Voice of a Child - 3rd Hour by Megan Von Fange https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p Questions over the mentor texts and other VOC discussions en-us 2020-09-28 00:15:52 UTC 2020-09-30 15:48:02 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/355178558/abf9a2103cd14d604ad3c3c3c14971b9/WICOR.png mvonfange https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/782914633 When does this story take place in the speaker's life?

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Press the + button to add a new "Sticky note" to this thread. In the title put your first name and last initial. Answer the question in the "write something." ]]> 2020-09-28 00:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/782977694 mvonfange https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/782979762 What are some ways these authors captured the voice of a child? Don't write specific lines but think of the strategy or category they used.

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Get sick a lot
Always hitting someone
Mean
Attitude problems
Make no sense
Eat everything
cry over nothing]]> 2020-09-28 14:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613321 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613602 *Lie a lot 
*They have to eat before bed 
* fun to play with 
*playful]]> 2020-09-28 14:48:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613602 LS https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613695 Kids are small. They are often Naïve. 
seven year olds drink water after running and never freaking put the cup down. they just stand there with the cup in there mouth. XD


]]> 2020-09-28 14:48:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613695 Angelina G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613718 Kids say whatever is on their minds & have NO filter 
ask lots of questions 
annoying 
talk TOO much
always want my chips


]]> 2020-09-28 14:48:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613718 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613834 The way they talk, they speak about themselves a lot in an egotistical way, funny, energetic, always trying to impress older kids]]> 2020-09-28 14:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784613834 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784614783 -Kids are often very playful. 
-They tend to like sweets.
-They have a hard time understanding some things but that doesn't mean they're not smart]]> 2020-09-28 14:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784614783 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784614953 Kids usually are very innocent and naive. A stereotype is that they have a high pitched voice 
- annoying ]]> 2020-09-28 14:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784614953 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784618328 Small, energetic, loud, annoying]]> 2020-09-28 14:49:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784618328 Mercedes Solis https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784618830 very blunt]]> 2020-09-28 14:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784618830 Ayani a. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784618874 Brutally Honest]]> 2020-09-28 14:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784618874 annoying https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784620078 2020-09-28 14:49:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784620078 Nathan Aranda 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784622100 loud, they say whatever they think, mean, ]]> 2020-09-28 14:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784622100 meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784622164 active and very eager to know and learn things]]> 2020-09-28 14:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784622164 Jennifer L. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784626113 Mischievous]]> 2020-09-28 14:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784626113 Ximena G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784627594 Love being all over the place]]> 2020-09-28 14:51:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784627594 LS https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784628512 they say things that are unacceptable and its scary. like teach your kid to just not please. ]]> 2020-09-28 14:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784628512 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784669863 The person telling the story was in first grade on the way home after school]]> 2020-09-28 15:02:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784669863 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784670307 This story takes place when the speaker was in first grade. ]]> 2020-09-28 15:02:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784670307 Angelina G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784670428 The person was in 1st grade ]]> 2020-09-28 15:02:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784670428 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784670457 It's in first grade so that would be like 6 years old. ]]> 2020-09-28 15:02:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784670457 Nathan A. 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784671470 The speaker was in the 6th grade so she would be around 6]]> 2020-09-28 15:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784671470 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784672237 When the author was in the first grade.]]> 2020-09-28 15:02:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784672237 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784673103 The story took place when the speaker was in first grade.]]> 2020-09-28 15:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784673103 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784673134 The little kid sounded curious at first as to why the mouse wasn't moving and confused when their mom got mad]]> 2020-09-28 15:02:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784673134 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784674530 The tone seems to be nostalgic and a little sad as she talks about trying to take care of the rat and her small mistake. She also seems to very very confused about how the situation was handled by her mother]]> 2020-09-28 15:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784674530 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784674658 The story take place when she is walking home alone from school]]> 2020-09-28 15:03:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784674658 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784676431 The little kids sounds very innocent and naive since she doesn't know what really is going on. She also sounded worried about the "mouse" and wanted it to get warm]]> 2020-09-28 15:03:41 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784676431 Bryleigh DeFehr https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784676627 The character's emotions seemed excited, caring, helpful, innocent.


