Narrative Writing GMAS Practice by Ms. Long

It was April 21, and Sophie, Veronica, and Maggie were playing hide and seek in the park. While they were looking for hiding places, they stumbled across a suitcase full of money! Sophie said, "WOW Jackpot! We can buy whatever we want!" Veronica looked worried. She was nervously looking around. "I'm afraid the owner is going to come after us. We should call the police and turn in this suitcase." Maggie was excited. She wanted to split the money between the 3 friends. "I wish we could divide up this money between the 3 of us, but I know that's not the right thing to do. If I had lost a suitcase full of money, I would want to get it back. I agree with Veronica that we should call the police and turn in the suitcase. " Sadly, Sophie pulled out her cell phone and dialed 911 to report the found suitcase.

2021-04-21 13:25:53 UTC

Mrs. Hauser

2021-04-21 13:35:45 UTC

It was April 21, and Sophie, Veronica, and Maggie were playing hide and seek in the park. While they were looking for hiding places, they stumbled across a suitcase full of money! Sophie said, "WOW Jackpot! We can buy whatever we want!" Veronica looked worried. She was nervously looking around. "I'm afraid the owner is going to come after us. We should call the police and turn in this suitcase." Maggie was excited. She wanted to split the money between the 3 friends. "I wish we could divide up this money between the 3 of us, but I know that's not the right thing to do. If I had lost a suitcase full of money, I would want to get it back. I agree with Veronica that we should call the police and turn in the suitcase. " Sadly, Sophie pulled out her cell phone and dialed 911 to report the found suitcase.

Mrs. Hauser

2021-04-21 13:37:13 UTC

Abraham Manis

2021-04-21 13:37:36 UTC

It was April 21, and Sophie Veronica, and Maggie were playing hide and seek in the park. While they were looking for hiding places, they stumbled across a suitcase full of money! Sophie said, "WOW Jackpot! We can buy whatever we want!" Veronica looked worried. She was nervously looking around. "I'm afraid the owner is going to come after us. We should call the police and turn isn this suitcase." Maggie was excited. She wanted to split the money between the 3 friends. "I wish we could divide up this money between the 3 of us, but I know that' s not the right thing to do. If I had lost a suitcase full of money, I would
want to get it back. I agree with Veronica that we should call
the police and turn in the suitcase. " Sadly, Sophie pulled out her cell phone and dialed 911 to report the found suitcase.

Kaiden

2021-04-21 13:40:52 UTC

It was April 21, and sophue

Nevaeh's story

2021-04-22 15:20:37 UTC

INTRO
One day in the court yard a girl named Sophie saw something shiny in the grass. She told her friend Veronica she liked it too. Then Sophie said finders keepers losers weepers. Veronica was sad because she liked the bracelet too. Sophie wrapped the bracelet around her wrist and she liked it very much.

BODY
It was a bracelet she picked up and said'' this bracelet is so shiny I love it'' but, the clasp was broken so she asked her dad to fix it. She was happy that she got it fixed. She thought about all the stuff she could do with the bracelet. Her friend Veronica dared her to keep it instead of putting it in the lost and found. So Sophie didn't take the bracelet to the lost and found.
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When the bracelet was fixed

makayla's story

2021-04-22 15:21:12 UTC

It was a nice day at the park sindy had found a braelet Iam going to keep it . No I said go put it in the lost and found NO iam going to keep it . I can not do any ha got it no got it back NO *run*oh.Now carter lile said I can't find my bralet I said do you need help I think know .I lost the bralet oh no.Now my Dad can't not fix it .Ican't find it.I fond it ! Dad dad can you fix it? Yes thank you.I said let go to my frend house ok.*Thay went to her house* We are here .ok I have to tell you someing ok.I have a nuther bralet ok . Nok nok did you need any thing ? Yes that my bralet oh sory I did not know it was your ok the End

Alex's story

2021-04-22 15:22:11 UTC

Sophie and Veronica finds a pink bracelet during recess. On Wednesday Veronica dares Sophie to keep the pink bracelet instead of putting in the lost and found area. Sophie feels evil to agree but she does agree. She is worried that something bad will happen but decided that she won't break the promise. Later when she was going to bed she regrets telling her guts to keep the promise she knows she is going to get in big trouble. The next day Sophie and Veronica asked Maggie what she was doing. She said she was looking for a pink bracelet. Sophie was surprised and said in her mind OH NO! Veronica said " Sophie found it on Wednesday and decided to keep instead of putting it in the lost and found area so people like you can find it. Maggie was mad and snatched the pink bracelet from Sophie. She said' When I have this bracelet I'll think of you stealing it.

