https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw How would you improve Vivian's email? en-us 2017-11-22 23:44:12 UTC 2017-12-04 19:12:32 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209708806 - Be polite, It encourages willingness to help
- Be clear, Who? What? When? Where? Why?
-Be Professional, full name, please,and thank yous ]]> 2017-11-23 13:39:47 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209708806 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709235 Add more details of the issue, make sure to properly title and specify who the person is and also be more specific on how to be reached]]> 2017-11-23 13:41:09 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709235 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709459 2017-11-23 13:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709459 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709589 be polite and don’t demand what you want ]]> 2017-11-23 13:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709589 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709667 Avoid using inappropriate language, and provide more specific information. Treat the businesses you are working with fairly, and try to solve the issue with friendlier and more co-operative measures.]]> 2017-11-23 13:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709667 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709675 it would help if she did not come across as rude as she did and explain what is happening so that they understand so they can do what needs to be done on their end and leave proper contact information 

]]> 2017-11-23 13:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709675 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709677 Clearly defining what you'd like to see and leaving personal feelings aside, state what facts you'd like to inquire.

]]> 2017-11-23 13:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709677 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709709 You could improve her email by using proper paragraphs, and using them in a professional manner, as well as using proper punctuation and grammar. ]]> 2017-11-23 13:42:44 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709709 13825681609chen https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709716 Add contact information]]> 2017-11-23 13:42:45 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709716 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709728
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]]> 2017-11-23 13:42:49 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709728 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709773 - its a professional email so be polite, use proper language and be kind.
-please state what you want exactly.]]> 2017-11-23 13:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709773 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709817 use proper grammar
- no all caps
- no "!!!"]]> 2017-11-23 13:43:01 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709817 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709823 re-read the email to check grammar and spelling ]]> 2017-11-23 13:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709823 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709907 1. Don't be rude.
2.  Be softer.
3. constructive criticism goes a long way when you are polite.
4. more details
5. Don't be a bitch..............

]]> 2017-11-23 13:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709907 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709910 State who the clients are and when the wedding is. The cafe may have more than 1 wedding that they are supplying for.]]> 2017-11-23 13:43:22 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709910 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709970 - Mention who it was towards
- Be less demanding (no one likes an entitled client Vivian)]]> 2017-11-23 13:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209709970 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710082 Greet them politely, explain the situation and give full details about the wedding, notify them on what is going wrong and what they can do to help.
End with a closing compliment and your contact information]]> 2017-11-23 13:43:59 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710082 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710121 2017-11-23 13:44:06 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710121 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710176 Don't be disrespectful to business partners ]]> 2017-11-23 13:44:19 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710176 13825681609chen https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710353 2017-11-23 13:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710353 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710356 Vivian should have closed the email with both her first and last name, as well as her contact information

]]> 2017-11-23 13:44:57 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209710356 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209711146 Always re-read the email before sending it.]]> 2017-11-23 13:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209711146 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209711293 2017-11-23 13:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/209711293 charlottewood292 https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/213028352 Next she should have been clear about the service she wished to receive and included contact details.
Then she should have thanked the person she was ordering from and kept her opinions to herself. ]]> 2017-12-04 19:09:51 UTC https://padlet.com/oldfors/nrthvffkx2gw/wish/213028352