Writing: Show Don't Tell! by Eileen Chang https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x Rewrite each sentence to SHOW readers details! en-us 2021-01-11 21:07:55 UTC 2021-05-26 15:21:50 UTC hello@padlet.com I was scared. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559090123 2021-05-25 19:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559090123 I am hungry echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559179490 2021-05-25 20:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559179490 I went to the store. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559180109 2021-05-25 20:09:14 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559180109 I ran outside. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559180715 2021-05-25 20:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559180715 I went home. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559181043 2021-05-25 20:09:35 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559181043 She took out her pencil. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559181577 2021-05-25 20:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559181577 I was tired. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559181944 2021-05-25 20:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559181944 I went to bed. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559182587 2021-05-25 20:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559182587 I was excited. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559183271 2021-05-25 20:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559183271 The dog barked at me. echang138 https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559183917 2021-05-25 20:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1559183917 I went to bed - Brianna https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561747835 my eye's were starting to close as I curled up on my bed. ]]> 2021-05-26 15:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561747835 Brandon Schneider https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561749090 The dog barked super loud showing his mad frighting teeth at me.
The dog barked at me-]]> 2021-05-26 15:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561749090 i am starving and i need food https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561750263 Dylan]]> 2021-05-26 15:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561750263 Mia M https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561750493 I went to the car

]]> 2021-05-26 15:09:31 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561750493 I made origami https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561751177 I folded the paper into a beautiful swan. ]]> 2021-05-26 15:09:41 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561751177 Sarah ~ I went home https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561751188 I went home and I was so tired. My eye's had bags under them and they where heavy like grocery.]]> 2021-05-26 15:09:41 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561751188 Addie https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561752722 She took out her colorful sparkly pencil. ]]> 2021-05-26 15:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561752722 Samet A. https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561753472 My brain excellerated with cheer.]]> 2021-05-26 15:10:17 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561753472 Liam https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561754801 I can not wait to go to the amazing theme park]]> 2021-05-26 15:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561754801 Mia Rattiner https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561757249 Her silky smooth hair flew in the wind.]]> 2021-05-26 15:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/echang138/ny3l4v4xxw6ugx6x/wish/1561757249