THE END THANK YOU FOR READING!

Andres the sooper flower

2021-04-22 15:23:06 UTC

One day there is a sspeshol flower it can heel people Maggie had went to school and Maggie went to the park after school and step on pioyesen and got week wen she got home and all her friend and sad what happen she look's up what makes you week and the phon side poysend and call her friend back and toed her that I step on poysend and she knows the speshol flower and tode her friend can I trust you Sophie and ok I promes to cer you so she packet to go and find that flower and then she had call Maggie and side where is it and toed her and went where she toed Sophie and she fand bugs and snacks and she had to eat bugs and fish and or a long time she had FAND THE SOOPER FLOWER and it light up and had the cure for Maggie and she wont to eat it but Sophie tode her self Sophie you have sick friend do not eat it ok she tode her self and for a few days went past and fight the way out and got out and went to Maggie home and went she got to Maggie home she sall Maggie on the bed and DeD and qweey poont the speshol flower in her maoth and shakt and wock up and saft.

Celia Finders keepers

2021-04-22 15:23:34 UTC

One day in school maggie came to see what veronica was do . '' hi said maggie ''hi said veronica '' ''what are you looking for
''said''maggie '' my phone said veronica '' um hey guys what are you doing here said sophine ''for my phone said veronica ''want is that my phone '' said veronica ''um no this is my ph

Paris story.

2021-04-22 15:23:37 UTC

Maggie walked over to the store. ''What are you looking for said Sophie'' A Painting of mine it's a owl painting said Maggie'' I will look for it tomorrow said Maggie'' The next day'' Maggie went to Veronica and said have you seen my owl painting?'' No said Veronica What color It said Veronica'' It purple said Maggie'' Oh no I have not seen it I will help you fine it'' After hours they still can't find it'' I see it said Veronica!'' Maggie runs to look'' Oh that's not it said Veronica'' Lets keep looking said Maggie'' After looking looking and looking'' We should look tomorrow It getting late said Maggie'' Ok said Veronica'' The next morning'' Ok so lets keep looking said Maggie'' Oh we should go to Sophie and ask her said Veronica'' She said she don't have it but we can go said Maggie'' They go up to Sophie'' Hi said Sophie'' Sophie hides the Painting'' What is that said Maggie'' Nothing said Sophie'' Let me see said Maggie''

Dasira story The pink bracelet. Sophie finds a pink bracelet.She wants to put it on but the clasp is broken. She wants to return it but her sister want her to keep it. she nocice

2021-04-22 15:23:51 UTC

LEXXI

2021-04-22 15:24:05 UTC

SOPINE QUICKY TOOK OFF THE BRASIET MAGGIE

Brooke story

brookegray612 — 2021-04-22 15:24:11 UTC

Maggie come out of her classroom to the playground and she found a briefcase filled up with money . Sophine said that is a lot of money lets take it. Veronica said no let turn it in to the police Maggie said my mom is a police I will all her and she will be on the way. Maggie calls her mom and Maggie mom said stand back I will be on the way. Sophine said that your mom she came quick. Maggie mom said this is a dig under this money this may been here for years this was somebody else land in 1800 Maggie mom said make sure the teachers or nobody finds out. 2 Years later all the teacher found out and dig the whole little play ground up and we saw the huge diamond on planet earth