]]> 2020-09-28 15:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784676627 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784676809 I think her tone went back to her mindset of the child she used to be. Especially when she said her mom yelled at her for no reason. only a kid would have that point of view.]]> 2020-09-28 15:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784676809 Angelina G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784676831 The tone was like one of a concerned kid who was trying to help innocently ]]> 2020-09-28 15:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784676831 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784678667 I thought it was funny but gross
because the little kid put the mouse in the oven and forgot about it]]> 2020-09-28 15:04:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784678667 meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784679324 when the narrator is in 1st grade]]> 2020-09-28 15:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784679324 Ayani A. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784679839 probably when she was like 5 years old]]> 2020-09-28 15:04:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784679839 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784680577 The tone was like just an innocent, worried kid who didn't know what they did was in the wrong. ]]> 2020-09-28 15:04:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784680577 LS. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784682109 this girl was in first grade when she was experiencing this.]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784682109 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784682283 My thought was that it is funny because that is exactly how little kids are. They think they know what to do but in reality that is definitely not the case. ]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784682283 Angelina G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784683125 At first i thought it was cute that the kid was so caring for the rodent then I got the sense that it was dead &&& was basically being cooked ]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784683125 Ayani A. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784683141 had a lot to do with excitement and confusion]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784683141 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784683619 When I finished reading the story I thought that it wasn't very realistic. but that might be because I would never do something like that as a kid.  :/
Overall I found the story quite funny.]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784683619 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784684415 The way she projects her way of thinking ex: when she puts the mouse in the oven or picking up the mouse in general]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784684415 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784684478 Her tone sounds like an innocent child trying to help a mouse ]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784684478 LS https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784684959 The tone is positive. she is wishing to be helpful and she is hopeful she can save the "mouse".]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784684959 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784685457 I thought that the story was funny but then again gross because if I were in that situation I know Id be grossed out . ]]> 2020-09-28 15:05:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784685457 Ayani A. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784686752 my reaction was more surprised because of how she decided to warm it up]]> 2020-09-28 15:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784686752 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784687017 I thought it was a very good representation of a "child's voice". It doesn't sound like an adult at all. It definitely captured those small mistakes children make.]]> 2020-09-28 15:06:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784687017 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784687333 "My baby brother had just been born and was something of a disappointment as a playmate..."
" he would wake up, do some cute mousy things"  


]]> 2020-09-28 15:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784687333 LS https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784688652 I don't remember being that Blind to my surroundings in first grade. I kinda grew up fast though. But for real, I wouldn't even touch that. ]]> 2020-09-28 15:06:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784688652 NA 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784690407 I think the tone is a little sad because she only wanted to help the poor little mouse and didn't really understand why her mother would be so mad]]> 2020-09-28 15:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784690407 Angelina G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784691052 "then i laid him gently inside the oven" that phrase just tells you that its a kids doing. 
"my own were missing at the time" this also shows that it was a kid cause the kid had teeth missing ]]> 2020-09-28 15:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784691052 meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784691773 she seems to have a confused unsure tone ]]> 2020-09-28 15:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784691773 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784693162 Mouseology, Completely un-criminal eyes ]]> 2020-09-28 15:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784693162 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784693457 At first i thought it was weird that he/she was helping a mouse that she barley found but than it was kind that it was helping the mouse ]]> 2020-09-28 15:07:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784693457 Ayani A. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784694362 2020-09-28 15:07:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784694362 NA 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784694939 I thought it was funny and sad ]]> 2020-09-28 15:08:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784694939 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784695046 Phrases such as: "I felt sorry for him." "..cute little mousy things.." "I got busy with my paper dolls" etc They sound very childlike. An adult might say, "it looked pitiful, especially with its prone form lying there." The other two are self explanatory. Not many adults would refer to a mouse walking around and scratching dirt as "cute little mousy things," nor would most adults, "get busy with paper dolls."]]> 2020-09-28 15:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784695046 Ayani A. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784695315 so i was not an expert on mouseology]]> 2020-09-28 15:08:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784695315 TH https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784696523 I thought it was crazy because imagine having a dead rodent in the oven. ]]> 2020-09-28 15:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784696523 LS https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784698817 The say things like "Mousy things". to explain what mice do. They have references to Childhood books that are or become classics. ]]> 2020-09-28 15:08:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784698817 TH https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784701588 a naive child]]> 2020-09-28 15:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784701588 NA 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784704637 The way she describes the mouse becoming her pet "he would wake up, do cute little mousy things,"]]> 2020-09-28 15:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784704637 TH https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784705491 When the speaker was in first grade]]> 2020-09-28 15:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784705491 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784706458 'I guess I got busy with my paper dolls and forgot to check on him for a while']]> 2020-09-28 15:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784706458 meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784707157 the narrator uses the phrase stuart little to describe the mouse.]]> 2020-09-28 15:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784707157 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784710435 "My baby brother had just been born and was something of a disappointment as a playmate..."

