Senior Feedback- Focus Questions: Is this is a viable project? What is the cost associated with the project? - Is there a Demand for this project/product? - How many transactions are needed before profits are made? - Based on this project, how will the freshman determine their cost for each product? by Kristina Vasquez

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kristina_vasquez1 — 2021-11-05 19:02:50 UTC

Senior Name:
Freshman Name:
1. Is this a viable Project?
Answer:
2. What is the Cost associated with this project?
Answer:
3. Is there a demand for this product?
Answer:
4. How many transactions are needed before profits are made?
Answer:
5. How will the freshman determine their cost?
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6. Additional Feedback for Freshman:
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Beach Clean up

2021-11-09 16:50:10 UTC

Senior: Alano Felix
Freshmen: Henry, David, Quentin

-Good premise that's not costly
-Gives service hours for school as well
-Two hours once a week seems very slow and inefficient, maybe raise that higher,

To Sam,

2021-11-09 16:50:39 UTC

Great job on your project, really love your idea and I can see how much passion you put into it, just make sure that you finish up on the slides :)

Homeless help packages

2021-11-09 16:52:37 UTC

Senior: Alano Felix
Freshmen: Aaliyah, Adalyn

-Uniquely assists a demographic that needs it
-Donations help with how costly it can be
-Would need a much larger support or donation system to be incredibly effective

To Elijah

2021-11-09 16:53:34 UTC

Great job with your present keep going I´m really like where the project is going Helping with the animals is good.

To corbin,

2021-11-09 16:53:53 UTC

From:Darrel Hicks
Remember to introduce yourself
Good determination
good well organized plan
Overall good project just put more enthusiasm into your presentation and confidence at all times and you will do just fine .

2021-11-09 16:53:53 UTC

Senior name: Nicole
Freshman name: Martina
-Great research project idea, it is clear that it is a topic you are interested in
-Reliable mentor with a solid plan for success
-Not much demand for the project

To Aubrey Wagner & Kendall Kerr,

2021-11-09 16:54:14 UTC

Senior: Tripler Letuligasenoa

Impact: Community
Message: Too spread self-love and create a safe environment through leaving kind messages on rocks.
Learning struggles: Time, painting supply, procrastination and reaching the deadline
Learning Wins: Creates a safe-place,Unity within the community, core memories and art around school

🌹: The project was well thought out and organized
🌹: Affordable and Eco Friendly
🥀: Can become dangerous when used as a weapon.

Commentary: I really love this project. Throughout the whole presentation, I was able to paint a visual representation of how it would look. The need to help and improve our community is greatly smiled upon.

Helping the homeless people

2021-11-09 16:54:32 UTC

Senior Name: Alexis Atkinson
Freshman Name:Christopher Ceballos

You did great!! You wanted to actually help others and it is a great thing to help each other. This could help you in so many ways later on in life because you are making a change in someone's life. Donating is a great way to help someone.

Frosh peer Review-Brandon Brawley Freshman- Aleigha Tatum

2021-11-09 16:54:32 UTC

The project was very practical and beneficial for yourself/your future, and is full of opportunities . The cost isn't financial which makes the project even more likely to be a success. Time management will be needed, for example, a daily schedule to follow.

Making Friends

927998 — 2021-11-09 16:54:40 UTC

Senior: Daisy De La Rosa
Freshmen: Sky Flores
-Something I thought that went well in your project was that it had a good set plan
- it wasn't profit-based but more so community-based which I thought was a great idea
-One thing I would say you could work on would be to project your voice more when presenting.

Dylan Wohlford Volleyball Passion

2021-11-09 16:55:09 UTC

Good job on the passion project, it was awesome and I can totally see your passion for volleyball and how you want to help improve yourself and others. Still go for your first creative idea, it is still an amazing plan and if you still do it I would like to see it. Make sure you get your videos on your slide and everything turn in!

Savia Jones

To Joey Thompson, Alii Letuli

10411021 — 2021-11-09 16:55:27 UTC

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to look at your slides and seeing how organize and how well prepared you put on your own slide.
- Organize slides and amazing background
- Good introduction

- When you present you need to know what to say and prepared what evidence and what resources you use in your slides but overall good job!.

To Brandon

2021-11-09 16:55:46 UTC

Rose: I like the idea of bringing people together with food.
Rose: I like how you gave a specific number of times you would practice making the Lasagna before you actually started giving it to others.
Thorn: One thing I thought was a little unclear was how you were going to get money to buy the ingredients for the Lasagna.

To Mikayla

2021-11-09 16:55:55 UTC

Senior: Kali Cajala

- Great idea for the community
- Smart end goal because it is measurable
- Make sure to be specific with the product you are buying in order to make your products and set goals for how much time a day you will spend on making the brcelets

To Jake and Zakk from Jennifer Duffy

938478 — 2021-11-09 16:56:38 UTC

You guys have an excellent project that is going to do wonders for you. This passion that both of you have can be viable not only for the schools but for the community itself. Make sure when you are doing your project that you both know what is going on and are communicating with one another so that you both have an understanding of your project. Regardless, fantastic work from both of you, and good luck on your project.

To Reem,

927998 — 2021-11-09 16:56:45 UTC

Senior: Daisy De La Rosa
- Well thought out plan to accomplish the goal
-Great organization with all the information
- Have more eye contact when presenting your passion project

To Katherine,

2021-11-09 16:56:47 UTC

Good job on your project, even though you came late I think you still making good progress. I can see that you have a real clear passion for this and I can also see that you're working hard.

Take professional photos with a phone.

