https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb I en-us 2023-05-25 13:05:28 UTC 2025-12-09 15:30:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607194137 2023-05-28 14:25:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607194137 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607506327 Dads feedback:www(1)good control of exitment www(2)story build up ebi(1)punctuation ebi(2)spelling]]> 2023-05-29 03:34:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607506327 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607863564 Punctuation was in its place
EBI:Capital letters need to be in its place

]]> 2023-05-29 12:44:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607863564 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607895755 2023-05-29 13:26:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607895755 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607902511 Parents feedback
1www:nice descriptive story
2www:very imaginative]]> 2023-05-29 13:35:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607902511 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607906254 1ebi:some parts made sense 
 2ebi: using the right punctuation ]]> 2023-05-29 13:39:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607906254 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607960752 Ww- excellent imagination 
Ww- detailed description put in words 

Ebi- spellings mistakes and more expressions would have been nice.]]> 2023-05-29 14:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607960752 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607994783 WWW: it was captivating 
WWW: Well structured 
WWW: Highly imaginative 
EBI: it can be a bit more dramatic. 
Zarr Shahid 5N]]> 2023-05-29 15:35:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2607994783 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608019829 www:Flowency is good.
www:Also accent Is good.
Ebi:Need expressions.
Ebi:And handwriting.]]> 2023-05-29 16:13:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608019829 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608042491 (1)WWW: You have included a lot of high-level vocabulary. (2)WWW: Your story makes sense and it flows well.
(1)EBI: You could have used personification to create more drama. (2) EBI: Your sentences could have been more elaborated.]]> 2023-05-29 16:42:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608042491 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608051857 WWW: a lot of events were covered in short spam

EBI: more elaboration on the plane’s emergency landing would have been nice]]> 2023-05-29 16:56:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608051857 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608081870 Dad : www- your story flows well and has high vocabulary 
EBI-you could try and work on your writing speed
Mom: www-you have made the reader feel like they were a part of the story and you have used many adjectives in your work
EBI-you could use more metaphors and the five senses ]]> 2023-05-29 17:40:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608081870 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608089815 1)WWW: Good content 
2)WWW: Good way of explaining people’s experience 

1)EBI: Avoid capital letters in the middle of the sentences 
2)EBI: Check punctuations]]> 2023-05-29 17:52:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608089815 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608492341 Www:the adventure was exciting and good adjectives


Ebi: if the ending was more interesting ]]> 2023-05-30 02:54:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2608492341 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2609391534 Www 1.Good imagination.
2.descriptive skills was upgraded.
Ebi
1.More details and punctuation.]]> 2023-05-30 17:05:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2609391534 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2609410102 WWWNo.1)Story makes sense and developes hard work
WWWNo.2)It builds up to a scene in the sentence
EBINo.1)you could fix your handwriting
EBINo.2) you could add less dialogue ]]> 2023-05-30 17:24:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2609410102 https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2610748427 The story is nice but has some spelling mistakes that has to be addressed and enhanced. The moral as well as the journey of the story is creative with tragedies and a happy ending fulfilling the chapters of the story. ]]> 2023-05-31 16:33:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ramesh_nagalakshmi/ntdhe3e79h1fq5sb/wish/2610748427