Comments, Harris Burdick Stories, 1st Hour by Schutz

Comments, Harris Burdick Stories, 1st Hour by Schutz https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf Made with panache en-us 2016-09-30 15:53:13 UTC 2025-11-23 16:50:12 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Hearts.png Group's Name schutzandi https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/127572144 I really liked your conclusion. I think you did a good job interpreting the picture. - Miss. Schutz

]]> 2016-09-30 16:01:47 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/127572144 Uninvited Guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157312 Good details about character and setting.
-Piper]]> 2016-10-04 13:31:13 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157312 Uninvited guest https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157370 I like the setting details- Shannon

]]> 2016-10-04 13:31:20 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157370 Uninvited guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157447 I liked how detailed it was. You did a job of painting a picture of what was happening -Marley]]> 2016-10-04 13:31:30 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157447 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157552 2016-10-04 13:31:42 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157552 Uninvited Guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157697 Good detail in the beginning. Good setting details. "Dead as a door nail" nice simile.
-Angelina]]> 2016-10-04 13:32:01 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157697 Uninvited Gue https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157710 Really good descriptive words. - Hadley]]> 2016-10-04 13:32:02 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157710 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157839 2016-10-04 13:32:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157839 Uninvited guest https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157941 The story was funny. Zach]]> 2016-10-04 13:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157941 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157963 2016-10-04 13:32:31 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128157963 Uninvited guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158071 Story was great!
Love the plot and character!! 👍]]> 2016-10-04 13:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158071 uninvited guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158097 I like how you described Joe and gave backstory.
Sarah]]> 2016-10-04 13:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158097 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158162 2016-10-04 13:32:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158162 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158311 2016-10-04 13:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158311 Univited Guest https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158520 Nice exposition!
Some good description -hot chocolate before bed
sad resolution
Mrs. S]]> 2016-10-04 13:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158520 Uninvited guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158525 Lots of amazing detail and amazing imagination
Aliana]]> 2016-10-04 13:33:45 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158525 Univited Guest https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158564 2016-10-04 13:33:49 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158564 Uninvited guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158859 You did a good job explaining everything.

]]> 2016-10-04 13:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128158859 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128159393 I like like you r details]]> 2016-10-04 13:35:31 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128159393 Uninvited guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128159905 I like the X wife's name

-George]]> 2016-10-04 13:36:30 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128159905 Uninvited Guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128160540 Good description and good word choices -
Callie]]> 2016-10-04 13:37:47 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128160540 Uninvited Guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128160703 I like how there were lots of details]]> 2016-10-04 13:38:04 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128160703 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128160813 It was a sad story ]]> 2016-10-04 13:38:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128160813 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161219 It was it was very interesting with a lot of good detail]]> 2016-10-04 13:39:08 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161219 Uninvited Guest https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161313 I really liked all of your details-Ryan]]> 2016-10-04 13:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161313 Uninvited Guests https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161408 I loved the drama with ex wife, and the story had lots
of details.
-Allison]]> 2016-10-04 13:39:29 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161408 7 Chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161769 I adored the backstory of the chair, it was scary yet interesting and gave me the chills!! ]]> 2016-10-04 13:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161769 The seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161868 I liked the paranormal elements- Ryan]]> 2016-10-04 13:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161868 The Seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161897 The chair ideas were good, it has a lot of good detail.

]]> 2016-10-04 13:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161897 The Seven Chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161911 I like the mystery of the chairs at the beginning of the story. -Hadley]]> 2016-10-04 13:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161911 The Seven Chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161996 Good details and background info. Fast ending. -Angelina]]> 2016-10-04 13:40:29 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128161996 Seven Chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162235 nice sentence fluency
Mrs. S]]> 2016-10-04 13:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162235 The 7 chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162257 I like the plot and how the chairs were paranormal! - shannon]]> 2016-10-04 13:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162257 Seven Chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162288 I love the mystery about how the chairs change. And I liked the search for the chairs to put them home.
-Allison ]]> 2016-10-04 13:40:57 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162288 Seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162324 It has a good story line.
Zach]]> 2016-10-04 13:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162324 7 chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162360 Good description ]]> 2016-10-04 13:41:04 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162360 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162388 The seven chairs]]> 2016-10-04 13:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162388 The Seven Chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162438 Nice story idea with lots of details. -Piper]]> 2016-10-04 13:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162438 The seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162491 I like your word choice, and how the chairs connected to their owners

