https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv 8-324 en-us 2023-09-27 12:25:12 UTC 2023-09-27 12:56:42 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723024865 Based on the feedback of my baseline assessment my goal is to be more specific with my reasons so the readers can have a better understanding.]]> 2023-09-27 12:39:47 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723024865 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723025214 Based on the feedback of my baseline assessment, Some of my writing goals are to be more specific with my examples, better transitional words and write better reasons and details.]]> 2023-09-27 12:40:02 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723025214 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723025969 a writing goal i have is to get a perfect 100% on my next essay, another one of my goals is to get better at explaining my reasons so the person reading can understand it more.]]> 2023-09-27 12:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723025969 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723027079 2023-09-27 12:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723027079 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723027615 Based on the feedback of my baseline assessment some of my writing goals are to make sure to clean up my essay by adding more examples and double checking grammar. ]]> 2023-09-27 12:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723027615 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723028180 Based on what my teachers told me I need to work my grammar which like my spelling and where I put my commas. Also I hoped to understand the rubric more so I can get a 4,or a 100. ]]> 2023-09-27 12:42:07 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723028180 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723028976 based on the feedback from my baseline assessment some of my goals are to be more specific and add more detail]]> 2023-09-27 12:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723028976 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723029437 Based on the feedback that I received my current writing goals are to give better examples when I have essays during ela ]]> 2023-09-27 12:42:59 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723029437 masonw251 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723030377 Some of my writing goals are based on the feedback on my baseline assessment to get my assessment from a 3 to a 4 by adding more transition words, being more reasonable, and also adding more points. In addition, I should have more flow with my whole essay.]]> 2023-09-27 12:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723030377 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723031388   Based on the feedback of my baseline assessment, i have some writing goals. My writing goals are to make sure my evidence is static. This means that i stick with one piece of evidence without changing it. Another writing goal of mine is to restate my claim. This is important because in order to give reasons, my claim has to back it up. Finally, my last goal is to get better at making grammatical errors. Whilst typing the essay i found myself make way too much little grammatical errors.]]> 2023-09-27 12:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723031388 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723031692 Based on the feedback of what you said about my baseline essay, my writing goals should be better grammar and I should have worded the sentences better.]]> 2023-09-27 12:44:34 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723031692 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723032128 Based on the feedback of my baseline assessment, my writing goal is to be more specific with my reasons.]]> 2023-09-27 12:44:52 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723032128 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723032411 Based on the feedback my writing goals are explaining my reasons more and having better transitions words.]]> 2023-09-27 12:45:05 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723032411 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723032478 Based on the feedback of my baseline assessment, I would like to get a higher score and that score that I am aiming for is a 100%. Another writing goal is to use more high end vocabulary words and make it more professional.]]> 2023-09-27 12:45:08 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723032478 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723033203 Based on the feedback on my essay I think I should focus on being more specific in my analysis and connect it to my evidence better.]]> 2023-09-27 12:45:39 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723033203 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723033229 Based on the feedback, some of my writing goals are to emphasize my reasons and give more examples. Even though I had reasons, I didn't really explain them well, as well as giving out an example on why this is my home.]]> 2023-09-27 12:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723033229 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723035216 Based on the feedback of my baseline assessment some of my writing goals are to be more specific with my reasons and details. ]]> 2023-09-27 12:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723035216 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723035528 Based on the feedback on my baseline assessment some of my writing goals for the essays that I do in the future are supporting my claim better in my body paragraphs. Also something else that I can work on is my structure.]]> 2023-09-27 12:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723035528 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723036544 Based on the feedback on my baseline assessment, I strongly believe that I should focus on editing and reviewing my analysis, conclusion, and reasoning.]]> 2023-09-27 12:47:40 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723036544 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723039107 One of My writing goals is to get a 95% on the next essay.Another one of my goals are to get better at grammar like periods and commas and next time i would also like to be a liitle bit more detailed.]]> 2023-09-27 12:49:18 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723039107 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723040001 Based on the feedback of my baseline assessment, a couple goals I have in mine to achieve to make a perfect essay is to focus on my claim. Half of the time when I was writing my essay I was going of track and drifting a way from my initial claim. Next time I will Also use better word to explain my self. I was reading through my essay over again and reading through the comments on my essay and there where words that I could have said a lot better. I need to fix my punctuation.]]> 2023-09-27 12:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723040001 https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723053152 Based on the feedback i got back from my baseline assessment I have a few writing goals so i can do better next time. 1 of my writing goals would be to be more specific when writing my details or examples. Another one of my writing goals is to aim to get a good grade and to try my best for my next essay.]]> 2023-09-27 12:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/nxo0do2zm991dbbv/wish/2723053152