"I felt that if she had just looked at my very innocent face, my wide-open, completely uncriminal eyes- instead of screaming at me , for no reason whatsoever..."]]> 2020-09-28 15:11:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784710435 Tone mvonfange https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784718780 Remember tone belongs to the author, not the character in the story.

]]> 2020-09-28 15:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784718780 JR https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784719215 In 1st grade]]> 2020-09-28 15:13:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784719215 TH https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784720603 "do cute mousy thing"]]> 2020-09-28 15:13:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784720603 JR https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784722135 Definitely extremely innocent. She just tried to save the mouse. She doesn't know even the concept of death.]]> 2020-09-28 15:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784722135 meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784723464 it was a little funny but not so surprising because of how kids tend to not be so scared to touch certain things they think are safe without thinking about how you could get hurt or sick from it.]]> 2020-09-28 15:14:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784723464 Jackie R. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784729013 I laughed so hard. I was like "Imagine a dead mouse in your oven." I'd think the child was about to become a serial killer.]]> 2020-09-28 15:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784729013 Jackie R. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784741763 "Mousy things," really gave it away there. It sounds extremely childish.]]> 2020-09-28 15:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/784741763 Lauryn s https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788136187 they are 8 years old. ]]> 2020-09-29 14:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788136187 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788138324 8 and a half.]]> 2020-09-29 14:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788138324 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788175120 8 and a half ]]> 2020-09-29 15:01:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788175120 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788177140 "so guess what, if I ever have my own team I am picking everyone first even the worst kid and the kid with the stutter like a skipping record ‘cause I know all of us are scratched, even if you can't hear it when we speak. my mother says most people have heartbeats that are knocking on doors that will never open, and I know my heart is a broken freezer chest ‘cause I can never keep anything frozen." These are my favorite lines because they speak the truth. We all go through hardships that no one else knows about. We all crawl our way through the obstacles, the mean words, the scratches, and the bruises. We are all broken in our own way because of our own experiences. There is no one on this earth who hasn't experienced some kind of trauma.]]> 2020-09-29 15:01:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788177140 Lauryn s https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788180370 "it is a fact that bumblebees have hair on their eyes" 

this one is a good one, because one , thats a cool fact. but also it comes after the fact of dropping there gender witch is sometimes controversial and just mowing over it with bees is hoestly like a good way to just get past that bro, we all people. I also think its funny that there having this angry rant about there childhood and then just change the subject to bees. lol ]]> 2020-09-29 15:02:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788180370 MC is a first grader walking home from school LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788184172 2020-09-29 15:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788184172 Lauryn sommerfeld https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788192212 "my kindness knows mermaids never ever miss their legs in the water ‘cause there are better ways to move through the ocean than kicking." 

"every bird perched on a telephone wire will listen to the conversations running through its feet"]]> 2020-09-29 15:04:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788192212 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788200125 8 and a half]]> 2020-09-29 15:06:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788200125 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788202684 8 1/2 years old]]> 2020-09-29 15:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788202684 Nathan A 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788203473 8 and a half]]> 2020-09-29 15:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788203473 angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788204066 8 & 1/2]]> 2020-09-29 15:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788204066 8 and a half LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788204187 2020-09-29 15:07:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788204187 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788205097 ‘cause I one hundred percent absolutely do not have head lice and even if I do it is a fact that head lice prefer clean heads over dirty ones so I am clean as a whistle on a tea pot.
I like this live because it seems very funny to me, it was the first thing in the poem to make me laugh.]]> 2020-09-29 15:07:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788205097 Lauryn s https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788205671 "doesn't mean I am not super duper."

"my mother says it is totally fine if I blow off steam"]]> 2020-09-29 15:07:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788205671 BD https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788206864 The speaker in the poem is 8 1/2 years old.]]> 2020-09-29 15:07:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788206864 it is a fact that bumblebees have hair on their eyes LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788207116 2020-09-29 15:07:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788207116 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788207775 "so no, I am not “always crying.” I am just thawing outside of the lines. and even if I am “always crying” it is a fact that salt is the only reason everything floats so good in the dead sea."