]]> 2016-10-04 13:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162491 Uninvited guest https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162505 Interesting story

]]> 2016-10-04 13:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162505 The 7 chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162557 Good description of words
Caleb]]> 2016-10-04 13:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162557 The seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162759 2016-10-04 13:41:53 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162759 the seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162767 I like how the chairs connect with the famaly

-George

]]> 2016-10-04 13:41:54 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162767 The seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162984 I like the beginning
And detail
Aliana]]> 2016-10-04 13:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128162984 Seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128163020 I liked the part when you were explaining about the chairs and how they were all different -Marley ]]> 2016-10-04 13:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128163020 The seven chairs great story!!!! Long and very explaining https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128163107 2016-10-04 13:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128163107 Seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164029 Great story. Good explination]]> 2016-10-04 13:44:12 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164029 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164037 Seven chairs
Is great

]]> 2016-10-04 13:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164037 Seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164247 Great writing style of description

]]> 2016-10-04 13:44:39 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164247 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164591 Good dialogue and description. I like how the ending is just a dream. -Hadley]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:19 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164591 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164640 Good dialogue. Short introduction was good. Good ending. -Angelina]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:25 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164640 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164683 There was so much detail and the story sounded really professional -Marley ]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:29 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164683 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164753 I like the name and how he dosent want to be a pirate it's very realistic

-George]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:37 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164753 Captian https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164805 I like how you included dialogue, it sets you apart from the other stories.
Sarah]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164805 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164860 I love the backstory about Victor.
-Allison ]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164860 tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164873 Good story line]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:50 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164873 captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164923 I like how this story just has a very nice plot line

]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:55 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164923 Captain Tori https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164966 Good plot, I liked how it ended - Addeline]]> 2016-10-04 13:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128164966 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165028 Great description of words and interesting story
Caleb]]> 2016-10-04 13:46:06 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165028 Captain tori https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165120 I like your choice of dialogue - shannon

]]> 2016-10-04 13:46:16 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165120 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165151 Good use of dialogue.
Nice description of the boat in the fog
Mrs. S]]> 2016-10-04 13:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165151 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165403 Nice word choice, very enjoyable story]]> 2016-10-04 13:46:45 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165403 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165449 You have good word choice.]]> 2016-10-04 13:46:50 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165449 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165674 Good description-Ryan]]> 2016-10-04 13:47:14 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165674 Captain tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165682 The twist at the end is a good idea]]> 2016-10-04 13:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165682 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165773 I like the dialogue -Piper]]> 2016-10-04 13:47:24 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165773 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165783 Capitan Tory. It was good]]> 2016-10-04 13:47:25 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165783 The Seven Chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165820 Good mystery - callie]]> 2016-10-04 13:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128165820 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166054 Good

]]> 2016-10-04 13:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166054 Captain https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166070 I like the story
Zach]]> 2016-10-04 13:48:01 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166070 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166340 I liked the character descriptions - Callie]]> 2016-10-04 13:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166340 Under the Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166392 Good dialogue
Leprechaun is a cute touch
Mrs. S

]]> 2016-10-04 13:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166392 Under the Rug — Billy&Ryan https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166433 I like how you used alternative words instead of "said" -K8]]> 2016-10-04 13:48:41 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166433 Under the Rug group #1 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166483 I like the dialogue in the story. And the details are very descriptive.
-Allison]]> 2016-10-04 13:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166483 Under The Rug  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166493 Good humor in the story. -Hadley]]> 2016-10-04 13:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166493 Ryan, Billy, Zachary Under the Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166584 I like the small amount of humor and good action. Good dialogue. -Angelina]]> 2016-10-04 13:48:59 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166584 Under under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166709 The dialogue in the beginning adds a strong voice to the story, and I like the way you gave context.

