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Hà

workhardabc — 2025-10-03 13:40:30 UTC

One of the problem is that self-emloyed lack of experience. As a result, they will not have the knowledge to handle practical problems. One solutions to lack of experience is for the self-employed learn from other people's experiences, learn from everywhere and eveything they can. That helps them gain more experiences

ĐĂNG

2025-10-03 13:43:59 UTC

Introduction

-Nowadays, many people choose to join a gym to improve their health.

-This trend has both advantages and disadvantages.

-For example, some people enjoy the modern facilities, while others think the cost is too high.

-Overall, I believe the advantages are stronger.

Body 1 – Advantages (Stronger Side)

-Firstly, gyms provide a wide range of equipment that helps people exercise more effectively than at home.

-They also offer trainers who can teach proper techniques and prevent injuries.

-For instance, beginners can get guidance on how to lift weights safely.

-In addition, the gym environment motivates people to maintain a regular workout routine.

Body 2 – Disadvantages (Weaker Side)

However, joining a gym also has some drawbacks.
The membership fee can be expensive, especially for students or low-income people.
For example, many people pay monthly fees but do not go often because they are too busy.
Moreover, gyms can be crowded during peak hours, which makes it harder to use the equipment.

Conclusion

-In conclusion, going to the gym has both benefits and disadvantages.

-Although it can be costly and sometimes inconvenient, these problems are not very serious.

-The health benefits and motivation it provides are much more important.

-Therefore, the advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantages.

Ng Vân Khánh

2025-10-03 13:44:47 UTC

body 1: crowded, expensive ( people who don't have enough money )

body 2:

main idea 1: keep fit, stay in shape ( many people have shapely, well-built )

main idea 2: being instructed by professionals ( they give them a detail process )

Phúc Hưng

2025-10-03 13:45:23 UTC

body 1: weaker side

Main idea: cost a lot and not convenient
explain: crowded, ticket cost high

body 2: stronger side

Main idea: cheaper, have more time
explain: dont have to pay for ticket, dont waste time in moving

Tiên

2025-10-03 13:50:11 UTC

My is the happiest girl in my class

My cat is fatter than my dog now

This picture is more beautiful than my picture

This is the worst movie I have ever seen

QCHI

2025-10-10 13:47:50 UTC

from my perspective, the advantages of this can overshadow its drawback

advantages:
coach- guide - how to practice exactly- avoid injury
disadvantages:
jogging, eat healthy meals, avoid fast food, relax.
costly,give up, money -lost

nquynh

2025-10-10 13:48:02 UTC

body 1: healthier body

explain and/or example: build up strength, avoid injury

body 2: lose motivation

explain and/or example: far from home

expensive

explain and/or example: gym membership, hire a personal coach is expensive

Hoàng Khang

2025-10-10 13:49:01 UTC

One problem is to lack job stability and financial security. because self-employed people often depend on finding enough clients or projects each month. To reduce this stress, self-employed people can plan carefully before starting, build a strong network and use online tools. This help them save time, stay organize, and focus more on improving their main products or services

Thảo

2025-10-10 13:51:05 UTC

advantages overshadow drawbacks

part 1: weaker side

- expensive, demand persistance

not all of the people are disciplined and persistant

part 2: stronger side

- have coach correct and adjust your wrong postures

eg: you may

-not have enough equipments and devicesges overshadow drawbacks

part 1: weaker side

- expensive, demand persistance

not all of the people are disciplined and persistant

part 2: stronger side

- have coach correct and adjust your wrong postures

-not have enough equipment and devices

+only do basic exercise

diepanh

2025-10-13 14:45:34 UTC

I am the happiest person in the world

He is less fatter than anyone else

She is less beautiful than her sister

he is the worst person in this class

Ko sửa post này

workhardabc — 2025-10-13 14:46:45 UTC

vhung

2025-11-07 14:42:44 UTC

body 1: weaker side
main idea:
explain and/or example: in my opinion, the advantages of joining a gym clearly outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, gyms offer a wide range of professional equipment that allows people to exercise more effectively than at home. This variety helps individuals train different muscle groups safely and efficiently. Secondly, most gyms provide experienced trainers and group classes, which guide beginners, improve technique, and reduce the risk of injury.

body 2: stronger side: However, it is true that gyms can be costly, and they often become overcrowded during peak hours, which may cause inconvenience or limit access to certain machines. Despite this drawback, I believe the overall benefits—such as better facilities, guidance, and motivation—make joining a gym a worthwhile choice for most people.

Đ.Khánh

2025-11-21 14:51:51 UTC

body 1: weaker side
main idea: lack of motivation
explain and/or example: not having a stable schedule or no one reminded can make people feel bored easily

body 2: stronger side:
main idea 1: have enough equipment
explain and/or example 1: enough equipment and instructors is necessary. They give good advice and detailed instruction

main idea 2: interaction
explain and/or example 2: meet new people, follow advices from others, not alone

huyền

2025-11-21 14:52:26 UTC

body 1:

weaker side: Disadvantages of going to the gym

main idea: Expensive and crowded

explain and/or example:

-Membership - expensive.

-annoying and disinteresting

body 2:

stronger side: Advantages of going to the gym

main idea 1: variety of equipment and classes.

explain and/or example 1:

-many equipment

- find what's right for you

main idea 2: motivated

explain and/or example 2: workout buddy

Tiên

lephamthaotien2009 — 2025-11-21 14:54:16 UTC

Idea for weaker side (Disadvantage)

Main Idea: Although gyms are places for training, the limitations regarding facilities (crowding) and finances (cost) are significant.

Example: When a gym is too crowded, especially in the afternoon/evening, people have to wait for equipment, which reduces efficiency. Furthermore, the monthly membership fee, plus other charges (classes, towels), can become a considerable financial burden.

Ideas for stronger side (Advantages)

Main Idea 1 :Gyms provide specialized equipment and a structured environment that optimizes training.

Example: Specialized machines (like selectorized weight stacks, advanced cardio devices) allow users to target specific muscle groups effectively, which is difficult to achieve at home.

Bảo

2025-11-21 14:57:27 UTC

Body 1: weaker side

main idea: crowded, expensive

ex: many people, not private, high cost fee

Body 2: stronger side

main idea 1: equipment variety

ex: good and better equipment

main idea 2: motivation

ex: feel more energy to work out