https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q Please analyze the response below using your rubrics. What made the response strong? What made the response weak? What could the author do next time to improve? en-us 2017-01-27 14:16:51 UTC 2021-04-11 18:40:53 UTC hello@padlet.com edefifthgrade201 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149878250 The goldfish are monsters because they can grow to be 4 pounds. The photograph on page 16 shows a humongous gold fish. The goldfish was put there by a irresponsible pet owner who wanted to get rid of their pet. I don't like people who do that because I think pet are part of a family. You wouldn't get rid of your little brother when you have to take care of him, would you? Even if YOU would, I wouldn't because he's family. The goldfish are also eating all of the food and fish eggs from the native species. This is sad but unfortunate. It's called evolution and evolution happens. That's why the goldfish are called monsters. ]]> 2017-01-27 14:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149878250 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149897699 The response did not stay on topic.
It also had the readers opinion which the question didn't ask. It also had 1 domain specific vocabulary of "native species". It also didn't have text evidence but it also barely answers the question. And finally the response is confusing. So give this response a 2 -Angel :| 

1+ -Marco :( 

2- Bruno


]]> 2017-01-27 15:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149897699 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149897989 It didn't stay on topic. For example, it states in the middle the author's opinion about the pet being like family. The author does not restate at all. The author just wrote why he or she thinks the goldfish are monsters. They don't 
use domain specific vocabulary. Even though the writing was pretty organized, when the author mentioned page 16 it should of had an analysis to explain the photograph. That is why we would give this response a 2+ because author was somewhat organized.
 ]]> 2017-01-27 15:07:29 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149897989 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149898009  We would give this response a 2. This is because the question didn't ask for the writer's opinion. The response also does not stay on topic because it starts talking about abandoning your little brother. The response also does not have a lot of text evidence or an analysis. The response also barely has any support for the writer's claim of the goldfish being a monster. The response is also a bit confusing. This answer to this question also does not have a strong introduction and conclusion. The answer only uses one or two domain specific vocabulary and has no coherent flow.]]> 2017-01-27 15:07:31 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149898009 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149898123 We gave this response a 2. It didn't stay on topic. They also stated their opinion which the question doesn't ask. Also in the answer they spelled goldfish with a space in between . They don't have good text support. They also could of used more domain specific vocabulary.]]> 2017-01-27 15:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149898123 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149898709 We give this response a 2. It is a 2 because it has good ideas, but sometimes it is not clear to the reader. Some grammar mistakes make it funny to read, but overall, kind of clear. They also could have used better and much more text evidence for their analysis. They also could've used more domain specific vocabulary. The question also never asked for the writer's opinion. The writer also didn't stay on topic, such as adding about their little brother and evolution. ]]> 2017-01-27 15:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149898709 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149898939 We will give this response 2. The response doesn't say on topic on some points. The author could have used more text evidence for the answer as well. They also didn't use much domain specific vocabulary. It could have been stronger if it had text evidence, stronger words, and was on topic.]]> 2017-01-27 15:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/149898939 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/156888694 2017-02-28 22:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/156888694 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/288781463 2018-10-03 17:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/288781463 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/439771651 I don’t think I’m supposed be here]]> 2020-02-03 17:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/439771651 https://padlet.com/edefifthgrade201/nr1yu6zl5i1q/wish/478505367 Wut is this place of COMMENTS


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