"some people's fathers are like attics I've heard attics have monsters in their walls and shaky stares. I think if I lived in a house with attic I'd nightmare a burglar in my safety chest and maybe I'd look for rest in the sticks and stones ‘cause my mother says a person can only swallow so much punch before he's drunk on his own fist"]]> 2020-09-29 15:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788207775 Teon H. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788209630 8 years old]]> 2020-09-29 15:08:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788209630 Meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788211304 8 1/2]]> 2020-09-29 15:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788211304 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788211408 "cause I one hundred percent absolutely do not have head lice and even if I do It is a fact that head lice prefer clean heads over dirty ones so I am clean as a whistle on a tea pot''
This one is my favorite one because when I was little everyone of my classmates would mostly say this and this made me remember my classmates would say and it was funny for me ]]> 2020-09-29 15:08:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788211408 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788212844 "my mother says most people have heartbeats that are knocking on doors that will never open"

"it is a fact that bumblebees have hair on their eyes and humans, also, should comb through everything they see."]]> 2020-09-29 15:09:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788212844 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788217725 they are 8 1/2]]> 2020-09-29 15:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788217725 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788221356 "so guess what, if I ever have my own team I am picking everyone first even the worst kid and the kid with the stutter like a skipping record ‘cause I know all of us are scratched, even if you can't hear it when we speak." It is my favorite line because like even with all the problems they have and everything , they'd still be chosen , everyone has problems. ]]> 2020-09-29 15:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788221356 my kindness knows mermaids never ever miss their legs in the water LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788221445
doesn't mean I am not super duper. in fact, my super duper might be a buoy or a paper boat]]> 2020-09-29 15:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788221445 BD https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788223025 "Maybe you have been kicking people with them by accident"
"And I know my heart is a broken freezer chest"]]> 2020-09-29 15:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788223025 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788224066 2020-09-29 15:11:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788224066 Nathan A 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788224983 "my mother says most people have heartbeats that are knocking on doors that will never open," this is my favorite line cause I just think it's neat ]]> 2020-09-29 15:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788224983 Angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788226365 "but on your bad days couldn't you just say “hey I'm having a bad day,” instead of telling me I'm stupid or poor," I liked this because its so true , if you are having a bad day just say that instead of being rude.]]> 2020-09-29 15:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788226365 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788226493 "Maybe there are cartwheels in your mouth maybe your words will grow up to be a gymnasts maybe you have been kicking people with them by accident"

"so I know every word we speak can make hurricanes in people's weather veins or shine their shiny shine"]]> 2020-09-29 15:11:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788226493 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788226762 "doesn't mean I am not super duper. in fact, my super duper might be a buoy or a paper boat the next time your nose gets stuck up the river"

"maybe you think my heart looks like a baby squirrel."]]> 2020-09-29 15:11:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788226762 Teon H. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788234052 "that our hearts stop every for a mili-second every time we sneeze" because I really don't pay attention to it but it's true.]]> 2020-09-29 15:13:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788234052 doesn't mean I am not super duper. LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788234478 I want to be a belly dance or an accordion or a pogo stick]]> 2020-09-29 15:13:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788234478 BD https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788239236 " Maybe you think my heart looks like a baby squirrel"
" Even if I am always crying"]]> 2020-09-29 15:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788239236 X G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788240766 It was when the author was in 1st grade

]]> 2020-09-29 15:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788240766 Meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788241527 "it is a fact that head lice prefer clean heads over dirty ones so I am clean as a whistle on a tea pot." 