]]> 2016-10-04 13:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166709 Under the Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166710 The dialogue is really good -callie]]> 2016-10-04 13:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166710 Under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166741 I like the dialogue use and story line
Aliana]]> 2016-10-04 13:49:19 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166741 Under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166839 Really interesting ]]> 2016-10-04 13:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128166839 Under The Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167032 I like the leprechaun very funny

-George]]> 2016-10-04 13:49:54 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167032 Ryan, Billy, Zachary under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167045 I liked The dialogue and the humor. -Marley]]> 2016-10-04 13:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167045 Under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167076 Good word choice.]]> 2016-10-04 13:49:59 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167076 Under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167098 I liked how you guys read the dialogue back and forth with eachother - shannon

]]> 2016-10-04 13:50:01 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167098 Under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167300 The leprechaun is scary]]> 2016-10-04 13:50:22 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167300 Under the Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167389 Good introduction with dialogue-Piper]]> 2016-10-04 13:50:33 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128167389 Under the rug Sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168422 I loved the description and the plot line of your story!
-Allison]]> 2016-10-04 13:52:26 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168422 Under the Rug Joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168442 Very cool story!!]]> 2016-10-04 13:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168442 Under the Rug (Joy) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168515 Great job!!! Loved it! -Hadley]]> 2016-10-04 13:52:37 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168515 Under The Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168532 I like the beginning, it was funny ]]> 2016-10-04 13:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168532 Under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168535 I like how joy used good dialogue
Zach]]> 2016-10-04 13:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168535 Under the rug- Joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168541 Good reading of your story
Mrs. S]]> 2016-10-04 13:52:40 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168541 Under the rug - joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168553 2016-10-04 13:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168553 Under the Rug Joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168570 Short and to the point... I loved it.]]> 2016-10-04 13:52:43 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128168570 Under The Rug-Joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169011 I like how it was short and simple]]> 2016-10-04 13:53:33 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169011 Under the Rug Sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169040 Very good word choice and detail through out the story. Good dialogue.]]> 2016-10-04 13:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169040 Under the Rug Sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169135 You did a really good job introducing the setting and the way you organized his thoughts Sounded really prof -Marley]]> 2016-10-04 13:53:50 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169135 Under the Rug- Joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169161 Nice reading of the story -Piper]]> 2016-10-04 13:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169161 Under the rug (Sarah) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169168 Really good word choice!!! I liked the way the lump would appear and disappear. - Ha]]> 2016-10-04 13:53:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169168 Under the rug sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169169 The story had lots of detail.
Zach]]> 2016-10-04 13:53:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169169 Under the Rug joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169172 It was very short and sweet -Ryan]]> 2016-10-04 13:53:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169172 Under the rug- Sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169187 ooh. the lump vanished....suspense
dozing- good word choice
yikes....where is he going? scary.....
fun resolution
Mrs. S]]> 2016-10-04 13:53:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169187 Under The Rug-Sara https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169269 I like the Mystery, plot, and the ending
- Addeline]]> 2016-10-04 13:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169269 Sarah — Under the Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169356 I loved your story Sarah!! When he got pulled under the rug I got super interested]]> 2016-10-04 13:54:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169356 Under the Rug - Sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169565 Really good flow of the story with great word choice -Piper]]> 2016-10-04 13:54:40 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169565 Under the rug Joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169754 Short and got right to the point.

