Grace Kuman’s Showcase 2021 by https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021 Feedback about how to properly take care of dogs en-us 2021-11-14 22:31:39 UTC 2025-10-23 22:53:07 UTC hello@padlet.com Mr H's Feedback choward109 https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1904085493 Grace, this is great start. It's just fine tuning from here on in.

Home Page: I'm not what happened with formatting but there is no home image? Also all your writing is double spaced and very large. It's a little overwhelming. Also try to have your photo clearly visible near the top. Come see me if you're struggling with this. 

Information: The infographic was meant to be on the Photo Essay page but to be honest it also works well on your information page... it makes more sense! 
Can you minimise the size of the heading on this page and think about a background image for the title too. A few more images placed throughout the website would make it more visually appealing.

Call to Action: I understand that the RSPCA hasn't gotten back to you which is to be expected sometimes as people are very busy. However, what is not clear is how you plan to raise awareness to people other than the website. Are you making posters? Doing a letter drop? Helping out at RSPCA shelters? This is unclear because -unless I'm blind - you haven't mentioned it. 
]]> 2021-11-21 05:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1904085493 Lola https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1905210571 I thought it was extremely good but you repeated yourself a lot, talk slower and go in more depth ]]> 2021-11-22 03:43:37 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1905210571 Christina https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1907519246 I loved how you wrote about how to look after dogs and how to pick the right breed. I loved the format too.

I also think you were very repetitive with what you were saying.
But overall I loved it.
Good job]]> 2021-11-23 03:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1907519246 Matisse 5N https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1907524745 Hi Grace
I love your showcase, and I definitely learnt a lot. It was particularly sad how 64.5% of dogs are treated unfairly. 
I do have some questions, so I would love if you could answer back.
1. What motivated you to choose this issue/topic for your showcase?
2. Do you believe that you collected enough information to display your interest in this topic, or do you think you could have researched more?
3. For the future would you possibly be interested in creating a organisation (etc) to educate people on how to properly take care of dogs, or do you have other plans?

Some feedback is that,
- you could maybe include a way you will teach people how to properly take care of them, or your plans to do that in the future
That’s all I have noticed on your showcase website, but I believe it looks great, sounds great. It seems like you will be able to one day show everyone the importance of taking care of dogs.

(:]]> 2021-11-23 03:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1907524745 https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1907545718 Your site was orderly and the photos depicted a story and evoked emotion. Your topic is very important and you did a great job!]]> 2021-11-23 04:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1907545718 Defne https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1911386222 I love the topic you chose Grace and I found it very interesting! Your infographic is clear and easy to read, while also being informative. Your information is short and succinct and very descriptive. Overall your website is descriptive, interesting and eye catching. Well done! ]]> 2021-11-24 22:26:57 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1911386222 Lam https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1911390081 Grace this was very good. I think the topic you chose fitted very well. This made me so emotional especially the photo essay and that’s what it’s meant to do. Well done! 👍]]> 2021-11-24 22:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1911390081 Tina https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1912404329 I really enjoyed your presentation, it was informative and engaging. You spoke clearly and concisely. I learnt quite a lot regarding the well-being of dogs. It was surprising to see that such a large percentage of dogs in Australia are not cared for correctly - Lucky our Ollie, is smothered with love and good dog ownership! I would correct the spacing of your text and the text size, if possible. Overall, a fabulous presentation! ]]> 2021-11-25 11:07:53 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1912404329 Imogen Wa https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1913292913 Hi Grace,

I really loved what you did for your call to action and also how much information you put into your website. The only thing i would fix is how to introduction is really spaced out.]]> 2021-11-25 22:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1913292913 https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1913295905 I loved the website and thought it was a great, out off the box idea. The only thing I would change is making it a little more visually appealing. Whether this be adding more images ect.]]> 2021-11-25 22:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/gkuman/showcase2021/wish/1913295905