Charissa

2021-04-22 15:24:18 UTC

One nice day Sophie and Veronica were just skipping around and came across a phone Veronica said "Ooo what a nice phone I wonder who it belongs to?" Said Veronica I do not know. Said Sophie "Should we take it to the lost ad found or?" said Sophie "Uh I don't really know because you know I don't have a phone....." Said Veronica "Ugh okay!" Said Sophie So Veronica took the phone as said and soon after High school Veronica took the phone home with her and turned on the phone "I cant wait to turn on the phone!!" Veronica said with excitement Veronica said "Ooo its an Iphone 5 cool"But when she saw the contacts she said "Omg this is Maggie's phone she did not tell me she had an Iphone and she did not even tell Me or Sophie that she lost it well she has not been reporting to school lately well let me give the phone back" Veronica sighed and went to Maggie's house and gave her phone. Maggie said " Oh my goodness my phone where did you find it

Nyla the lost Dimond

2021-04-22 15:24:26 UTC

Maggie had a diamond in her pocket. and it fell out of her pocket. and then after class she found out that the diamond was GONE! so she freaked out. so then she went home. and she was thinking crazy about that diamond. so the next day Sophie came and said what's wrong Maggie and maggie said I lost my diamond as she said sadly . so then Maggie said do you have my diamond and she said yes I saw it on the ground and I got it and took it home. and Maggie said THAT WAS MY DIAMOND SOPHIE ! Maggie said can you bring it tomorrow Sophie said ok but it was nice having a diamond around oh said Maggie well you can have it I don't need it any ways thanks. you welcome THE END.

Lylah carty

2021-04-22 15:24:27 UTC

Sofia and the necklace. Sofia got a necklace from her big sis because Sofia sister was on vacation. She is sad that she is going on . And the thing is she found a necklace today on the ground and it wasn't broken. She was happy with the necklace she found. But grateful for the necklace her sis gave her.

What she decided to do was give the necklace to her dog. The reason is so it looks like the dog found it. When her dad went outside he saw the dog with the necklace in his mouth. The dad wanted to know where the dog found it at. The dog made a hole but did not put it in.

When she was at school she fell then hit her head really hard. When she woke up, she was in the nurse office and the necklace she found was gone. "Where is my necklace" She said. " It is on the floor broken" she said. Sofia got so upset but she was grateful that she still have her big sis necklace. The End

Jordyn

2021-04-22 15:25:58 UTC

Maggie said she do not want the bracelet because her sister is mean to her. Sophie said can I have the bracelet now. yes said Maggie. No I want it a loud girl it was Veronica I want it. No she said I can have it. Stop

zariyah reaves

2021-04-22 15:26:36 UTC

One afternoon Sophie seen a shiny ring. She picked it up and was amazed by the looks.She wanted to keep her friend Tori said no . So she snuck it.The next morning aebre was looking for somethng

Malachi story

2021-04-22 15:27:06 UTC

One day at Maggie school Maggie dropped her new book on the playground floor and when Sophie find the new book she kept it and when Maggie look inside her bookbag she did not see her new book so she ask Veronica to help so Veronica said sure so Maggie and Veronica search. Maggie search the book store but it was not their then Veronica went in Maggie class room and Maggie teacher was in the class room and Veronica said have you seen Maggie new book and the teacher said no I'm sorry and when Veronica sow Sophie singing in the halls and veronica ran to Sophie and Maggie went to Sophie and Veronica. and Veronica said to Sophie have you seen Maggie's new book and Sophie said this book and Maggie said ya that's it how did you find it then Sophie said it was on the playground floor then 10 sen Sophie said finder keepers.

Kyndall

2021-04-22 15:27:39 UTC

Joshua

2021-04-22 15:27:55 UTC

One da

it was sophie and maggie and verinoca they found a device sophie wanted to check it out maggie wanted to check it out to vericona dindt want to check it out so sophie and maggie check it out so they pressing all the buttons then it was making a creepy sounds so they ran away then they was playing hide and go seek maggie was the seeker sophie

2021-04-22 15:29:13 UTC

Mitchelle Story:

2021-04-22 15:43:53 UTC

It was a Monday Morning Sophie and her friends Veronica, and Maggie were play tag. Sophie was it Veronica was trying to get away from Sophie, when she fell and Sophie yelled, ''TAG your it!''