]]> 2016-10-04 13:55:04 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169754 Under the rug- joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169906 I liked how much your character talked- Shannon ]]> 2016-10-04 13:55:25 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128169906 Under the rug Sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170147 Good word choice]]> 2016-10-04 13:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170147 Under the rug- sara https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170346 I like the ending with not knowing what will happen

]]> 2016-10-04 13:56:20 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170346 Under the Rug - joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170540 Short and got to the point! Really good - callie]]> 2016-10-04 13:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170540 Under the rug sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170627 Great story, creepy]]> 2016-10-04 13:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170627 under the rug Sara https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170751 It caught your attention and was veary good 😊 ]]> 2016-10-04 13:56:57 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170751 Under the rug sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170818 I like the spook

-George]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170818 Under the Rug sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170858 Liked how your story flowed-Ryan]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170858 Under the rug -sarah c. https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170881 The story was a very good idea and I really like how you make it seem like a illusion ]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:09 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170881 Under the rug (Tim) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170905 I liked the background information. -Hadley]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170905 Under the Rug -Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170916 Good introduction and details throughout the story. Like the sound effects. -Piper]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:13 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170916 Under the rug, Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170934 I liked the way your sentences flowed, it made the story that much better -Marley ]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170934 Under the Rug Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170938 Good background information. Good setting details. Good mystery and ending. -Angelina]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170938 Under the Rug- Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170946 good exposition
oooh...the lump is a thief
good way to end
Mrs. S]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128170946 Under the rug - sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171039 The tone was very good, it was was very clear and good word choice. - callie]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171039 Under the rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171056 Really good story. Good job on suspence]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:28 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171056 Under the roug   https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171064 2016-10-04 13:57:29 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171064 Under under the rug joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171108 I like the characters, and you put a nice spin on the story! Sarah]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171108 Under the rug- tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171113 I like the choice of vocabulary that you used- shannon

]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171113 Under the under the rug Sara https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171159 It was a super good storie I really loved how detailed and well put together
Aliana]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171159 Under the Rug Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171186 I loved the voice of the story it really captures how Harris Burdict would have written it.
-Allison]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:44 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171186 Under the rug Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171215 I liked the cat-Ryan]]> 2016-10-04 13:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171215 Under the rug Jo https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171339 Great story!!]]> 2016-10-04 13:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171339 Under the rug Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171351 I like how many details you had.]]> 2016-10-04 13:58:05 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171351 Under The Rug-Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171416 I like the mystery behind it
Addeline]]> 2016-10-04 13:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171416 Under the rug tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171438 It goes with the the picture.
Zach]]> 2016-10-04 13:58:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171438 Under the rug Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171535 Bit depressing, but awesome!]]> 2016-10-04 13:58:26 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171535 Tim Under the Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171620 Frederick is my spirit animal!! #fierce Also really liked the affection Frederick was given!! ]]> 2016-10-04 13:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171620 Under the rug tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171641 I like how you included dialogue without making it unusual or forced. Sarah]]> 2016-10-04 13:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171641 under the rug tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171701 He had alot of enthusiasm ]]> 2016-10-04 13:58:48 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171701 Under the under the rug tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171836 It was really nice and detailed ]]> 2016-10-04 13:59:03 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128171836 Under the rug joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173249 Great story joy]]> 2016-10-04 14:01:58 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173249 Under the Rug Tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173346 Good detail - callie]]> 2016-10-04 14:02:10 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173346 Captain tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173376 Nice plot, short and to the point.]]> 2016-10-04 14:02:14 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173376 Mr. Lindens Library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173450 You introduced the characters in a skillful way, and carried the plot with skill.]]> 2016-10-04 14:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173450 Mr. Lindens library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173464 Scary but interesting.

]]> 2016-10-04 14:02:26 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173464 Under the rug bills and peeps https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173617 I like how you wrote the suspence]]> 2016-10-04 14:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173617 Mr. Lindon's Library Group # https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173751 I love your story it was very suspenseful.
-Allison]]> 2016-10-04 14:03:00 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173751 Mr. Linden's Library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173767 good dialogue
good setting that we can relate to - walking to school
ooh. another one...what does that mean??