i like it because she shows how confident she is to show how much she is clean and how they think wrong about her to be unclean. ]]> 2020-09-29 15:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788241527 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788244100 ''hey I'm having a bad day, instead of telling me I' stupid or poor, or telling me I dress like a boy 'cause maybe I am boy and a girl maybe my name is Andrea Andrew' ]]> 2020-09-29 15:15:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788244100 angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788245891 or telling me I dress like a boy ‘cause maybe I am a boy AND a girl 

my mother says most people have heartbeats that are knocking on doors that will never open, and I know my heart is a broken freezer chest ‘cause I can never keep anything frozen.]]> 2020-09-29 15:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788245891 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788247230 2020-09-29 15:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788247230 BD https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788247942 "My kindness knows mermaids never ever miss their legs in the water"
"So guess what if I ever have my own team I am picking everyone first even the worst kid and the kid with the stutter"]]> 2020-09-29 15:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788247942 Nathan A 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788248498 "so no, I am not “always crying.” I am just thawing outside of the lines. and even if I am “always crying” it is a fact that salt is the only reason, everything floats so good in the dead sea. and just ‘cause no one ever passes notes to me"
"so maybe sometime you could sit beside me on the bus and I could say, “guess what, it is a fact that manatees have vocal chords but do not have ears. and Beethoven made music even when he could no longer hear."]]> 2020-09-29 15:16:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788248498 Victoria V. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788249966 They think very literally

]]> 2020-09-29 15:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788249966 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788251548 "it is a fact that bumblebees have hair on their eyes and humans, also, should comb through everything they see."
“every bird perched on a telephone wire will listen to the conversations running through its feet
to decide the direction of its flight.”
]]> 2020-09-29 15:17:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788251548 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788251603 "it is a fact that bumblebees have hair on their eyes and humans, also, should comb through everything they see"
"so I am clean as a whistle on a tea pot."]]> 2020-09-29 15:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788251603 angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788254883 I am not “always crying.”

so maybe sometime you could sit beside me on the bus and I could say, “guess what, it is a fact that manatees have vocal chords but do not have ears. and Beethoven made music even when he could no longer hear.]]> 2020-09-29 15:17:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788254883 Teon H. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788256262 "my kindness knows mermaids never ever miss their legs in the water ‘cause there are better ways to move through the ocean than kicking."

"some people's fathers are like attics I've heard attics have monsters in their walls and shaky stares."]]> 2020-09-29 15:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788256262 They're 8 1/2 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788256421 2020-09-29 15:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788256421 When the writer is in 1st grade https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788265179 2020-09-29 15:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788265179 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788265195 I've heard attics have monsters in their walls and shaky stares. I think if I lived in a house with attic I'd nightmare a burglar in my safety chest and maybe I'd look for rest in the sticks and stones]]> 2020-09-29 15:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788265195 Mercedes Solis https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788266600 8 1/2]]> 2020-09-29 15:20:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788266600 Teon H. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788270512 "Maybe there are cartwheels in your mouth maybe your words will grow up to be a gymnasts maybe you have been kicking people with them by accident"

"but you absolutely missed when you told the class I have head lice ‘cause I one hundred percent absolutely do not have head lice and even if I do it is a fact that head lice prefer clean heads over dirty ones"]]> 2020-09-29 15:20:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788270512 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788272909 "I want to be a belly dance or an accordion or a pogo stick"
"so guess what, if I ever have my own team I am picking everyone first"]]> 2020-09-29 15:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788272909 Meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788281688 "everything floats so good in the dead sea. and just ‘cause no one ever passes notes to me"

"it is a fact that bumblebees have hair on their eyes and humans, also, should comb through everything they see."]]> 2020-09-29 15:23:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788281688 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788290496 "doesn't mean I am not super duper. in fact, my super duper might be a buoy or a paper boat the next time your nose gets stuck up the river"

"so maybe sometime you could sit beside me on the bus"

]]> 2020-09-29 15:24:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788290496 Meryalice https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788307739 "but on your bad days couldn't you just say “hey I'm having a bad day,” instead of telling me I'm stupid or poor,"

"so no, I am not “always crying.”]]> 2020-09-29 15:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788307739 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788341526






























