2021-11-09 16:57:33 UTC

Senior Name: Alyssa Apodaca
Freshman Name: Valerie Ayala & John Ritz
- Really cool idea to use a phone and turn them into edited photos to make books and showcase them at places where tourists stay.
- Can see both of you have passion for your project, make sure to express that when you're talking because it's very relatable!
- Check grammar in slide deck (ie; capitalize i's)

To Eva Maynard,

2021-11-09 16:57:44 UTC

Senior: Alyssa S
I loved your project, you have everything down including your resources. I can see that you actually want your project to succeed so push through and do it! :)

Sorayda Castro

2021-11-09 16:58:01 UTC

Senior name: Diana S
I thought that your idea was very unique. You were straightforward and ready to present just make sure to finish your slides and add more detail on your story.

to Kaitie

2021-11-09 16:58:33 UTC

i think it is a viable as the makeup industry is a vary high market and lots of people love to buy makeup. great job on your video and i can tell you are going to be vary good in being a makeup person. just make sure you finish your slides and find your admirer.

2021-11-09 16:59:07 UTC

senior: Alexis Atkinson
freshman: Heidy
You did so good!!! This is a great way to start a little Business now. That its great how you want to bring up you peoples Confidence with the work of art that they can do. Its also great how you want to start your own makeup line. Make sure you figure out a way for this to actually happen!!

To Christopher

2021-11-09 16:59:20 UTC

-Great job on your project you seemed very passionate about it
-Your idea is great and an amazing way to give back to the community
-Make sure all your information and slides are ready to turn in

2021-11-09 16:59:24 UTC

Senior name: Nicole
Freshmen: Kendall and Aubrey
-Love the idea of spreading kindness
-Reliable mentor and attainable goal
-More specific on how many rocks you will paint and your goal for the project from the beginning

Brandon Canales, Gaming

2021-11-09 16:59:29 UTC

Great job on your project! I really liked your idea of gaming. It was very creative. Your idea has seemed to help you develop new skills that will help you later on. Make sure to finish your project overall and be prepared with materials.
Senior name: Jackie Zuniga

To Mikayla,

2021-11-09 17:00:07 UTC

Senior Name: Lizette M.
Freshman Name: Mikayla H.
- I love the idea to make other smiles
- You never know what others are going through and this idea can make their whole day
- Make sure to find kind and inspiring quotes that can uplift others
Make me one of your bracelets ! :)

To Joey Thompson and Alii Letuli

2021-11-09 17:00:31 UTC

Great job on your passion project, I really like your slides it was well prepared and really neat. Next time when you are being interviewed have more confidence in yourself and on what your are about to say, overall nice work.

Inspiration Through Makeup

2021-11-09 17:00:44 UTC

Hi, Heidy I loved your presentation, You are very well spoken and prepared! I can see how much you truly enjoy talking about your passion! The only thing I would add is more visuals of your work! Good job.
Senior: Haze Harris

To Keean,

2021-11-09 17:00:52 UTC

Senior: Alyssa S
I really enjoyed your project, you love to make short films and I'm glad you showed me your passion for it. I liked how you want to start small with your project with a low budget, it seems like you have everything together, just don't slack and finish last minute! :)

Brandon Canales

2021-11-09 17:00:53 UTC

Rose: I like the thinking outside of the box by creating a game.
Rose: I like how you gave a rough plan of how you would create the game.
Thorn: I think you needed to do a little more research concerning what game genre it would be and if a game like that would be in demand.

To Bradley from Jennifer Duffy

938478 — 2021-11-09 17:01:07 UTC

Great job on solidifying what you wanted to do for your passion project and having everything that you wanted to do, research-wise, done. You had a step-by-step process on how you wanted your project to be done. The one thing that you could work on is not just working on the things that you can't do, but trying to improve the things, drawings, that you can do. Yet, be proud of what have accomplished even if it doesn't look the greatest. Other than that, amazing passion project, and I wish you the best of luck during the project.

Food Drive

2021-11-09 17:01:20 UTC

Senior- Leslie Mendoza
Freshman- Katelyn
Katelyn basically had everything she needed to make this project happen. She had a mentor, a money free way of promoting, and has a lot of time on her hands to make it possible.
-She was very enthusiastic about going through with it.
-Her presentation was amazing and she clearly explained how and what she was going to do.
- The only thing she needed to improve on wasn't based on her actual project, she just needed to speak up a little bit more.

To Mikayla Huffman,

2021-11-09 17:01:42 UTC

Senior: Tripler Letuligasenoa

Impact: Community
Message: Spreading kindness through leaving positive messages in jewelry
Learning struggles: Equipment, Time and budget
Learning Wins: improves individuals self-confidence, creates a safer/warmer environment and unity among everyone.

🌹: Put together neatly, Organized
🌹: Allow individuals to feel more connected to their environment and the people in it.
🥀: What funds will be provided for this project.

Commentary: This project was so sweet. I love how it promotes kindness and also self-love among our community. I believe this project can become a reality.

Frosh Peer Review-Brandon Brawley Freshman-Kairah Thomason

2021-11-09 17:02:02 UTC

You had an absolutely selfless and noble project you are pushing for, which should gain much support. The topic of charity hasn't been covered much, especially during COVID, and a new vision and approach to the subject is very much needed and viable. I'd heavily research the charity's you intend to support, as many are plagued with fraud, lies, and deception. Make sure the charity you support is credible and has a promising history.

Food Drive

2021-11-09 17:02:08 UTC

To Enrique Hernandez and His partner
The presentation was very good wouldn't say its the best because it needs more information and pictures. You guys need to be more organized on who is going to say is going to say what. But other than that if guys touch those spots up it will be a good source of information.