Mrs. S]]> 2016-10-04 14:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173767 Mr. Linden's library t https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173770 Good detail. Interesting plot line. Good ending. -Angelina]]> 2016-10-04 14:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173770 Mr. Lindens Library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173814 I like how the ending is left for us to decide
Addeline]]> 2016-10-04 14:03:06 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173814 Mr. Linden's Library (Shannon, Piper, Marley, Tyce) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173866 Good discriptive words. - Hadley]]> 2016-10-04 14:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173866 Mr linden https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173991 Nice dialogue, emotion in each sentence]]> 2016-10-04 14:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128173991 Library Tyce https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174007 Kate: I love this story!!!! I NEED A BOOK!!!! 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻]]> 2016-10-04 14:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174007 Mr. lindens Library - tyce, Shannon, an doile https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174075 2016-10-04 14:03:41 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174075 Piper Shannon and tyce https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174156 It was really nice ]]> 2016-10-04 14:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174156 Mr Lindens Lirbrary- Tyce, Shannon, and Piper https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174372 Creepy, but really good!! -callie]]> 2016-10-04 14:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174372 Mr lindens library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174523 The story was realistic]]> 2016-10-04 14:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128174523 Mr. Linden's library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175256 I liked the ending ]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:08 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175256 Allison Mr. Linden's library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175354 Good details about the house. Good mystery ]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:20 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175354 Mr. Lindens library (Allison) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175412 I like the mystery of the Library and how you describe the library. - Hadley]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:27 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175412 Mr. Linden's library- Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175508 good expostion
red brick leading to ancient doors crumbling- good word choice
Keep the Magic Inside!! Love it.
Mrs. S

]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175508 Mr. Lindens library -Alison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175528 Like the word choice and sentence flow. -Piper]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175528 Alison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175532 I like the beginning it's really detailed and nice ]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175532 Mr Lindens Library- Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175598 Good dialogue - callie]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:49 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175598 Mr. Lindens library Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175669 Good word choice]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175669 Library Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175670 The words flowed perfectly!! This was a great story from the beginning to the end!😊😊]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175670 Mr linden second one https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175696 Nice details]]> 2016-10-04 14:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175696 Mr. Lindens Library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175770 You described the library with details that grabbed the readers and kept the story intriguing throughout ]]> 2016-10-04 14:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175770 Mr. Lindens library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175816 I like the discription of the library

-George]]> 2016-10-04 14:07:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175816 Mr lindens library Allison  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175900 She used good word choice
Zach]]> 2016-10-04 14:07:24 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128175900 The house on maple street https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466464 2016-10-05 13:04:59 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466464 mr. Lindens library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466563 2016-10-05 13:05:30 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466563 mr. Lindens library allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466690 2016-10-05 13:05:54 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466690 Allison Mr. Linden's LIbrary. https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466753 Your storyline is well developed.
Your dialogue moves the story along.
safety of slumber-beautiful word choice!
Sad ending.

Mrs. S.]]> 2016-10-05 13:06:04 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466753 Ms. Lindens Library All https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466965 2016-10-05 13:06:45 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466965 Linden library  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466994 2016-10-05 13:06:52 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128466994 Ms. Lindens Library  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467007 2016-10-05 13:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467007 Mr lindens library -allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467066 The details are great ]]> 2016-10-05 13:07:05 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467066 Great story.  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467114 Love the ending]]> 2016-10-05 13:07:12 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467114 Linden library Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467156 I like how you]]> 2016-10-05 13:07:24 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467156 Mr. Lindens Library Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467538 Good word choice.]]> 2016-10-05 13:08:49 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467538 Mr. Linde https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467671 2016-10-05 13:09:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467671 Mr linden allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467915 Nice long story]]> 2016-10-05 13:10:03 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467915 Mr lindens library allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467929 It had a really good story line.
Zach]]> 2016-10-05 13:10:13 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467929 Under the RugAllison  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467942 2016-10-05 13:10:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128467942 It.   So good https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468004 2016-10-05 13:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468004 Under the Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468055 2016-10-05 13:10:40 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468055 Mr. Lindens Library- Alison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468084 I like all the descriptive words you used
Addeline]]> 2016-10-05 13:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468084 Mr. Lindens  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468119 2016-10-05 13:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468119 Mr. L https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468130 2016-10-05 13:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468130 Under the Rug Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468140 Great vocabulary! The whole story was put together so nicely -Marley]]> 2016-10-05 13:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468140 I can post this https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468147 Right?]]> 2016-10-05 13:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468147 mr. Lindens library Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468395 Your story was suspenseful, and had very good vocab