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































































]]> 2020-09-29 15:35:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/788341526 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791606532 6 years old]]> 2020-09-30 14:59:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791606532 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791608086 I thought it was extremely gross that the main character peed into the grate, The urine steam probably infused with anything absorbent in the house. It was probably years before they could get the smell totally out of the house. ]]> 2020-09-30 14:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791608086 Lauryn https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791608450 Hes 6 i think? ]]> 2020-09-30 14:59:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791608450 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791608751 around 6 years old]]> 2020-09-30 14:59:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791608751 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791609146 He is 6 years old ]]> 2020-09-30 14:59:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791609146 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791609751 6 years old]]> 2020-09-30 14:59:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791609751 lauryn https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791610250 I feel like that very bad. siblings can suck a lot though. I feel like i didnt need so much discription though]]> 2020-09-30 14:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791610250 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791610453 I thought it was a pretty good story. I also have younger siblings and one of them is a lot younger than me. I think she would also do something like that if i made it seem ok ]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791610453 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791610770 I thought it was funny but gross. I can relate to the sibling rivalry when it comes to getting in trouble.]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791610770 angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791611202 around 6 ]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791611202 Meryalice M. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791612009 around 6 years of age]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791612009 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791612143 Around six years old]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791612143 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613017 I thought it was something serious of what he did ]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613017 angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613289 i thought the story was kinda funny but the older brother was a bully, how wrong ]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613289 Alexys A: Hes not grown, he is a little kid obviously. You can tell by the tone and the way he narrates. I believe he is 6. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613466 2020-09-30 15:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613466 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613812 My reaction to this story was EW.
I know this is because I don't know anyone who would let their older sibling manipulate them into doing something like this. I also cant relate because I am lucky to be an only child.]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613812 Ximena G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613882 6


]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791613882 6 LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791614413 2020-09-30 15:00:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791614413 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791614432 6 years old. ]]> 2020-09-30 15:00:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791614432 it was funny, mainly because i get my siblings in trouble a lot. LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791615705 2020-09-30 15:01:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791615705 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791616665 “Yeah, but just a sec. I gotta go to the bathroom.”

"In the same nanosecond my pee hits that hot furnace, the yellow steam rolls up around me like I’m Mandrake the Magician in the middle of a disappearing act, which I’m not but really
wish I was."
]]> 2020-09-30 15:01:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791616665 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791617110 ''Whether or not my father hit me, it didn't change my behavior one bit']]> 2020-09-30 15:01:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791617110 Meryalice M. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791617781 i think it was really discusting how a brother could try so much as to get his younger brother in trouble by making him pee in a furnace and create a fog of evaporated urine in the air. I felt that it was bad how an older brother could teach his younger generations of sibling such bad habits ]]> 2020-09-30 15:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791617781 BD https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791618317 He's 6 ]]> 2020-09-30 15:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791618317 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791618423 "If I go inside to pee, I stand to lose my exalted spot atop the yellow broomstick that is Roy’s mighty palomino, Trigger, and I’m working my sphincter muscles like a body builder, prolonging those last precious minutes." 
“Okay, but you promise you won’t tell.” 
He crosses his black heart.'
these show how little kids are so gullible and how they prioritize playing outside.
]]> 2020-09-30 15:01:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791618423 angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791618935 I’m playing cowboys outside

“Okay, but you promise you won’t tell.”]]> 2020-09-30 15:01:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791618935 Ximena G https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791619668 It was funny but slightly weird

]]> 2020-09-30 15:02:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791619668 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791620166 "You said you wouldn't tell" 
"This is a job for a bawl baby"]]> 2020-09-30 15:02:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791620166 BD https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791620768 I thought it was gross, because peeing in the heater is just disgusting. How did he not think his parents were going to find out?]]> 2020-09-30 15:02:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791620768 Yeah, but just a sec. I gotta go to the bathroom. LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791623730 Okay, but you promise you won’t tell]]> 2020-09-30 15:02:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791623730 Teon H. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791625274 6 years old]]> 2020-09-30 15:03:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791625274 angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791626388 "the yellow steam rolls up around me like I’m Mandrake the Magician in the middle of a disappearing act,"

"My eyes squint and my lips roll back over my buckteeth and not one tear comes out because every drop of water in me is shooting out like I’m trying to arc it across the Grand Canyon."]]> 2020-09-30 15:03:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791626388 imanie https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791626630 6yrs]]> 2020-09-30 15:03:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791626630 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791626983 "I know instantly from the sssssssssss and the horrific stench that I better not be making plans to play Roy Rogers again soon."

