Evidence of success criteria by Teacher https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34 en-us 2025-09-08 02:01:28 UTC 2025-09-08 02:59:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/8.0/svg/1f4da.svg jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572908257 Topic

Explain

Evidence

Elaborate

Link


]]> 2025-09-08 02:27:19 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572908257 Pollutes the ocean (fact) jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572914872 I think it horrible for this world

]]> 2025-09-08 02:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572914872 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572914876 Firstly, I strongly believe that graffiti does not look professional on a the side of a building and drives away loyal customers. There are hundreds of buildings in Morayfield covered in graffiti and you are always forced to look at them. For example, next to moray field shopping centre there is a huge building with a mountain of graffiti on it, and nobody goes inside. That’s no coincidence. How much longer could you live in a world like this? Furthermore, this is an issue that we need to fix now before people do not want to leave their houses.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572914876 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572916124 First of all, homeless are everywhere which makes it crucial to solve this issue. There are people sleeping on benches, sleeping bags and tents. Take Centenary Lakes for example there are innocent people who are sleeping on benches, in sleeping bags and tents. Is this really what you want? A solution could be more homeless shelters. You must act now or everyone will be on the streets. Mr Young do you want everyone homeless?                                                                                                                                                                                    

]]> 2025-09-08 02:30:58 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572916124 Dear mr young jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572916547 2025-09-08 02:31:09 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572916547 Deadly jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572917031 2025-09-08 02:31:25 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572917031 Pollution https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572917404 The earth becomes more polluted everyday

]]> 2025-09-08 02:31:37 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572917404 llait5 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572918214 Topic

Explain

Evidence

Elaborate

Link

And don’t forget to like and follow☝️🧏‍♂️

]]> 2025-09-08 02:31:47 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572918214 Dear Mr Terry young https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572918986 2025-09-08 02:32:10 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572918986 Graffiti https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572919500 I use graffiti in every paragraph to enforce the issue

]]> 2025-09-08 02:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572919500 Deadly jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572920328 2025-09-08 02:32:51 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572920328 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572921955 For example 1 month ago, vandalists targeted a freshly painted house in Morayfield and the result was no pleasant.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572921955 You have to jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572922163 2025-09-08 02:33:51 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572922163 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572922454 . For example every week fruit pricing goes up a huge amount and overtime they become too expensive to afford! One week a bag of carrots are $4.99 and a week later it is now $5.50 on clearance jaw dropping don't you think? I believe that  you can lead all shops by adding a fresh fruit cart for all ages to access when in need.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:34:00 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572922454 Help fundraising hmarl11 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572922601 2025-09-08 02:34:04 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572922601 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572923275 There are kind innocent children on the streets (opinion)

People are homeless (fact)

]]> 2025-09-08 02:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572923275 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572924035 Firstly, I strongly believe that graffiti does not look professional on a the side of a building and drives away loyal customers.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572924035 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572924751 I use homeless in every paragraph

]]> 2025-09-08 02:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572924751 Have to jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572925432 need to

Understand

]]> 2025-09-08 02:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572925432 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572925446 Plastic is on land and in water all around our community. Thousands of ruthless people just dropped plastic scraps on the ground. People throw there empty drink bottles and food wrappers on the ground. People should recycle everything they have. We need you to make a recycle building in the community.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572925446 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572925452 Dear Mr Young

]]> 2025-09-08 02:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572925452 You must fix it!!! kroge159 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572925765 2025-09-08 02:35:34 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572925765 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572926984 Furthermore, this is an issue that we need to fix now before people do not want to leave their houses.

Paragraph 2

Secondly graffiti is incredibly disrespectful to the community and the owners of the building.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572926984 Pollution https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572927122 polluting

]]> 2025-09-08 02:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572927122 dlabi0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572927495 Dear Mr Terry Young

]]> 2025-09-08 02:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572927495 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572929450 Mr Terry Young you must act now

]]> 2025-09-08 02:37:21 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572929450 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572929814 I use the words cost of living a lot in all my paragraphs

]]> 2025-09-08 02:37:32 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572929814 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572930051 You must solve this major issue

]]> 2025-09-08 02:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572930051 Do you really want to have a polluted ocean? jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572931502 2025-09-08 02:38:23 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572931502 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572931666 Wasting your money