London Taamir’s story.

2021-04-22 15:44:07 UTC

`One day, Sophie and Maggie were running around playing tag, it was Wednesday morning at school in recess, then, they found a braclet, Sophie picked it up, she said : “ a braclet??, welp, finders keepers losers weepers!” Maggie said, “ we should turn this in the office, we could tell the front office lady that we found this-“ Sophie interrupted, “ no we should keep this and it should be ours!” Maggie said, “ no I’m serious we should” Sophie said “ no thanks I’m keeping this forever and ever and ever” the next day, a kid was crying looking for her braclet… the child said “ I wish I still had my bracelet… I diddnt want to loose it yesterday…” Maggie sees the kid and says “ hey Sophie look I think I know who lost there braclet! :D” she says happily, Sophie says “ NO I want to keep this… but… I don’t wanna make someone sad… SIKE XD” the child hears her and steps towards her, HEY! Thats mine… :<, Sophie says : “Oh really? You think so?” The kid says “ yes that’s my bracelet!” Sophie says “ oh… sorry… I diddnt mean to…” she gives it back and the kid hugs her happily and wipes her tears “ thank you… wait who are you?” Sophie says :” I’m Sophie… Sophie spring flower!” The kid says : “ thank you so much Sophie I’m happy that you cared I already know the other though her name is Maggie… right???” Maggie says : “ yes that’s correct” the end

Myla's Story

2021-04-22 15:44:08 UTC

It was Sophie and Maggie and Veronica were playing out side and then they were walking home until they saw a box that had a note on it. It said it had belonged to there neighbor so they went to there neighbors house and said ' does this belong to you Sophie said, the neighbor looked st the note and said yes they gave the box to them they were c

Karmoni

2021-04-22 15:45:46 UTC

it was a monday morning sophie

Cadice

2021-04-22 15:50:11 UTC

Look what i found! Yelled Sophie. What? Veronica. I found a ring! Said Sophie. Sophie kept the ring. Maybe it's been here for a Month or Year! Said Sophie. Maybe... Said Veronica

Miliese :)

2021-04-22 15:50:45 UTC

One day on april 4/22/2021 Sophie, Veronica and Maggie were once on a walk they saw a shiny seashell wow they say" Lets keep it says Veronica " we need to return it says Maggie" Lets put it back says Sophie" They lived happy from then.

2021-04-22 16:08:43 UTC

Andres

Paris

2000140653 — 2021-04-22 17:12:22 UTC

Mitch love's story in ''Finders Keepers''

2021-04-22 17:16:49 UTC

What would you change about this story?. Sofiah could have taken it to the lost and found then Maggie would have found the braclet that would change the whole story about her losing her braclet and crying. And she wont cry about it because she found it, Then Sofiah could not feel bad about it because she found it. But then she asks Maggie if her dad can fix the clasp and he did. And kept it forever and never lost it. And when her sister came back she made her sister a braclet. So they can be twins and they wore them ever after. And that is how I would change the story ''Finders Keepers''.

The End.

maggie and sophiee and victorah they founda deviceand maggie wanted device so maggie

2021-04-22 17:39:00 UTC

stole it and sophieh sade put it back now maggie sade no she ok fine and put it back

marion

2021-04-22 17:48:18 UTC

Joshua

2021-04-22 17:50:56 UTC

one day maggie lost

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2021-04-22 17:56:55 UTC

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2021-04-23 00:59:20 UTC

Chinua

2000135569 — 2021-04-23 15:27:44 UTC

One day during Recees, Veronica found a big box with a lid on it. She took of the lid and looked inside of it and it was a lot of fidgets in it. Veronica wanted to play with it and really liked it. Then Sophie came over and said" hi veronica, and Veronia said" hi back. Sophie said" veronica what is this box doing over here. Veronice" said I don't know whos it is but I want to play with it and Sophie said" no don't play with it you don't know whos it is. Veronica took one fidget and started to play with it Sophie took the fidget and put it in the box. Veronice said" give it back, Sophie said" no and then they started fighting. Maggie saw them and" said STOP FIGHTING! They stopped. Maggie said" those are my fidgets, veronica said" oh i did not know. Sophie that "veronica was playing with them and wanted to play with it. Maggie said" please don't take them again and then. Maggie said" you can have one of them veronica said thank you.