Sock Drive

2021-11-09 17:02:13 UTC

Senior Name: Alyssa Apodaca
Freshman Name: Brynn Clausen
- Awesome project, very selfless and helpful to our community!
- Good job determining locations to receive donations but also where to distribute them safely.
- You have a great plan just be sure to explain and show it on your slide deck.

Senior Name:Rheno Taito'a Freshman Name: Aleigha Tatum

2021-11-09 17:02:23 UTC

1. It is a viable project

2. The cost that is associated with the project is that he uses his time and effort to work with younger players to increase their skills, mentality, etc.

3. The project was nice and organized as well.

Bella Luis

2021-11-09 17:02:25 UTC

Senior name : Diana S
Your project is very organized and I liked the idea of the Kit Care. You were ready to present and you had everything ready. Make sure to record your video to be ready to present in the library.

To Hana,

2021-11-09 17:03:01 UTC

Senior: Mary Grace Paraiso
Amazing job on your passion project Hana! I like that your project doesn’t cost too much because you are reusing the materials that are going to be thrown away like soda cans or the soda can pop-tops.

I also like that there is not a huge demand but only trendy stuff. $5 for a plant by helping the earth.

The only problem that I am seeing is the price that you will sell your product. You should probably start at a low price and then make your price higher later on. Also, just make sure to finish your project. Other than that you did an amazing job!

To Julissa, Melanie, Melissa, and Jasmin,

2021-11-09 17:03:13 UTC

I found your passion project intriguing and I loved the way you introduced it to me. The focus point is clear, and your slides were full of information. I think one area of improvement could be calculating the costs of materials in order to fund-raise. You guys turned this into a group project so be sure to have everyone working on it equally:)

To Vicente aka Little Jose

2021-11-09 17:03:25 UTC

Your project was excellent, and your ideas to create passion in sports were great. The only thing is you need to complete your project and use images.

Martina

2021-11-09 17:04:11 UTC

good job on your video and project, i love your idea as im a sporty person to. i think it can all kids help them improve there game and when the game is on the line they can easily sink in a 3 for the game. just make sure your prepared for the big moment have have all your stuff together when you present.

Nutrition

2021-11-09 17:04:26 UTC

Senior: Arron
-Really helpful idea
-Research had been done finding out the nutrition of foods served here at El Camino
-Pretty solid idea of how to help fix the problem
-Definitely could use more work in preparing to explain it to people, write down questions people may ask and write the answers next to it, and practice saying them maybe? If that specifically doesn't work for you that's fine.

To Savannah

2021-11-09 17:05:40 UTC

I enjoyed your presentation, you seemed to truly enjoy talking about your project and i think its a great idea to want to start your own business.The only thing i would add is make sure your slides are completely ready to turn it. :)

To Sky,

2021-11-09 17:07:47 UTC

Senior Name: Lizette Mendoza
Freshman Name: Sky F
- I like your idea of making new friends with people who don't necessarily have any
- This also helps you to become more outgoing and social
- Don't just think of this as a class project, think of this outside of school or when you see someone who is alone

To Katelyn And Brynn

2021-11-09 17:08:01 UTC

You guys both had really well-planned presentations! Both are presentations were very well planned and had such amazing intentions for the Community! Glad to see you both enjoying pursuing your passions while also helping and uplifting others.
Make sure to speak up and enunciate! Good Job.
Senior: Haze Harris

To Girl basketball player

2021-11-09 17:09:01 UTC

From: Darrel hicks
Im sure we missed the introduction part because I do not have a name down but the feed back for the girl basketball player business you have a well organized plan and I like the determination and I hope it works out for you as you would like to take the project further in your future but one thing To improve is you have to introduce yourself everywhere you go.

Books for Our School

2021-11-09 17:09:14 UTC

Senior- Leslie Mendoza
Freshman- Daniella
Daniella had the amazing idea of starting a book drive to help give back to our teachers and helping people get rid of old books that they might not need or want anymore.
-She had a mentor already who was happy to help her with this project.
-It would benefit a lot of teachers, students, and people who have way too many books that they dont know what to do with.
-I think her presentation needed to be finished because she did have some missing things, as well as speaking louder, she was a bit shy.

Jocelyn Herrera

2021-11-09 17:10:57 UTC

Senior: Kalani Ayala
Freshman: Jocelyn Herrera

Well written and organized, you explained your passion thoroughly which is good because it is really important to understand the passion that you chose.

Just make sure you finish your slides, and add bullet points to summarize them while you are presenting. :)

Bella Luis: Kit Care

2021-11-09 17:16:44 UTC

Senior: Kalani Ayala
Freshman: Bella Luis

You did an amazing job on your project, you wrote in detail, completed your slides about your passion and have everything laid out nicely. Also you explained your passion thoroughly which is very helpful in understanding the ways this passion would become successful. Great job
Just make sure you edit the video and turn everything in :)

To Karen M. and Ryah

2021-11-09 17:16:51 UTC

Both of you guys have amazing project ideas that will both let you guys express your creativity. The purpose behind your projects are viable and will help other individuals view your topics from a different perspective. Your slides were also well organized and you were able maintained great eye contact and speaking voice. Make sure to prepare well before your actual presentation. You guys got this! :)

Senior name: Melanie S.

Lele & Macie

2021-11-09 17:47:28 UTC

- creative slides
- great presentation
- Finish slides

David

2021-11-09 17:48:34 UTC

- presentation was on point
- graphics were great
- don't be as nervous when talking and talk with confidence

Edward Dominguez

2021-11-09 17:48:42 UTC

* I think the idea was creative and true to what you're passionate about
* The slide deck was very organized and easy to follow through
* Try to have a more solidified plan on how you plan on marketing these items and creating profit

To Anthony

2021-11-09 17:48:58 UTC

Great job on your project! I liked the idea of your project. The only thing you need to work on is finishing your slides.

