qMetaphor 

qSimile 

qSensory description 

qHigher vocabulary- adjectives. Verbs, adverbs 

qEmotive language 

qDramatic punctuation  

- Ellipses, exclamation, question mark, dash 

qSpelling 

qPunctuation 

qgrammar

Task 2

Wandering through a derelict garden, it felt like something was watching me. Eyes on the tree bark looking at my impure, wicked soul wondering what I am doing in this pitch-black forest... My sweat poured like waterfalls and tears also drops to the floor. My legs started to shiver; I crouched down and trembled in fear hearing voices in my head: LOSER, FAILURE, IDIOT, FOOL: all those words floating all over my head making me feel faint and inferior to everyone. I then screamed my blood-curling voice and ran and ran and ran... Flesh craving demons started to chase me with their mouth open with their saliva drooling! (DEMONIC SCREAMS) As I tried to escape from the forest,  there was a mysterious person wearing a black cloak? The person saved my life and the demons got exterminated. THANK GOD!!! The woman then held my hand. It was like the sun smiling at me and it felt warm... The cloaked person then told me, 'Come with me and I will give you shelter, food and my love...'
This moment changed my life forever...

Claws grew out of his fingers, hair bristled from his spine, his teeth grew yellow and thick. His nose blackened and his eyes reddened. He let out a shrill cry. He ran away. The pain was too much for him, his clothes ripped after every step, he grew larger, hairier, more fearsome, he growled. He ran into the deep dark forest. He tripped and fell, he watched his unholy reflection upon the water he shrieked in despair and ran towards the village in thirst for blood.

me, it felt like it kept a close eye on me, watching my every move, waiting for me to go inside, and so with my foolish acts i went inside the house, my stomach curled as i entered, the landscape was distorted almost like a kid made this place, but even so it was still enough to give me the creeps, as i went in and explored more, it just seemed that the place was nothing more than a rubble, but then steps appeared from behind, the thing that was watching me was sounding like it was coming closer and closer until i turned around and seen its demonic face with eyes peering inside of my soul, its skin ripped to shreds and only its flesh is seen to the eye, it stood in front of me towering over me, then it lowered and...

Once upon a midnight dreary.A shrill cry echoed through the wind as I wander deeper into the ghostly mist trying to find a way out of this terrible mistake.As I reached a stone cold wall in the distance an icy finger gripped my arm in the darkness, I shrugged but also fell to the ground but when I  stood up my eyes caught the attention of a crooked,tall,old house standing  right in front of me it’s like it just spawned out of the knower petrified but altering I decided to search the back to see what secrets I could find.while trying to ignore the distressing whispers for help in my ear I freeze to see a dull yellow light shining above me. I slowly twist my body to see what it could possibly be and shocked to see it leaking out the crack window from the abandoned house.at this point I don’t  even realising my heart begging to escape my ribs and my breath struggling  to warn me to turn back then the front door creaks open...

Sarah.