https://padlet.com/27nderienzo/nvorca8gv3vb53sb Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 15:53:39 UTC 2021-01-22 15:34:44 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 27tdreyer https://padlet.com/27nderienzo/nvorca8gv3vb53sb/wish/1067703438

Star #1 I liked how you showed how you changed from that experience.

Star #2  I really felt that I was in the hospital with you  when you walked in 

Wish   It would help your piece to read over it to fix any mistakes

]]> 2021-01-08 16:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/27nderienzo/nvorca8gv3vb53sb/wish/1067703438 27kchen https://padlet.com/27nderienzo/nvorca8gv3vb53sb/wish/1074573937 I really like how you added many details in your piece to describe what you felt. Another thing that you did well was how you wrote your lesson at the end of your piece. You said that you changed to be respectful and how you felt sad to judge people. A thing that you could improve on is to fix your punctuation. ]]> 2021-01-11 15:41:36 UTC https://padlet.com/27nderienzo/nvorca8gv3vb53sb/wish/1074573937 IsaacJim https://padlet.com/27nderienzo/nvorca8gv3vb53sb/wish/1093283201  I like how in the beginning you put so much effort into the hook. I also like how you compared yourself to animals.]]> 2021-01-16 01:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/27nderienzo/nvorca8gv3vb53sb/wish/1093283201