https://padlet.com/christie1cp/nmmreuhxxmro Made with charisma en-us 2017-11-01 18:43:12 UTC 2023-02-15 01:01:50 UTC hello@padlet.com christie1cp https://padlet.com/christie1cp/nmmreuhxxmro/wish/202668394 2017-11-01 18:46:07 UTC https://padlet.com/christie1cp/nmmreuhxxmro/wish/202668394 purely_tragic https://padlet.com/christie1cp/nmmreuhxxmro/wish/204153368 There were so many capitalization errors in this cover letter! Here are a few examples and what they should have been: earth, Disney, Disney World. I also didn't enjoy reading it because it kind of felt empty and other enthusiastic--it's good to make it clear you want the job, but not in a cheesy 5-year-old way. Also, what job are you even applying for? All this cover letter says is "the job."]]> 2017-11-06 22:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/christie1cp/nmmreuhxxmro/wish/204153368 slambo97 https://padlet.com/christie1cp/nmmreuhxxmro/wish/205126178 This letter seemed very one-dimensional: the author loves Disney. Although this isn't necessarily a bad thing, the author seemed to only focus on her love for Disney. If they had mentioned more in their letter, such as their education or work experience, I think this would have been a much stronger article, as the passion for the job was very clearly shown, if the author mentioned what skills they have that would have qualified them for this position. Additionally, they were vague about what job opening they were applying for.]]> 2017-11-09 03:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/christie1cp/nmmreuhxxmro/wish/205126178