"When Jewell walks through the door carrying my baby sister, the aroma fills Candy’s tiny nostrils and sets her off like a siren."]]> 2020-09-30 15:03:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791626983 Alexys A: I thought the story was gross, I could just imagine the stench of a little kids urine. It was weird that you would pee on the heater. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791627703 2020-09-30 15:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791627703 Jackie R. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791628241 He was about six years old.]]> 2020-09-30 15:03:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791628241 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791630495 "I have to pee so bad I’m about to turn into a hurled water balloon"
"the yellow steam rolls up around me like I’m Mandrake the Magician in the middle of a disappearing act"]]> 2020-09-30 15:04:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791630495 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791632325 "When the last sizzles off the top of the hot oil furnace, I stand, gazing dazed through the yellow mist"

"... the yellow stream rolls up around me like i'm Mandrake the Magician in the middle of a disappearing act..."]]> 2020-09-30 15:04:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791632325 Jackie R. I thought it was hilarious because pee steam. Everything about it was just funny, but I feel bad for https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791632593 2020-09-30 15:04:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791632593 imanie https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791633173 funny and gross i have siblings too and it's fun to get them in trouble ]]> 2020-09-30 15:04:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791633173 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791635524 I thought it was funny that his brother actually convinced him to do that but then again it was gross because the whole house had the urine steam. ]]> 2020-09-30 15:05:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791635524 angelina g https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791635806 I think by having some dialogue in the text helps bring out some of the child voice the author is trying to show. And the way the story had started off with the boys playing outside with friends, it also brings out the voice of a child with how trusting and naïve the boy was ]]> 2020-09-30 15:05:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791635806 John, sitting in a chair reading a book, observes the obvious as I burst through the door and says, “Wanna do something neat?” LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791636066 In the same nanosecond my pee hits that hot furnace, the yellow steam rolls up around me like I’m Mandrake the Magician in the middle of a disappearing act, which I’m not but really]]> 2020-09-30 15:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791636066 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791637811 "John could always get me to help him pound those last few nails into my coffin for him"
"his is a misdemeanor and mine a felony"]]> 2020-09-30 15:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791637811 prospective and the ability to put yourself in the child's shoes LucianoLopez666 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791639566 2020-09-30 15:06:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791639566 Nathan A 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791639659 Around at least 6 years old ]]> 2020-09-30 15:06:19 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791639659 Emily Foster https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791640230 The author's captured the voice of the child by mentioning memories filled with childish shenanigans, childish dialogue, and description.]]> 2020-09-30 15:06:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791640230 Teon H. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791640442 I thought it was weird because they were peeing on furnaces .]]> 2020-09-30 15:06:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791640442 JA https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791640578 ''The good new is that Jewell is so mad she doesn't know exactly how she wants to kill me, so I get a short reprieve ''until your father get home'']]> 2020-09-30 15:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791640578 Nathan A 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791642256 His brother really convinced him to pee on the furnace huh?]]> 2020-09-30 15:06:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791642256 Jackie R. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791643826 Little kids are always worried about getting told on and getting in trouble. Children are also very gullible. So the repeating question of "promise you won't tell?" definitely gives off children vibez.]]> 2020-09-30 15:07:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791643826 Meryalice M. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791646473 “huh-uh,” I say. “You’ll tell.”

“You said you wouldn’t tell.”]]> 2020-09-30 15:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791646473 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791647655 The author was successful in creating child-like dialogue because there are many phrases that many of us have also said before. There are childish quotes that no adult would say. ]]> 2020-09-30 15:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791647655 Alexys A: "okay, but you promise you won't tell" https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791648709 "Im around 6 years old and im playing cowboys outside..."]]> 2020-09-30 15:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791648709 Chloe W. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791649314 The authors wrote the story like they had only the common sense of a child and used made up words or extremely exaggerated things.]]> 2020-09-30 15:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791649314 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791649610 "I’m playing cowboys outside with my friend..."
"...throughout my elementary school years..."]]> 2020-09-30 15:08:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791649610 imanie https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791653934 “And see? I never got in trouble for it.”]]> 2020-09-30 15:09:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791653934 Nathan A 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791655208 “I promise I won’t tell. I’d do it myself, but I don’t have to go.”

