https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu Please write your name (roll) and a specific detail from the pitch under each box en-us 2020-10-29 15:43:32 UTC 2021-08-04 16:46:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874851598 used pathos by the tone of voice/examples ext. for ethos credibility by connecting to the audience such as asking the sharks their experiences/ also does a race with one of the sharks to prove how the box worked. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874851598 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874851766 Maybe the speaker should explain how the box was created like more of the history]]> 2020-10-29 20:37:44 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874851766 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874851875 She gives an example on how she was moving boxes for his friends ethos. An easy box that can be assembled in seconds making a boxing job easier logos . She makes one of the guys come up there and try to put a normal box together she also calls it sexy and makes one of the girls smile.]]> 2020-10-29 20:37:45 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874851875 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852191 She used a visual aid of a box falling apart and brought the actual boxes in to provoke pathos.]]> 2020-10-29 20:37:50 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852191 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852251 She used a personal example of everything falling out of a box she was moving.]]> 2020-10-29 20:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852251 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852342 2020-10-29 20:37:52 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852342 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852426 she evoked pathos from the voice perjection. And then she also used a personal example of everything falling out of the box. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852426 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852456 Used ethos in where she stated an logical personal story about the box with her friend and how she came up with the idea. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:37:55 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852456 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852621 She was talking a little too fast, like she was in a rush, and it kinda made me tune out. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852621 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852640 The race she did was an effective example of how her product works. It appeals to logos since it tested how easy it is to put her box together compared to normal boxes.]]> 2020-10-29 20:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852640 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852641 She could slow down a bit. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852641 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852712 She could talk about her boxes not falling apart to connect it to the hook.]]> 2020-10-29 20:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852712 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852723 she told a personal story which evoked ethos]]> 2020-10-29 20:38:02 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852723 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852864 tone of voice and energy is very contagious, makes you want to support her, pathos]]> 2020-10-29 20:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852864 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852954 Her tone of voice is very eye-catching. it's almost like you can never stop watching. She has humor and she seems very excited to share. Her visual is amazing. Connection with judges ]]> 2020-10-29 20:38:07 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852954 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852966 She could talk slower and be more expressive with her tone which would make the audience emotionally connect to the speech more.]]> 2020-10-29 20:38:07 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874852966 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874853093 2020-10-29 20:38:10 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874853093 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874853681 2020-10-29 20:38:26 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874853681 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874853939 2020-10-29 20:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874853939 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874855896 She used a personal anecdote at the beginning which evokes ethos, credibility. She was also able to have a prop, in this case her box, and one of the guys come up and be used as an example which also evokes ethos because it makes her project legit and shows us how useful and legit it is.]]> 2020-10-29 20:39:17 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874855896 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874855964 She had a visual aid which was her box and raced one of the sharks in setting up a normal box. She almost assembled hers instantly and the other guy hadn't even started. This demonstrated ethos because she connected with the audience. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874855964 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874856262 Something she can do to improve is maybe slow her pace down when talking.]]> 2020-10-29 20:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874856262 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874856279 She could extend the length of her presentation of she would talk slower. She also had a major advantage in the race because it was her product that she has no soubt used hundreds of times. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874856279 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874856620 A tool that she used was using personal experience which evokes pathos because the audience can relate to her in terms of packing up boxes. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874856620 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874858212 her hook and the body of her pitch were disconnected, one about boxes breaking the other about the speed of boxing.]]> 2020-10-29 20:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874858212 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874858511 Ethos- using a personal story, and then beating a shark in a race.]]> 2020-10-29 20:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874858511 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874861306 Her tone of voice was very energetic and it got you interested and excited for her product]]> 2020-10-29 20:41:31 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874861306 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874861438 She had really good visual aid when showing how to make the box, and how a normal box just breaks when everything is in it. This evoked ethos. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:41:35 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874861438 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874861991 She uses a personal story about her experience and in this uss she uses a visual aid, which evokes credibility and logic. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:41:48 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874861991 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874864945 She had a great visual aid along with a personal expirience which establishes pathos along with credibilty. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:42:59 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874864945 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874866313 she entertains the crowd by making a fun was to show her idea and addresses the "sharks" personally]]> 2020-10-29 20:43:34 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874866313 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874866427 Ethos: She showed the visual of the box/ Personal story
Pathos: her tone of voice sounds enthusiastic 
Logos: She explained how this could help the boxing industry ]]> 2020-10-29 20:43:36 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874866427 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874866642 She had a race with the audience, which isn't fair because she has used her box lots of times, I think it would have been better if the guy from the audience used her box, and she used the normal box. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:43:41 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874866642 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874866659 She should of included the cost of the box when comparing her box to regular cardboard boxes ]]> 2020-10-29 20:43:42 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874866659 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874867002 Maybe some statistics behind her box or other boxs compared to hers]]> 2020-10-29 20:43:51 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874867002 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874870337 She could have talked slower and been more enthusiasic, her voice projection looked forced. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:45:15 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874870337 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874871311 use more logos and slowed down a little bit]]> 2020-10-29 20:45:39 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874871311 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874871419 Slowed a bit down to help us absorb the idea of her product more]]> 2020-10-29 20:45:42 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874871419 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874872195 she could have had more statistics on the time that it takes for normal packing and moving vs with her boxes.]]> 2020-10-29 20:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874872195 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874872456 ethos. she used a very good visual aid with the box and her race with the shark]]> 2020-10-29 20:46:09 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874872456 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874872741 She can slow her pace down because she went very fast which showed how nervous she was.]]> 2020-10-29 20:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874872741 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874872949 She needs more info how the products work, can it hold heavy object. ]]> 2020-10-29 20:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874872949 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874873026 Something that she could do better is explaining her emotions of frustration when she was working with the regular box.]]> 2020-10-29 20:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874873026 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874873266 Visual Aids with the box, and strong supporting verbs ]]> 2020-10-29 20:46:29 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874873266 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874875597 she was moving way to fast!]]> 2020-10-29 20:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/874875597 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/884413654 good visual aid and supporting personal story ]]> 2020-11-02 23:30:56 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/884413654 https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/884420204 pace too fast ]]> 2020-11-02 23:35:28 UTC https://padlet.com/crowe72/nx7xjiv2nc1tmomu/wish/884420204