JEREMIAH "/ Boi

2021-04-23 15:27:57 UTC

one day at the end of school Sophie Maggie and veronica saw a device they all walked up to it they all was curios and they all said what should we do they Telled there EMOTIONS about it. veronica thought to not touch it and it belonged to somebody. Maggie had a sour face and thought they should not take it. Sophie was super duper exited and wanted to touch it Sophie had touched it and it made them rich Sophie put all the money in her bag but it lasted for 30 seconds and then Sophie picked it up and Keeped it. chapter 2 Sophie picked it up to take it to school but she droped it and it broke inside was a bracelet at first she was confused but she just took it. Sophie arives. she shows her friends and thought it was cool after that she explaind and said it was from the device. They were confused as well first then after that. One day maggie did not hang out with them. when it was recess we saw her she was looking around the whole play round after that. they walked up to here and said what are you doing she said she was looking for a bracelet she said. Is this it? Maggie said thank you so much you know what why Dont you have it Maggie said. Sophie said no why Dont you its yours after that they went to play and saw and random person and said do you wanna play and they said sure then they Waz playing.

end of story

shamya story

2021-04-23 15:29:21 UTC

One day during recess, sophie found a iphone 12 and then she picked it up and then she took a pic on and then she looked at the pic and said this looks so nice my phone can never take a nice pic like that phne the she found and then put in her pockit and then she said to veronica founders keepers losers and then veronica had a sour face but she just was sad because who ever iphone 12 that is porbele sad too because they can't found it and it was verv spicel to them because got from chrimes and when they got it hade a note on it and the note said I MISS YOU LITTLE SIS from big sis and then 2 weeks later maggie was looking in the lost and found so sophie come to see what she was looking for and so she asked her what is she looking for and maggie said her iphone 12 and then sopihe said this phone maggie got mad and said how dare you take my phone with out aksing me that is so mean and then you tuck a pic on it the next day sophie never took anything thing again, The end.

jayce cox

2021-04-23 15:29:53 UTC

marion

2021-04-23 15:33:00 UTC

INTRO when Sophie gave the bracelet back I was think what

Ian Desrosiers

2021-04-23 15:34:49 UTC

One day during recess, Veronia, Maggie, and Shoie, where on the playground and saw a phone then, they new it was a millitary phone. so Shoie ran towards it and Veronica thought is was dangerous. Maggie wants to give it back to the person. Shoie is happy and curious and wants to try it out. They tried to call someone and it did not work. So they decided to give it to a teacher so he could do something about it.

2021-04-23 15:36:16 UTC

de put it back now maggie sade no she ok fine and put it back RATE marion marion

2021-04-23 15:40:56 UTC

they found a device sophie wanted to open it maggie wanted to open it vericona dindt want to open in maggie and sophie open the device but somthing was wrong with maggie was hearing some creepy song sophie heared it to so they called vercionca over verionca was hearing it to they shut it down and put in the trash

Intro

2021-04-23 17:30:34 UTC

One fine day in the court yard there was a girl named Sophie

Name: Michelle

2021-04-23 17:42:33 UTC

INTRO
The ending of ''Finders Keepers'' can be different in many ways I am about to show you 3 ways how the ending of ''Finders Keepers'' can be different.
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The ending can be different if Sophie did

Name:

2021-04-24 03:05:11 UTC

INTRO:
The ending of ''Finders Keepers'' can be different in many ways I am about to show you 3 ways how the ending of ''Finders Keepers'' can be different.
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The ending can be different if Sophie didn"t give the bracelet to Maggie, the endingcan also be different if Maggie's sister came back and gave the bracelet to Maggie for finding it.
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The ending can be different if V

2021-04-27 17:06:45 UTC

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