]]> 2016-10-05 13:11:42 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468395 Mr.lindens library(Allison) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468429 The story was very creative and the details were great]]> 2016-10-05 13:11:51 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468429 Mr lindins library  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468526 2016-10-05 13:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468526 Mr lindins library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468546 Great ending and good written story]]> 2016-10-05 13:12:09 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468546 Mr. Lindens Library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468557 It was awesome your word choices and the details of your story was amazing!
-Billy K. Moon]]> 2016-10-05 13:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468557 Under the rug tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468590 You had good details.]]> 2016-10-05 13:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468590 Library Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468600 It was a super interesting story! Your conclusion was sad :|
-Kate B]]> 2016-10-05 13:12:21 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468600 Joy.     https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468723 2016-10-05 13:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468723 Mr lindens library Alison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468763 Good use of words very interesting
-Caleb

]]> 2016-10-05 13:12:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468763 Mr. Lindens Library (Hadley and Callie) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468765 Great ]]> 2016-10-05 13:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468765 Mr. Lindens https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468769 2016-10-05 13:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468769 Mr. Lindens a https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468826 2016-10-05 13:13:08 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468826 Lindins library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468900 Good job on the story]]> 2016-10-05 13:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468900 Lindins library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468942 2016-10-05 13:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468942 Lindins library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468981 Good job on the ]]> 2016-10-05 13:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128468981 Mr. lindens libraray https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469096 2016-10-05 13:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469096 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469199 -sarah]]> 2016-10-05 13:14:51 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469199 mr lindens library  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469203 2016-10-05 13:14:51 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469203 Mr. lindens library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469231 2016-10-05 13:14:56 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469231 Mr. Lindon's Library Hadley https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469300 The dialogue is really good, and I loved the mystery with the writing on the book. ]]> 2016-10-05 13:15:08 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469300 Mr. Lindens Library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469311 The beginning grabs the reader with. Mystery and suspense.]]> 2016-10-05 13:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469311 Allison story https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469323 Great description and story ]]> 2016-10-05 13:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469323 Hadley  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469335 2016-10-05 13:15:13 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469335 Library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469341 Great job
-jackson]]> 2016-10-05 13:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469341 Mr. LInden's Library-Hads and Cal https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469374 hmm;mm.... think your own story. I like that concept.
Your dialogue moves the story along well. ]]> 2016-10-05 13:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469374 Hadley Librar https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469420 The details made me squirm inside. I LOVE this story!!:) -Kate]]> 2016-10-05 13:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469420 Library hadley https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469512 The book is scary and it's weird how it does that]]> 2016-10-05 13:15:41 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469512 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469662 -sarah]]> 2016-10-05 13:16:25 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469662 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469915 2016-10-05 13:17:19 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469915 Captain  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469935 2016-10-05 13:17:23 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469935 Joy.  Good stor https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469960 2016-10-05 13:17:32 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469960 Mr lindens library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469970 It was really creative]]> 2016-10-05 13:17:35 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128469970 Mr. lindens library(Hadley, Callie) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470007 It was very creative
-]]> 2016-10-05 13:17:51 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470007 Mr. lindens library(Hadley, Callie) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470021 It was very craetive]]> 2016-10-05 13:17:52 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470021 Mr. Lindens Library Hadley https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470029 Good detail and very interesting.]]> 2016-10-05 13:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470029 The House On Maple Street https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470065 You described the house very well. Good story line and mystery. -Hadley]]> 2016-10-05 13:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470065 The house on maple street (Sophie) https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470076 It was creepy in a good way, it really kept your attention. -Marley]]> 2016-10-05 13:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470076 The Hoy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470093 2016-10-05 13:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470093 The House on Maple Street https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470105 I like how Maddie was missing from the attic when she brought the police back
Addeline ]]> 2016-10-05 13:18:19 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470105 Mr. lindens library https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470143 2016-10-05 13:18:35 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470143 Mr lindens library piper type and  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470152 2016-10-05 13:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470152 Joy Under the Rug https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470160 The story got to the point and was really cute! -k8]]> 2016-10-05 13:18:39 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470160 Mr lindens library piper tyce and Shannon  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470169 Very creepy