Qayden: Getting out of your comfort zone

2021-11-09 17:49:09 UTC

I like your passion project. You have a good presentation. All you need to do is finish up your slides and you will be good to go

-Marquis B

To Jamil Valdovinos

2021-11-09 17:49:11 UTC

senior: Jazmyn G
Your project was very versatile and you put a lot of time and thought into actually pursuing it. Just remember keep it short and simple.

To Qayden,

2021-11-09 17:49:25 UTC

Your project was very well presented and had very good reliable information that I understood very easily. One thing I would say you would need to work on is maybe managing your time on it. Good project overall though.

- Isaiah Tuipala

To Caitlyn K.

2021-11-09 17:49:37 UTC

Loved your project!! you are very passionate about your project. The slides were very detailed and informed. Good luck!!

Brianna and Yoselin

2021-11-09 17:49:40 UTC

1) Very good purpose/project
2) Good presentation with clear steps
3) Be more professional when presenting your project

Talani

2021-11-09 17:49:46 UTC

- Great presentation
- Great idea
- Make sure to be able to talk with confidence and know all the answers to questions when asked

Talanani Aano & Riko Wight

2021-11-09 17:50:01 UTC

1. Good idea very possible to do
2. Finish the presentation
3. great presentation voice

Luke Simpson: Yellowstone park

941305 — 2021-11-09 17:50:05 UTC

-Love the topic about Yellowstone Park.
-From the first time I saw your presentation wasn't fully completed but you were getting your main idea out there.
-I do advise trying to work on the project at home to get at the presentation down. Take it easy when writing your essay.
-Senior helper Milan Tye

To Christian, Abigal

2021-11-09 17:50:11 UTC

Senior: Jadyn Wade
Freshman: Christian, Abigail

-Organized and thought out
-Ideas that interest people
-Nervous when talking about the project and not completely finished

To Lele and Macie

2021-11-09 17:50:15 UTC

Amazing job on your project, it was very creative and I love how well thought out your plans were to move forward with your project.

Interior Design

2021-11-09 17:50:21 UTC

-Great presentation with great slide format
-Idea and how you will succeed with your passion is good
-Try not to speak as fast during presentation, try to slow down and explain a little more.

Caitlin Kuhan

2021-11-09 17:50:24 UTC

* I love the fact that you're a self taught artist and following a path that is true to your skills and passion
* Very lovely art work
*Clarify how you define success

Graphic Design Positive Post

2021-11-09 17:50:32 UTC

Senior: Isaias Aguilar
Freshmen: David Tovar

-Colorful, creative, and creative slide deck. Really grabs audience attention. Very good idea adding examples of his own graphic designs hes made.
-He needs to not second guess himself while talking, "but who knows" "I guess". Be firm and claim what you believe in!

Jahden Peatwarner

2021-11-09 17:50:36 UTC

I really liked your project. You came up with a creative idea and overcame many obstacles to accomplish it. Some of the text on your presentation was difficult to read, but that's easy to fix and I'm sure that you'll have a great final presentation.

To Jamil

2021-11-09 17:50:36 UTC

You had an amazing presentation. It was loaded to the brim with information so I know that you really enjoyed and researched your topic. You also had great presentation skills with moving your hands and making eye contact which is really good. The only thing I have to say though is you were reading like verbatim so I say just try and shave it down a little.

-Kaylon C.

Charlotte

2021-11-09 17:50:45 UTC

1) Very professional slides with a nice layout
2) Really good presentation, your steps to success are very specific and precise
3) Find more ways to expand your project and be more specific on how you will remodel the room

To Rihanna Barnett

2021-11-09 17:51:10 UTC

You know what you want to do and you have a plan already. You have a good passion project. All you need to do is get it onto slides and you will be good to go

-Marquis B

To Terran Seran

2021-11-09 17:51:16 UTC

Senior: Joaphnie Sanchez
Your keyboard project was really cool and interesting. I enjoyed watching your video and I thought you answered the questions very nicely. I'd just say to be a bit more relaxed when presenting.

To Miguel

2021-11-09 17:51:31 UTC

Great job on presenting your project, even though you didn't have your slides but you still provided me ideas how your project work. But hopefully, next time you will have your slides done

To Laila

2021-11-09 17:51:38 UTC

Senior Grace Seely
Freshman Laila
- great ideas
- wonderful solutions to the plastic problem
- don't rely so much on your slides to do the talking for you, if you add in more (rather than what is on the slides) you can make your presentation longer and more appealing

Jason and Hector

2021-11-09 17:51:41 UTC

1) Interesting project/idea
2) Steps to success are good
3) Create a presentation and include what supplies you will need in order to detail cars

Gerardo Castillo

2021-11-09 17:51:45 UTC

-I like that y'all are trying to prove that video games actually help people.
- I feel like this would be high in demand for students or people our age.
- You can try to be a little more serious

to miguel

2021-11-09 17:51:55 UTC

-good idea for presentation
-nice slides
-not enough work

To Lexie

2021-11-09 17:51:57 UTC

Really enjoyed your passion project, the amount of passion you put into helping people understand art and even show your art was amazing yet I would say that you should finish the final artwork

Dominic

2021-11-09 17:52:10 UTC

You had a good project overall, and it's really cool to see that you are already making progress toward your goals. There is certainly demand for your service, however I would take away a couple of the memes so people can at least take it a little seriously.

