3222 S04 THURS AM WEEK 5 25/02/21 by Miranda O'Hagan https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr en-us 2016-09-15 01:01:59 UTC 2023-09-29 13:08:16 UTC hello@padlet.com LESSON PLAN WEEK 5 mirandaohagan https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1225667375 1. Looking at the A1 guidelines which sections MUST you include?  Is there any section heading that needs to be given a different name?
2. Read pp38-41, 43-44 & 51-60
In a group with others who have read Chargers - First BO group
In a group with others who have read Grafica - Second BO group
In a group with others who have read Ilium - Third BO group
Identify the strengths & weaknesses of the proposal
3. Return to your usual BO group (1/2/3/4/5) to report back what you have discussed
Which proposal is best?
Outline a mini proposal for the hospital IV pump request
Post your outline to this padlet
4. Understanding the Executive Summary - when is it written?
Genre analysis of good/bad executive summaries
5. Organizing info in tables - in your BO group do activity 24 - upload your table to this padlet
6. Using bullet points, parallel structures & vertical lists correctly
Read pp45-46
Do activity 25 WHC
7. Read/skim through the 10 sample proposals linked here on this padlet & do Unit 1 activity 28 with your breakout group members
Evaluate & discuss the following:
Title Page? Table of Contents? Executive Summary? Introduction? Client Requirements? Proposed Solution? Personnel? Schedule for Implementation? Budget? Appendix? Graphics? Tables? References? What have you learned from these authentic proposals?

H/wk
Read pp72-73
Use the checklist on p74
Write & submit A1]]> 2021-02-22 10:03:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1225667375 Authentic proposals mirandaohagan https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1225668574  Crown Sydney Hotel Resort Unsolicited Proposal
https://www.yumpu.com/en/document/read/7823866/crown-sydney-hotel-resort-unsolicited-proposal-crown-limited
 Online Marketing Proposal for Company
http://www.google.com.hk/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=12&ved=0CCkQFjABOAo&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwikileaks.org%2Fgifiles%2Fattach%2F109%2F109010_Marketing-Proposal-Example.pdf&ei=_ma8VJ_6GuXDmAXrgYHIAQ&usg=AFQjCNFnHv6OAUhXLuim37KPrWyYrxUd5A
 Custodial Services Proposal Phoenix College
https://procurement.maricopa.edu/sites/procurement/files/purchasing/vendor_documents/ABM%20Janitorial%20Proposal_0.pdf
 Café in Heathrow Airport T5:
http://www.accaglobal.com/content/dam/acca/global/business-finance/airport-cafe.pdf
 The Scrapbook Nook:
http://www.southeastkentucky.com/pdfs/sample%20business%20plan.pdf
 National Health Service England 2016/17:
https://www.england.nhs.uk/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/bus-plan-16.pdf
Irish Water Business Plan
https://www.water.ie/docs/Irish-Water-Business-Plan.pdf
Commercial Cleaning Proposal
https://nahac.org/wp-content/uploads/2017/05/Jan_Pro_Agmt_8.18.2016.pdf
Proposal - Delivering a new Customer Experience
http://www2.westsussex.gov.uk/ds/edd/cr/cr05a_15-16.pdf
]]> 2021-02-22 10:04:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1225668574 mirandaohagan https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1225670063 2021-02-22 10:04:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1225670063 GROUP 1 Mandy/Dorothy/Calvin/Aidan/Edith mandy727chung https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239295644 GRAFICA:
strengths
  • Headings for each session
  • very detailed (have examples)
weaknesses
  • Long paragraphs
  • no table of contents
  • imbalance contents
  • Unclear budget (no table/price for each item)
  • no client requirements
  • lack of headings 

CHARGERS
strengths
  • very detailed

weaknesses
  • no client requirements
  • diagrams should be in appendix
  • lack of elaborations for diagrams


ILLIUM
strengths
  • Clear pricing table 

weaknesses
  • Unclear organization
  • Too much company information
  • Informal language
]]> 2021-02-25 03:34:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239295644 GROUP 4 https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239309953 Kevin / John / Daveena / Rachel]]> 2021-02-25 03:43:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239309953 group 3 lzjsky15 https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239313967 Allison, Alan, Ray, Eric
GRAFICA: 
strength: 
-Explains the strengths in a specific area and give examples(very detailed) -Focus on how 
-Clear structure -Topic sentences -Use point form -One page one topic

weakness: 
  • No graphics 
  • No catalog
  • Imbalance content(budget)
  • No headings
  • No client requirements
  • No schedule for implementation

CHARGERS: 
strength: 
  • Clear organization - Table of content
  • Diagrams are included to present the function
  • Components of the generator are explained detailedly 
  • List of constraints

weakness: 
  • Block diagram and functional diagram should explain more clearly in sentences
  • Comparison can be added in the proposal 

Llium: 
strength: 
- Tasks/solutions of the project are very detailed, diversity and creative. → Mentioned Multi-aspect, such as on-going advertising, graphic templates, brochures, etc. 
- How to make the project successful – project management → show the company’s confidence and reliability 
- Forecasting the pricing schedule (understanding of the project future-> have a clear picture of the project result and development 


weakness: 
No content pages
No subtitle for each segment (X1.  Executive,2. Problem）
The background of key personnel is too long and irrelevant
]]> 2021-02-25 03:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239313967 Group 2 Eva, Egan, Ada, Ricky, Alex, hogaaji https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239315368 Grafica: 
+: The solutions are in detailed
-: 1. Imbalanced, too many pages on solutions. Some components are missing, such as the executive summary. 
2. The budget planning part shall be in the table because it's more clear. 
3. Some important headings are missing.

CHARGERS:
+: 1. Use diagram to facilitate understanding 
2. Well-organized
3. Comprehensive project plan
4. Easy to follow (headings)
]]> 2021-02-25 03:47:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239315368 Unit 1 Executive Summary samples activity 22 mirandaohagan https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239360833 2021-02-25 04:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239360833 GROUP 4 https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239410742 Daveena/John/Rachel/Kevin]]> 2021-02-25 04:40:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239410742 GROUP 1 Mandy/Dorothy/Calvin/Aidan/Edith https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239413809 2021-02-25 04:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239413809 G2 hogaaji https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239416486 2021-02-25 04:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239416486 group 3 lzjsky15 https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239418456 Allison, Ray, Eric, Alan]]> 2021-02-25 04:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239418456 Unit 1 activity 24 answer mirandaohagan https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239533390 2021-02-25 05:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1239533390 yinkwanpan https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1268895087 2021-03-04 13:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mirandaohagan/nsco0al2eqmr/wish/1268895087