-Caleb ]]> 2016-10-05 13:18:43 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470169 The House on Maple Street: Sophie https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470207 I like how you portray the personalities of the different characters. Its very suspenseful!
-Allison ]]> 2016-10-05 13:18:58 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470207 Sophie house on maple stre https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470222 Fits the season, spooky -Tim]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470222 Mr. Lindens Library-Hadley https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470275 I like how the story ended, it could be a round, or something like that
Addeline]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:07 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470275 The house on  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470288 2016-10-05 13:19:09 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470288 Sophie house on maple st https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470297 2016-10-05 13:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470297 The house on maple street sophie https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470330 The details add a creepy atmosphere to the story.]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470330 Mr lindens library pioern https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470339 2016-10-05 13:19:16 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470339 The House on Maple Street https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470341 Good introduction and details. -Piper]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470341 Mr.Lindens library Hadley https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470347 Awesome story i like how the main character passed on the mystery of the book to another girl.
-Billy K. Moon]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:17 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470347 Sophie  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470370 2016-10-05 13:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470370 House on the maple street sophie https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470377 Very detailed and scary
-Caleb]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:20 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470377 Mr. https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470403 2016-10-05 13:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470403 The house on Maple Street-  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470404 good ]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470404 House sophie https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470451 This book was good and scary
Jackson]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:35 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470451 The house on Maple Street- https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470488 good setting description
ooh. why was the kitchen empty? I'm curious....
cold gust of wind- good descriptive language
Yuk, poor Maddy. Where did she go?!
Mrs. S.]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470488 House - Sophie https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470490 A mysterious and thrilling story! I loved it. ]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:44 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470490 Lindens library hadley https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470497 Nice detail-ryan]]> 2016-10-05 13:19:46 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470497 House  https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470528 2016-10-05 13:19:53 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470528 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470668 -sarah]]> 2016-10-05 13:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470668 The house on Maple street https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470669 Good word choice and very interesting.
Wrenn]]> 2016-10-05 13:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470669 The house on Maple Streety https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470778 2016-10-05 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470778 Under the rug tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470782 Very detailed I really enjoyed it
-Caleb]]> 2016-10-05 13:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470782 House on maple street sophie https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470841 Very creepy-Ryan]]> 2016-10-05 13:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470841 The house on maple street https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470934 It was descriptive.
Zach]]> 2016-10-05 13:20:55 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128470934 Under the rug joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128471017 I enjoyed it
-Caleb]]> 2016-10-05 13:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128471017 The House on Maple Street https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128471316 Creepiest thing ever.
I liked how you left the conclusion unresolved so we could imagine what happened after.
-Billy K. Moon]]> 2016-10-05 13:22:04 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128471316 Allison https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128471417 The word choice was marvelous. #BestStoryEver -Kate]]> 2016-10-05 13:22:19 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128471417 https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128471629 It is good story]]> 2016-10-05 13:22:50 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128471629 Mom https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472002 Good ]]> 2016-10-05 13:23:49 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472002 Under the rug tim https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472004 Awesome story!
Very funny and great details
-Billy K. Moon]]> 2016-10-05 13:23:49 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472004 It was a good s https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472171 2016-10-05 13:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472171 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472230 Good story.
Wrenn]]> 2016-10-05 13:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472230 Captain Tory https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472476 Great exposition!
I liked the plot Line!
-Billy K. Moon]]> 2016-10-05 13:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472476 Under the rug sarah https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472847 Great details and plot Line!! It was amazing!!!
-Billy K. Moon]]> 2016-10-05 13:26:15 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128472847 The seven chairs https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128473244 I liked the paranormal activity throughout the story!!
-Billy K. Moon]]> 2016-10-05 13:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128473244 Under the rug joy https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128473534 Great story
-Billy K. Moon]]> 2016-10-05 13:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/schutzandi/nsy275tnpspf/wish/128473534