]]> 2025-09-08 02:38:28 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572931666 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572932266 Thousands of ruthless people just dropped plastic scraps on the ground. If the Morayfield locals stop littering, we will have a cleaner planet.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:38:45 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572932266 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572932570 We need to take action immediately

]]> 2025-09-08 02:38:55 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572932570 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572932704 Kind innocent harmless (rule of 3)

Is this really what you want? (rhetorical question)

Homeless (repetition)



]]> 2025-09-08 02:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572932704 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572932902 appalling crime.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:39:06 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572932902 Must jlekk0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572933365 need

The truth

]]> 2025-09-08 02:39:21 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572933365 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572934622 you must take action

]]> 2025-09-08 02:39:59 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572934622 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572934883 Scared anxious and worried for the future (rule of 3)

]]> 2025-09-08 02:40:07 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572934883 Firstly, https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572936401 Secondly,

Lastly

]]> 2025-09-08 02:40:47 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572936401 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572936470 Don’t you realise that without security cameras our buildings are all at risk?

]]> 2025-09-08 02:40:49 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572936470 You must fix crime immediately dlabi0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572936511 2025-09-08 02:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572936511 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572937198 Dangerous criminals

]]> 2025-09-08 02:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572937198 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572937435 Don’t you realise that without security cameras our buildings are all at risk?

]]> 2025-09-08 02:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572937435 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572938276 Innocent

Harmless

]]> 2025-09-08 02:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572938276 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572938968 Firstly, Constant pollution is effecting people's life. Most people feel unhappy when they see litter on the lush green ground. For example rubbish left lying around get’s blown by the large gust of wind in to rivers and oceans. Pollution in water ways is dangerous to wildlife. So you can get people happy and animals safe forever by telling people to not pollution.

Secondly Plastic is on land and in water all around our community. Thousands of ruthless people just dropped plastic scraps on the ground. People throw there empty drink bottles and food wrappers on the ground. People should recycle everything they have. We need you to make a recycle building in the community.

Thirty We must build more recycling centres so we can stop the pollution and littering. Littering is terrible because it is hurting our environment and animals. By building more recycling centres, our locals will be encouraged to recycle and not litter! If the Morayfield locals stop littering, we will have a cleaner planet. Let’s start building recycling centres for the community.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572938968 Dear Mr terry young munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572939802 2025-09-08 02:42:33 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572939802 Rise https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572940378 Cost of living is on the rise

]]> 2025-09-08 02:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572940378 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572942418 I just use community a lot because it is a community issue.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:43:57 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572942418 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572942685 sky high and still on the rise.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572942685 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572943248 Doesn’t this make you scared for the future of the community

]]> 2025-09-08 02:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572943248 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572944547 Dear Mr Terry Young

]]> 2025-09-08 02:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572944547 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572946247 Firstly, many people have experienced food inflammation making it harder to buy food with higher pricing. For example every week fruit pricing goes up a huge amount and overtime they become too expensive to afford! One week a bag of carrots are $4.99 and a week later it is now $5.50 on clearance jaw dropping don't you think? Now consider I believe that  you can lead all shops by adding a fresh fruit cart for all ages to access when in need. We can all take this into action by filling it up when it's empty, assuring everyone has food 20 4/7

]]> 2025-09-08 02:45:42 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572946247 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572947254 unhappy

]]> 2025-09-08 02:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572947254 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572947746 Firstly secondly lastly

]]> 2025-09-08 02:46:27 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572947746 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572949713 slowly

]]> 2025-09-08 02:47:24 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572949713 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572951695 litter

]]> 2025-09-08 02:48:22 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572951695 munde35 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572956419 Doesn’t this make you scared for the community’s future

]]> 2025-09-08 02:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572956419 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572957004 Will you help us to save us and the planet or will you let us die slowly?

]]> 2025-09-08 02:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572957004 You must stop crime dlabi0 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572958444 2025-09-08 02:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572958444 Must fhook3 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572959455 2025-09-08 02:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572959455 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572960990 Pollution in water ways is dangerous to wildlife.

]]> 2025-09-08 02:52:19 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572960990 Hi josh fhook3 https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572963795 2025-09-08 02:53:36 UTC https://padlet.com/minimbahstateschool6/nmync439iwhwaz34/wish/3572963795