Wyatt

2021-11-09 17:52:12 UTC

Good job on your passion project, it was well thought and organized. The slides were also creative and nice to see. The only thing to really improve is to speak a bit louder and be more confident but everything else was great.

To Talani Aano,

2021-11-09 17:52:38 UTC

The idea of your project is good for you considering you play the sport so nothing should be too for you to figure out. Your presenting skills are good. One thing you can work on is finishing the project and managing your time a little better, with working on it.

- Isaiah Tuipala

To Alexander Gonzalez

2021-11-09 17:52:45 UTC

Senior: Janae Leovao
Great job on your passion project, I love how dedicated you are to help those in need. Just be more specific on what steps it will take to get there and finish the slides.

To David Tovar

2021-11-09 17:54:08 UTC

Creative slides, the fonts were perfect size to read and loved how it was in bold. Your really good at graphic designing and i know you can put it in great use for your project. good luck!!!

To Nathaniel

2021-11-09 17:54:20 UTC

- Your project has a very good motive behind it. The theme and organization of your presentation is outstanding. You just need to finish up the slides and to also find a mentor who could really help improve your skills and give advice for the success of your project/passion.

To Josue Cervantes

2021-11-09 17:54:30 UTC

You got a great ideas, your slides done well and I can easily understand your project. 1 thing that you should improve is confidence, your project is great so next time when your present it to someone, you should be more confidence. Don't have to be too nervous if you make mistakes, everyone does

To Charlotte

2021-11-09 17:54:33 UTC

You had a great presentation. Your slides were extraordinary they looked great. You were very bubbly and enthusiastic and I could tell you were really interested in your topic. The only thing I have to say is maybe talk a little slower because at times I didn't really grasp what you were saying but aside from that it was an amazing presentation.

-Kaylon C

Zahaira Tovar: Baking/Bakery

941305 — 2021-11-09 17:54:35 UTC

-First time we met yesterday you were super sweet kind.
-You had huge passion for this project and want to make people feel happy. Baking with your cousin and trying get a business started figuring out details good start.
-Try to figure out the cost of bakery or rent a little shop try your business out. Location and area choose business at will affect you positivity or negativity. I believe in you!
-Senior helper Milan Tye

Charlotte Delauro

2021-11-09 17:54:36 UTC

You had a very professional and well-organized presentation. I liked that you defined your goals concisely. However, you should add more about specific steps you will take and the ideas you have for the design of the room. Great job!

Nathan v

2021-11-09 17:54:47 UTC

You know what to do. You know who to ask when you need help. Just do more research on your passion and put it onto slides

- Marquis B

Anthony

2021-11-09 17:55:05 UTC

Dear Anthony,

Seeing how much passion you have for the community really inspires me to work harder. Explaining to me how much research and studying you did about trees really shows how organized and kind a person you are. If I may, I would recommend you find a mentor soon so you can be more successful with your project.

Sincerely,
Kiyo Anderson

Chase H

2021-11-09 17:55:13 UTC

I really liked how straight forward the presentation was. You had a great idea and turned it into an amazing project. The information was just right and wasn't too much to overwhelm a person. Defiantly add proof of final product, I would love to see it. Keep it up you got it.
-Gabriel S

To Angelina,

2021-11-09 17:55:27 UTC

You truly did an amazing job on your project. I really like that your passion is an ongoing issue that you can continue to change. I also really like your slide layout. It's not too serious but also doesn't distract from the presentation itself. I would just say to finish up those last few slides, but other than that, great job:)

-Kyylee A

To Anthony

2021-11-09 17:55:34 UTC

I loved your presentation and the whole idea of your passion. The idea of helping the environment whilst so making a community impact is a thoughtful thing that many wouldn't care to do. It definitely is viable though the cost is unsure, I'd say there is a need for it rather than demand. This passion seems to be a non-profit thing as well. Overall great job!! :)

Andruw Alston

2021-11-09 17:56:21 UTC

- Knew what you were talking about, which was really good
- You are able to sell your idea really good, and you have a lot of potential.
- Finish that research slide and then you'll be good.

To Siena J. & Japheth L.

2021-11-09 17:56:39 UTC

- Very well spoken presentation
- Organized
- Finish your project and you should be set!

To Noelia Esparza

2021-11-09 17:57:03 UTC

Senior: Janae Leovao
The idea of having a beach clean up for your passion project is great! I love how organized and creative the slides were. Just be more specific in how you will achieve your goals and what your opportunity cost will be.

Community Service Program

2021-11-09 17:57:19 UTC

Senior: Isaias Aguilar
Freshmen:

-He needs to learn how to code and be able to say confidently that he knows how to code before pitching his idea that REQUIRES him to know how to code.
-It's a very thoughtful project. Many high school kids are always looking for community service events to get hours in. If he is able to build his program that gives people local community service task, his program will be very successful.

Kaden & Eli

2021-11-09 17:57:31 UTC

Senior: Hayden Frappier
The idea of reselling shoes is a great profitable project and if done correctly you could make a lot of money.
-Great pitch and I liked how you guys mentioned how your mentor is a great help.
-Nice pictures in the presentation
-Try making more eye contact with the audience and have a nice strong voice

David mich: foodie lover/Chef

941305 — 2021-11-09 17:57:33 UTC

-I hope your passion project about cooking goes well I see huge potential from how much effort you put into the presentation.
-Food great topic because there is a lot of foodie lovers out there in the world.
-Another mentor is your aunt try to see get in contact with some well-known chefs to see if they will give you some advice.
-Senior helper Milan

Brennan

2021-11-09 17:57:49 UTC

Your slides were very well organized and thought out, a lot of the information was detailed. The only thing to maybe improve your presentation is to maybe add a bit more.

