The Soul Crushing Student Essay - Annotate THIS! 2b by Professor Tanisha Neely https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn Make at least 3 notes for each bullet point and share your annotations (for each assigned section of text): Names - People, Places and Things (@ and make marginal notes about who or what they are and why they are important to the text - Who is part of this conversation? When, Where and Why is this conversation taking place) Main Ideas (Underline and make marginal notes) Interesting Words (Circle and make marginal notes or define the term) Important Ideas or Events (Asterisk and make marginal notes) Supporting Evidence (Check Mark and marginal notes) Questions About the Text (Question Mark and marginal notes with your specific questions - Who? What? When? Where? Why? How? Gut Feelings About the Text (Emojis with marginal notes about how you feel) en-us 2022-01-20 19:55:50 UTC 2022-01-20 21:44:24 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f913.png mellybean https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003864765 yhwh?]]> 2022-01-20 21:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003864765 Dispiriting nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003865291 2022-01-20 21:27:58 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003865291 Ineffable nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003865710 2022-01-20 21:28:16 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003865710 Fitfully nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003865999 2022-01-20 21:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003865999 Grace Paley nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003866477 2022-01-20 21:28:54 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003866477 Finnegan! mellybean https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003866691 2022-01-20 21:29:05 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003866691 Barbarian Days: A Surfing Life afield824 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003866751 2022-01-20 21:29:08 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003866751 Students aren't taught to express their inner selves in writing. afield824 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003868159 2022-01-20 21:30:21 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003868159 nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003868874 Valuing young people's complexity. Appreciating students' expressions through their works of writing]]> 2022-01-20 21:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003868874 Authors: John McPhee, William Finnegan, Barry Lopez. ltimmons042 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003868888 The author of this article references these other authors throughout his writing.]]> 2022-01-20 21:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003868888 Korb mellybean https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003869314 2022-01-20 21:31:18 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003869314 Expressing yourself. nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003869773 2022-01-20 21:31:41 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003869773 "Value more the complete and complex lives of young people" ltimmons042 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003870341 It is important for young people's interests to be seen so that they know the things they care about have value.]]> 2022-01-20 21:32:12 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003870341 Students said "We can say I?" mellybean https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003870624 2022-01-20 21:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003870624 Most of us have been conditioned to the idea that we cannot/should not use the word "I" when writing. And a student in this essay asked if "We can say 'I'". nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003872207 2022-01-20 21:33:39 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003872207 "Encourage young people to take seriously those lives they've lived." ltimmons042 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003872258 The things young people have gone through and how they talk about them are very important to their development as writers ]]> 2022-01-20 21:33:43 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003872258 Did sand actually fall out of his book? mellybean https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003874034 2022-01-20 21:35:11 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003874034 The realization of the author's point to make the essay in the first place, was noticing the behavior of his students in the hallways. nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003874064 2022-01-20 21:35:13 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003874064 What do Barbarians have to do with Surfing? afield824 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003874296 2022-01-20 21:35:24 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003874296 What does YHWH mean? ltimmons042 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003874304 2022-01-20 21:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003874304 What is the relevance of the sand in the book? ltimmons042 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003875153 2022-01-20 21:36:05 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003875153 Why do most teachers discourage the use of the word "I" when students write? Isn't school/education MOSTLY about students? nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003875940 2022-01-20 21:36:45 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003875940 ltimmons042 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003876629 I agree with a lot of the main points the author made ]]> 2022-01-20 21:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003876629 Teachers always complain about what Students think, even when they're the ones who have been teaching them their whole lives. afield824 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003876736 2022-01-20 21:37:23 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003876736 Why were the school shootings brought up? mellybean https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003876783 2022-01-20 21:37:26 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003876783 ltimmons042 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003878077 I think being a professor for ten years makes him a credible source. ]]> 2022-01-20 21:38:33 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003878077 I feel that the facts and points made in this passage were true and relatable and I could take a lot of what was said into consideration, into my own life. nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003878097 2022-01-20 21:38:33 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003878097 "Now go and write." But what if I don't want to write? mellybean https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003878104 2022-01-20 21:38:34 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003878104 When his dad was killed in a car accident. afield824 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003878717 2022-01-20 21:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003878717 At ease, Important nways274 https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003884988 2022-01-20 21:44:03 UTC https://padlet.com/professorneely/nojrspj1ajj7msyn/wish/2003884988