016-12-07 14:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142297558 The wall was slick and white https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298056 It gives the reader an idea of what the wall might feel or look like and I would say that this is descriptive details.

]]> 2016-12-07 14:50:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298056 Global.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298380 2016-12-07 14:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298380 Why is there more quotes than people in our class https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298421 2016-12-07 14:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298421 Global.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298486 2016-12-07 14:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298486 mhsssxudtkfuydtd https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298840 2016-12-07 14:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298840 kijyyyyyytsxxd https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298925 2016-12-07 14:52:36 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142298925 dont follow grace https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142299065 2016-12-07 14:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142299065 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783293 jolerjgfles]]> 2016-12-09 13:34:41 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783293 ndalnclksanlcv https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783314 2016-12-09 13:34:45 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783314 locsbdclbslcs https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783383 2016-12-09 13:35:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783383 "The twin with the red ribbons was hudding a jug of cloudy lemonade." https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783787 2016-12-09 13:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783787 sup whats happening https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783904 2016-12-09 13:36:28 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783904 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783963 2016-12-09 13:36:41 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142783963 wowowowowowowowowo https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784190 2016-12-09 13:37:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784190 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784370 2016-12-09 13:38:17 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784370 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784481 2016-12-09 13:38:36 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784481 "..leaning hipshot agqainst her beat-up car." https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784617 2016-12-09 13:39:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784617 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784791 2016-12-09 13:39:49 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784791 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784811 "You'll get a whiff of bubble gum and kids' sweat." This quote shows both sensory and descriptive details and this impacts the readers experience because it basically makes the reader feel like they are present in this story or scene. It makes you use your imagination and imagine as if you are present in this situation.]]> 2016-12-09 13:39:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784811 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784891 2016-12-09 13:40:09 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784891 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784926 Its global.chacha]]> 2016-12-09 13:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142784926 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785029 2016-12-09 13:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785029 GLOBAL.CHA.CHA https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785246 2016-12-09 13:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785246 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785275 2016-12-09 13:41:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785275 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785414 2016-12-09 13:41:52 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785414 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785702 2016-12-09 13:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785702 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785819 2016-12-09 13:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142785819 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786008 2016-12-09 13:43:47 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786008 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786191 2016-12-09 13:44:17 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786191 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786334 2016-12-09 13:44:41 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786334 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786391 2016-12-09 13:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786391 globel.chacha https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786453 2016-12-09 13:45:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786453 all of u are complete garbo ( ; jk chill 132959 https://padlet.com/joseph_peckham/nz9mf2w97gqt/wish/142786791

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