https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1 Our Best Writing! en-us 2016-09-01 21:01:42 UTC 2026-02-25 22:45:36 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220277 1)I need to be more organized in my writing by using paragraphs when there in dialog, a new subject, or a different setting.
2) I also need to add tone and detail to my dialog.
3) I also need to use resources for spelling like the dictonary and thesaurous.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220277 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220285 1) I will choose a narrative with a lesson/theme
2)I will be more descriptive by elaborating more on each topic.

]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220285 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220290 1. I need to tie up loose ends at the end of my story
2. I need to spell better by using resouces around me]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220290 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220291 1. I want to work on setting the stage for what lesson would be learned during the story
2. I also want to work on having a meaning behind my stories]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220291 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220293 I need to add more detail by adding more dialog, inner dialog, and a more descriptive setting.

I need to work on making my stories longer.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220293 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220298 1) I need to more paragraphs when the settings change and when some one is talking
2) I need to add dialogue in my story when someone is talking]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220298 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220307 1) I need to give the reader a more alert on the lesson in the writing.

2) I also need to work on when to separate my writings into paragraphs.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220307 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220314  I need to use more descriptive words so my readers can  understand my setting and characters more.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220314 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220315 1. I want to work on having a lesson in my writing.

2. I also want to use more transitions to make my text more interesting.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220315 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220321 1. I need to work more on my spelling and to make sure I can ]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220321 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220327 1. I will use paragraphs to show change in time/place
2. I will cause a lesson to be learned]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220327 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220329 I will try and focus on the theme and make sure to hook the reader.
I will try to add the characters expression and tone of their voice.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220329 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220337 1. My goal is to use more descriptive adjectives  ]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220337 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220345 1. I need to work on my handwriting
2.I need to work on spelling]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220345 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220348 1. I will write a narrative with a lesson
2. I will write with more details so the reader will understand what I am trying to explain.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220348 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220355 My goal is to be more descriptive by using more adjectives,change each characters tone, and introduce each character.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220355 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220395 1. I need to add more details, internal thoughts.

2. I need more transition words to my stories.

3. I need to have a lesson to add to my stories and narratives when I write.]]> 2016-09-01 21:04:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220395 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220430 1. I will improve my spelling by keeping some kind of spelling tool, so that if I don't know how to spell something, I can use my spelling tool to find out how to spell it.
2. I want to develop lessons more clearly. I will do this by adding in hints and mini-lessons, so they can tell what the lesson is]]> 2016-09-01 21:05:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220430 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220437 1. My goal is to use more dialogue and thoughts.
2. I also want to organize my story into more paragraphs so it's easier to read.]]> 2016-09-01 21:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220437 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220447 1. My goal is use more dialouge and work in my spelling.

]]> 2016-09-01 21:05:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220447 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220457 My goals are to make my characters seem real by including more dialogue and personality.

I want to elaborate my stories by being discriptive and adding adjectives.]]> 2016-09-01 21:05:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220457 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220488 -write more
-add more details
-discriptive

]]> 2016-09-01 21:05:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220488 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220560 1. I need to work on my dialog with all of my characters because there is very little in all of my stories.

2.  I also would like to work on reactions especially when it comes to shock or tragedy and comedy.

3. I also need to work on my ending with like a life lesson or how I felt.]]> 2016-09-01 21:06:05 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220560 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220561 1. I need to work on my spelling and to make sure my spelling is correct every time.
2. I need to use more punctuation in my writting to give my story more felling.  
3. I need to put more life in my characters and make them talk more. ]]> 2016-09-01 21:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220561 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220598 Another one of my goals is to use resou]]> 2016-09-01 21:06:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220598 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220605 1. I want to make my story more descriptive by using more dialouge and inner dialouge.
2. I want to use a dictionary to make my spelling correct.]]> 2016-09-01 21:06:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220605 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220651 1.I need to start adding punctuation.
2.I need to add paragraphs.]]> 2016-09-01 21:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121220651 https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121221013 1. Each character should act and have a tone when they speak.
2. is to use resources to spell correctly such as asking people.]]> 2016-09-01 21:09:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mgriffit1/nqlfzahg02g1/wish/121221013