7th Grade Writing by Caitlin Birck https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc Leave me some feedback on my writing pieces! en-us 2022-01-31 14:13:20 UTC 2022-04-11 16:12:13 UTC hello@padlet.com Sarah W. https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2023445078 I loved how pusuasive and enriched in facts your piece was. I think the town would totally benefit from and make money off of a winter farmers market!]]> 2022-02-01 14:35:51 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2023445078 Devasrigauri Lokesh https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2023516141 I really enjoyed reading your conclusoin, it made the summarized the main points and it had a great sum up. One of my wish is to give more background information in the introduction ]]> 2022-02-01 15:03:42 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2023516141 I liked the reasons you listed on how a winter farmers market would benefit and I also liked the types of crops you said in the quotes that could be sold in those times in the year. My wish is doesn’t have anything to do with your writing piece but on my screen it was posted twice. https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2023530038 -From your bffil the one and only Max]]> 2022-02-01 15:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2023530038 I like your wallpaper 27bcardenas https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2027965356 but more importantly, your essay was amazing! my first 💫 was your descriptive language. “months where it feels like the air is frozen solid” and “biting cold” were all great figurative language. My second 🌟 was your idea altogether. It is, really important to have a farmers market all year round, so people can get healthy and go out together. No wishes for me 
🗿👏 ]]> 2022-02-03 17:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2027965356 brian here 27bcardenas https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2088809851 ⭐️1= My first star was how the slideshow was made. More specifically,  the types of fonts and the numbered slides. I thought that it made it nice to look at.
🌟2= my second star was that on slide 2 it had all of the benefits of the twisty tool. Like how it can stick to anything, and i can prevent injuries.
😵‍💫= i have no wish for you champ B>]]> 2022-03-10 17:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2088809851 Informative Article 27mcoppockhuegel https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2139164802 Hi Caitlin! 

My star for you is how much information was in your article and how much you knew. There was so much to learn about even if you know a lot about baking already. My wish for you is that it was a bit longer. It was long but the sections were short. I would have liked to learn more on each topic but I still learned so much! 
-Meg :)]]> 2022-04-11 13:32:46 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2139164802 hey. =) 27bcardenas https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2139432574 Your canva project is AMAZING. The format of the article makes a lot of sense, and i loved reading it. Another star i have is the whole idea itself. I love the concept of how baking can improve your mental health and mood. No wishes :)))))]]> 2022-04-11 16:12:13 UTC https://padlet.com/27cbirck/nnyjuc2egt8pfjnc/wish/2139432574