“You said you wouldn’t tell.”]]> 2020-09-30 15:09:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791655208 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791655798  "My eyes squint and my lips roll back over my buckteeth and not one tear comes out because every drop of water in me is shooting out like I’m trying to arc it across the Grand Canyon."
"In the same nanosecond my pee hits that hot furnace, the yellow steam rolls up around me like I’m Mandrake the Magician in the middle of a disappearing act, which I’m not but really wish I was."]]> 2020-09-30 15:09:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791655798 Meryalice M. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791657132 "I best be rehearsing my role as a jail bird, because it is going to be a long time before I leave my room"

"John could always get me to help him pound those last few nails into my coffin for him."]]> 2020-09-30 15:10:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791657132 Teon H https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791657988 "I’m playing cowboys outside"

"When the last drop sizzles off the top of the hot oil furnace, I stand, gazing dazed through the yellow mist. “You said you wouldn’t tell.”]]> 2020-09-30 15:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791657988 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791658655 They are 8 and a half]]> 2020-09-30 15:10:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791658655 lauryn https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791661179 "My answer was always yes when the question came from my brother.' AND ": “If your brother told you to jump off a bridge, would you do it?”"]]> 2020-09-30 15:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791661179 Alexys A: "when the last drop sizzles off top of the hot oil furnace, I stand, gazing dazed through the yellow fence" https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791664678 "John sitting in the chair reading a book, observes the obvious as I burst through the door and says, "Wanna do something neat?" ]]> 2020-09-30 15:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791664678 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791665344 "If i ever have my own team I am picking everyone first" 

"but on your bad days couldn't you just say "Hey im having a bad day, instead of telling me I'm stupid or poor"


]]> 2020-09-30 15:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791665344 imanie https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791667205 This is a job for a bawl baby. My eyes squint and my lips roll back over my buckteeth and not one tear comes out because every drop of water in me is shooting out like I’m trying to arc it across the Grand Canyon.]]> 2020-09-30 15:12:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791667205 Imanie https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791671579 there are a lot of sayings a kid would tell someone and how the boy was playing with friends throws in a little bit of innocence ]]> 2020-09-30 15:13:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791671579 Alondra V https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791671721 They all really showed what goes on inside a kids mind. how they don't really analyze their actions all the way through. They say things that you have said as a kid.]]> 2020-09-30 15:13:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791671721 Teon H. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791675278 "In the same nanosecond my pee hits that hot furnace, the yellow steam rolls up around me like I’m Mandrake the Magician in the middle of a disappearing act, which I’m not but really
wish I was."

"It is widely believed I am telling the truth when I say John told me to do it (“I was just teasing. Geez, I didn’t think he’d really do it”) but his is a misdemeanor and mine a felony that spawns another of those unanswerable questions I will hear throughout my elementary school years: “If your brother told you to jump off a bridge, would you do it?”
Of course I would, if he made it seem neat."
]]> 2020-09-30 15:13:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791675278 Stephany T. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791677120 "I know instantly from the sssssssssss and the horrific stench..."

"When the last sizzles off the top of the hot oil furnace, I stand, gazing dazed through the yellow mist..."]]> 2020-09-30 15:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791677120 Nathan A 708261 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791678489 "My eyes squint and my lips roll back over my buckteeth and not one tear comes out because every drop of water in me is shooting out like I’m trying to arc it across the Grand Canyon."

"I know instantly from the sssssssssss and the horrific stench that I better not be making plans to play Roy Rogers again soon."]]> 2020-09-30 15:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791678489 Lauryn https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791679653 "If I go inside to pee, I stand to lose my exalted spot atop the yellow broomstick that is Roy’s mighty palomino, Trigger," 

and 

"In the same nanosecond my pee hits that hot furnace, the yellow steam rolls up around me like I’m Mandrake the Magician in the middle of a disappearing act"

]]> 2020-09-30 15:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791679653 Mercedes Solis https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791683578 about 6 years old

]]> 2020-09-30 15:15:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791683578 Alexys A:These authors captured the childs voices through tone and mood. They analyze how kids don't think about the future consequences of their action, they just do. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791692102 2020-09-30 15:17:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791692102 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791701433 "it is a fact that bumblebees have hair on their eyes and humans, also, should comb through everything they see."

"everything floats so good in the dead sea. and just ‘cause no one ever passes notes to me"


]]> 2020-09-30 15:19:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791701433 Meryalice M. https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791706846 he uses words that children would use such as phrases that are very basic and ungrammerly such as "wanna, dunno, etc."]]> 2020-09-30 15:20:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791706846 Kendall https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791714528 Oblivious, Innocent.

]]> 2020-09-30 15:22:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791714528 Joselyn N. 5358551 https://padlet.com/mvonfange/nrood9po53wgwb8p/wish/791720171 "doesn't mean I am not super duper."
"I think if I lived in a house with attic I'd nightmare a burglar in my safety chest"

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