To Veronica Hernandez

2021-11-09 17:58:13 UTC

- I like your idea
- Your slides done well and beautiful
- One thing that you could improve is changing the words font, and next time when presenting you can speak more slowly for the listener to get more of your idea.
- But overall, great job

To Lexie

2021-11-09 17:59:08 UTC

Your overall project was awesome. I really like the idea of your project and how it will not only help others but yourself as well. I like how in your project you have spots that are for pieces of your art and even the video. You really put a lot into making this project. I would just say to finish adding your pictures and the video. Other than that, you did an amazing job:)

-Kyylee A

to lexie

2021-11-09 18:00:06 UTC

Your project was informative it was very easy to see how you were planning out on showing other people your passion. You had a really good purpose / project had good details and was complete in every aspect. One thing I would say you have to work on is on how you are going to manage teaching people and showing people to do art without any profit.

-Jose A

Victor: soccer project

941305 — 2021-11-09 18:00:07 UTC

-Love the idea trying to express your love about soccer.
-I can tell appreciate you want others play soccer and try get them play new sport that will give them good skills of collaboration and communication for sure!
-If you have any other mentors you could find like soccer coach at our school see they can give you any tips about your project and doing little bit more research how to get people interest to join soccer team!
-Senior helper Milan

To Lorenzo Romero

2021-11-09 18:01:11 UTC

Senior: Janae Leovao
Great job on your passion project! I love how creative your idea was and how you spent a lot of time researching all the different things that go into making your project successful. Knowing what your opportunity cost is and what you will give up to move forward with your project is something that would take it to the next level.

Dominic

2021-11-09 18:01:26 UTC

I really like the idea of your project its something that is way in your reach. You totally have a passion for this project and know plenty of information to make this project happen. Keep it up.
-Gabriel

Adrian

2021-11-09 18:02:13 UTC

Dear Adrian,

Similar to Anthony's project, I am proud to say that you will make a positive difference in our world. Already doing hours and hours of community service demonstrate skills that many people dream of having. Your family being your motivation, I hope you continue to pass this legacy down to future generations. If I may add one thing to work on, you could be more specific on what community service you are going to work on because it seems more professional. Instead of saying, " I do a lot of community service" , you could say " I pick up trash around the community, I help tutor younger students, and I help the elderly".

Sincerely,
Kiyo Anderson

Drawing on Plastic Bags

2021-11-09 18:02:43 UTC

Senior: Oscar Navarrete
Freshman: Ana Marie

Rose: I love your idea of reusing plastic bags to create visual art on them as if they were paper.
Rose: Although you didn't have the time to finish your slides, you acted quickly and gave a great improvisation
Thorn: The only downside to your presentation was not completing your Google Slides

Skate Edits

2021-11-09 18:17:38 UTC

Senior: Oscar Navarrete
Freshman: Matthew Leombrunl

Rose: I loved how easily you improvised your Google Slides when they were incomplete
Rose: I admired your quick response when I asked you a question based on your project
Thorn: The only downside to your project was not having a sufficient amount of slides

Mikayla

1040067 — 2021-11-09 18:59:56 UTC

- I love that you're so passionate about your project
- Your presentation looked really awesome
- Work on using less filler words when presenting your project

Leia Jacinto

2021-11-09 19:00:30 UTC

Scrapbook Project
- Love your project
- I enjoy your presentation
- Love the layout & the aesthetic of your presentation

Victoria

2021-11-09 19:00:37 UTC

- I love how confident and straight forward you were with your project
- Your project sounds amazing and I really think you could make a career out of it
-I would say you should maybe show a model or something that looks like what you are trying to build

Theresa

2021-11-09 19:00:39 UTC

- Love the passion for your project
- Lost of creativity
- Find a reason for this project. Like why did you decide to do 3d art? What will it do for the community?

Teresa

2021-11-09 19:00:44 UTC

-i liked your idea of 3D art, it was very creative and unique
- I enjoyed talking to and interviewing you
- try not to be shy or nervous when presenting

jasmin

2021-11-09 19:01:35 UTC

i really liked your project and the reason behind it. i think it will be very successful.
i like how open you can be to new ideas and the ideas you already have are going to make your project successful.
i think you should try to think more about the future and come up with a plan.

Manny Garcia

2021-11-09 19:02:10 UTC

I like your idea, I think more kids should play outside and be active. I like that you're passionate about this project. I think you could work on your speaking skills for presenting. - senior augie g.

Joseph

2021-11-09 19:02:19 UTC

- I like your project idea! i think its really cool that you want to teacher others how to skate
- I think that you could really do it
- I would say make a presentation and put a little more thought into how your going to find people to teach or how your going to teach them

Jolene

2021-11-09 19:02:40 UTC

-Love the idea to help frenchies
- I can see the passion you have for this project
- Try not to be so nervous but it might help if you have a solid plan with multiple ideas so you have an answer for any question possible and have no reason to be nervous

Nallely

2021-11-09 19:02:48 UTC

- I like the idea of your project
- You have a great plan to execute it and a vision of how your going to get it done.
- Be confident in your work don't fidget, and make eye contact
-Other than that great job

Matteo

2021-11-09 19:03:01 UTC

-well spoken
-amazing passion
-organization needs work

To Emerald Rey

2021-11-09 19:03:03 UTC

Great job on your project about pictures around the city. I can see how much passion you put into this project and how much thought you put in as well and I cant wait to see the final product. Just make sure you get the video and slides in on time! I know youre gonna kill it <3.

