https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3 One of your coworkers has sent you a draft of an email. He wants to know what you think of the email. There are numerous mistakes and it needs to be revised. How would you politely explain this to your coworker? en-us 2018-08-03 18:06:32 UTC 2021-07-10 09:21:28 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546002 We probably would give our point of view on how to send a mistakes-free email. For example; "I am not sure if do it right or wrong,  but if it was me, I would put in this way..... "]]> 2018-08-09 20:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546002 https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546134 Hi Sue,
 I found that you've got an amazing idea. I am really appreciate it. But, personally I think there are still some mistakes we need to review. So if you don't mind, let's discuss about it and we can review together and change some of them.]]> 2018-08-09 20:19:42 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546134 https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546186 Praise the good points & explain that you noticed some mistakes & ask if he would like you to correct them.]]> 2018-08-09 20:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546186 https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546191 Hey there, I am so happy that you send me the draft and I have looked over it. Well, you have done quite great and I personally admire your effort for that. However, there are some small mistakes that need some revision. I have underlined those part anyway so you might easier to fimd them. And just to let you to know that I would kindly be happy to hear more from you and review the revised version. Cant wait to hear more. ]]> 2018-08-09 20:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546191 https://padlet.com/wilson77/scenario3/wish/272546767 Here is an example 😉
Dear John,
Thank you so much for your email which asked me about your writing 😃
You are such a responsible person. I'm very proud of you and your efforts so far. This email covered all needed information and..... (However there is something which might makes it more complete.... -> then explain more
Keep doing great 😉
Let me know if you have any questions



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