Aaliyah Hernandez

Julian Torres

2021-11-09 19:03:09 UTC

Model Homes
-I love how you want to take your passion of architecture into building model homes that can possibly help future architects.
- I also liked how you knew exactly all the materials that you needed and organized that onto one slide.
-Make sure that you go over the "stuff" that you have listed and make it more specific to what type of "stuff"
-I'm so excited that you are making it a Christmas theme, that's perfect!

carlos

2021-11-09 19:03:21 UTC

-good idea with a great intention behind it
- one thing to work on is to finish the project and work on public speaking.

To Anthony Nunez

2021-11-09 19:03:25 UTC

- Presentation was excellent, had all slides completed with a detailed explanation for each one
- Was very enthusiastic about his project and had a clear speaking voice
- A bit more information on steps to achieve the goal

Julian

1040067 — 2021-11-09 19:03:35 UTC

Model House
- I think your idea is really interesting and creative
- It's really nice that you involved your family into your project
- You should work on formatting your presentation so it's easier for you to read and more pleasing to see and read for your audience. Add pictures of your project!!

Jasmine Rendon

2021-11-09 19:03:59 UTC

Andrew's Project
- Very inspiration project
- Love the background story of your project.
- Think about your organization if there's money involve like is your organization a Non-Profit or maybe a Profit organization. Overall, I love it!

Alex Jacobo

1032859 — 2021-11-09 19:04:02 UTC

-I enjoyed his energy and enthusiasm to talk about his project and to me.
-Has a great idea that would be helpful to other kids and himself.
-Be more specific and prepared with explaining ideas.

-Gabriel Mangaya

Nalleley

2021-11-09 19:04:48 UTC

- Your idea is really cool!
- I think that you having your brother to help you is really smart and could really help you in the long run
- I think you could plan better on how you are going to sell your pictures and explain how that would work

Evanjalie Lopez

2021-11-09 19:05:01 UTC

- Loved the idea you had for your project, seemed very genuine
- Was super easy/clear to understand, well done
- Enjoyed talking to you as well, super sweet!
- Would just recommend adding more details as in what price each product will be, etc.

ava m.

2021-11-09 19:05:08 UTC

-amazing topic, everyone needs motivation.
-enjoyed talking about the topic and learning how you would piece it together.
-try to explain a little better and elaborate when you talk about your project.

Reese gordan

2021-11-09 19:05:21 UTC

I love skateboarding as well and think its a great idea to teach kids how to skate. I also liked your skate clips you showed me. I think you should add those in your presentation. I think you could work on your speaking skills while presenting. - senior augie g.

Ghecel Dela Cruz

2021-11-09 19:05:30 UTC

Passion Project: Journaling
- Loved the slides and how pretty they are
(⌒▽⌒)☆
- Loved how you shocked me with your passion for journalism. I think you'll make yours pretty aesthetic in a way that's very creative
-Take your time on speaking, try not to rush your words, and always stay calm

Ghecel Dela Cruz

2021-11-09 19:05:40 UTC

writing project
-well plan project. Had a good steady plan on how you were going to finished it.
-Really good learning goals
-Try to use less filler words; Also try not to use a friend as a mentor unless you know they can be non-bias about your word
(For example, if it doesn't make sense and they say it good anyways)

Jolene Plascencia

1032859 — 2021-11-09 19:06:20 UTC

-Has a creative and great idea.
-Work was organized and well-though of.
-Be more enthusiastic while presenting.

-Gabriel Mangaya

Summer Smith- Duck Feet!

2021-11-09 19:06:42 UTC

- I LOVE your idea of selling affordable charms and then giving away the money to a charity that needs it! It helps the environment and those in need!
- your project is creative and it is something that shows your true self and shows your true characteristics as a person!
- the only critique or thought is maybe once you know that your business is making money and the sales are going good, think of new products that your consumers might be interested in, but make sure that the making of that product isn't hard for you to do. It could be fun, like duck earrings or other kinds of charms.
GREAT JOB girly! Keep it up :)

Kathy

2021-11-09 19:07:17 UTC

- very creative and is sure to prove successful
-realistic, especially with modern technology making music so accessible
-grammar and spelling could use some help

To Sophi

2021-11-09 19:07:45 UTC

- Outstanding presentation, very detailed explanatory, and was confident presenting
- Had planned out the whole business that they were going to do and how passionate they were to achieve it
- Only critic is to speak just a bit louder

Kayla

2021-11-09 19:08:11 UTC

1.- I like your presentation it is very complete and you are prepared.
2.- you are very intelligent and it was fun talk to you, I hope see you again.
3.- The only thing you can improve is not to talk so fast, but everything else is good.

Brian Lopez

KeMonte

2021-11-09 19:08:34 UTC

* I like the idea that you want to make your hobby into a possible career in the future.
* I also like how organized your slide show was for your presentation

* The only thing I think you should work on is how you present your project.

Angelina Almia

2021-11-09 19:08:53 UTC

Passion Project: Jewelry
-Love you want to make jewelry cheaper so others can afford it <(￣︶￣)>
- It's Amazing how you did your slides and how you made your theme match your passion
-Try speaking louder when presenting your project. (￣︿￣)

matthew r.

2021-11-09 19:08:56 UTC

-dope topic, everyone should see how skateboarding is done and the process of it.
-i liked how you already knew how you were gonna go through with your project by teaching others who want to learn.
-make sure that you go through with teaching someone or it really wont be effective. get it done.

Mateo

2021-11-09 19:10:00 UTC

-I have a great liking for the way you set up your presentation, it is very organized and neat. All of your information is easy to find.
-I can truly tell that you are passionate about what you are doing and it is the first project that I have seen that is faith-based. Very unique!
-I would incorporate more slides based on your group chat idea that way you can show just how creative that idea is and you could also maybe add some pictures of the group chat.

Great job! :)

To Ava M.

2021-11-09 19:10:22 UTC

I loved that you are doing your presentation on motivation. You did an amazing job on your presentation. I loved all of the thought and time you put into it. I honestly don't have anything bad to say because you did so good. I cant wait to see the final product and I hope people try your tricks out. Make sure you get everything in on time! You're gonna kill it.
Aaliyah Hernandez <3

Angelina Almia

2021-11-09 19:10:24 UTC

Making jewelry
-Really nice slides
-Great plan on how what its going to be made out of. How it was going to be made.
-Try to be a bit louder there was times were you were talking and it was inaudible. Also try to go over how your going to sell this jewelry like how much, different prices from different material, to whom.

Kimberly

1040067 — 2021-11-09 19:10:36 UTC

- Your project is really creative
- I can tell that you're super passionate about your projects and movies in general
- Be more specific on your thought process when it comes to choosing recommendations. What about a movie makes you recommend it to someone who enjoyed a different movie?

Nallely & Angelina

2021-11-09 19:11:07 UTC

- Nice and loud enough to hear
- Amazing creative presentations with organized information
- Look more directly at the person that interviewing you instead of looking at the computer for most of the time

Fale

2021-11-09 19:12:00 UTC

-solid plan to get started
-cool presentation design, matched the theme
- just need to put plan to action and begin learning to create the game

Diego

2021-11-09 19:12:45 UTC

Do a kick-flip Project
- viable project
- good for the community
- Great profit strategy

Zidane Taduran

2021-11-09 19:13:27 UTC

- Seen it before its a good idea with the skateboarding is a good idea
- Using tricks is also a good idea as long as they are landed.
- other than that keep up the good work,

Great Job!!!!

Sophi Mocny

2021-11-09 19:13:39 UTC

Sophi's Sermon Notebooks:

- I enjoyed your presentation because it was both clean and elegant while also being playful and creative.
- I loved the passion you had for your project ranging from your motives behind making the notebooks for your church as well as donating a percentage of your profits back to your church.
- One thing that I would say to work on would be the money aspect of your project. When thinking about the financial aspects of your project you will need to think about where you get the notebooks and their price, the items you'll need for the notebook designs, and any additional details as well as the price your product will need to be sold at. I know that you want to keep your prices relatively low but to make profits, you might have to raise the product price a bit or find cheaper alternatives when creating your notebooks.

Angelina

2021-11-09 19:13:45 UTC

-Your project as a whole is very creative, crafty, and cute! I love your ideas on making your own jewelry and selling it.
-I love the way you decorated your slides too, they was filled with color and it really caught my attention.
-Make sure you are more specific with the costs of how much you want to sell in order to feel successful. (Also keep in mind how much it will take to make an earing, then determine the price)
Overall I love it !

Ella McMillin

2021-11-09 19:13:53 UTC

-You have a great speaking voice. Your voice is loud, clear and you fluctuate your tone as you speak. You also speak with a lot of passion for your project but you don't speak too quickly or stutter.

-Your project is both creative and informative. The background is vibrant and fits well with your visuals but doesn't distract the viewer. The visuals are great and on topic. Shorter sentences allow the audience to follow along without getting bored of reading along. It's also something you're obviously passionate about so when you present it, the care you're taking shows.

-Even though you have great visuals so far, I'd love to see some more! Show off your ideas and talents a little more to drive your point home, just make sure you continue to keep them on topic!

Great job Ella! Don't be shy to show off your project and keep up the good work! :)

Andrew Howard

2021-11-09 19:14:17 UTC

Passion project: Saving The Ocean
-I think it's brave to want to save the ocean by picking up trash and have many people volunteer to help as well (⌒‿⌒)
-Staying determined to do this is awesome ヽ(°〇°)ﾉ
-Don't be nervous as much and just relax.

Aileen

2021-11-09 19:14:33 UTC

* I like how you want to turn the thing you enjoy doing the most into a career
* I also like how your practice every day and are willing to get lessons to get better.

- All I have to say is maybe work on the project more.

Fale

2021-11-09 19:14:34 UTC

- I loved how visually appealing your slides were.
- It was interesting to learn about your online card game and the different aspects to it.
- I would just say practice more on presenting it so you can be ready for future presentations with it.

Jasmin

2021-11-09 19:18:30 UTC

First off, you're idea on helping students to be as stressed with work and you explaining your story about your brother is amazing and shows that you absolutely care about helping others when they're struggling with school.
I really liked how you kept eye contact at me instead of looking at the computer for most of the time. I think an improvement you should think about is other than helping students who struggle in school but thinking about helping others outside of school, meaning helping those who are struggling mentally, physically, financial situations, anxiety, depression, and so much more. But overall I think you'd be a great psychologist:)

Julian

2021-11-09 19:25:36 UTC

I like the idea of creating new friends by making friends that struggle to make friends. From the presentation I could relate on how I used to struggle making friends until I build up some courage to talk to people that I'd never knew that I'd would be friends with. I think something to improve on is eye contact, not getting a bit side tracked as I interview you, and be a bit more louder * not to the point where you're screaming* but loud enough that I can hear you. Overall this idea is a wonderful opprotunity to meet new people and create good connections.

Adrian Sandoval

2021-11-09 19:28:38 UTC

-Great project for my perspective, because it would help a lot of people understand the meaning behind the albums that they listen to.
-Has many information of what he is going to do and great ideas for future plans.
- He needs to do to pimp a butterfly!.