P1/2 Nearpod Editing and Revising Lesson by ANDREA LEWIS

P1/2 Nearpod Editing and Revising Lesson by ANDREA LEWIS https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs When you are done, open your journals and start writing! en-us 2018-10-11 01:56:04 UTC 2025-10-22 10:15:52 UTC hello@padlet.com Maggie young myou2950 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531406 something to fight for]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531406 A time I experienced chan mmac2150 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531407 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531407 Jadyn jsce7790 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531409 A time I helped someone.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531409 Arish amar9160 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531414 Family vacation]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531414 dbru8040 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531423 a dense change]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531423 Gabby gcan9650 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531438 Memorable Birthday]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531438 Elementary memory ddug6030 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531449 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531449 Juana jala8950 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531460 A Time you had to be brave

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531460 Liza evas8230 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531477 a bunch of stories of the struggle of a russian person in 1st grade

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531477 Sam Jeppson sjep3570 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531495 My memorable family vacation]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531495 Samantha Garrett https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531518 Family vacation]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531518 Memorable Family Vacation lles7050 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531540 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531540 Family Vacation\ syou8940 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531555

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531555 Trinity tcar0350 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531572 an embarrasing moment]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531572 Hanging from a Tree jcar6800 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531590 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531590 Birthday party Fail mcar1260 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531627 2018-10-11 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531627 Hailey hmen8440 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531636 Elementary Memories]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531636 Nehemiah Huff https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531650 hard work pays off]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531650 Maggie young myou2950 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531691 It makes sure that u don't repeat what u firs write]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531691 Because it makes the story sound much better. mmac2150 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531707 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531707 Jadyn jsce7790 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531722 Synonyms make your writing better because then you don't use the same word 39721642622816217 times]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531722 It replaces boring words and makes the story sound better by making you sound sophisticated bbar7140 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531736 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531736 I learned about ARMS and CUPS jhag8240 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531744 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531744 they make the sentence more dbru8040 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531753 interesting to read]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531753 They make it different and interesting to read. ddug6030 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531763 2018-10-11 01:56:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531763 Sam Jeppson sjep3570 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531774 they can make the best words for the exact definition in a sente]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531774 Samantha Garrett https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531785 Synonyms make your writing seem more advanced and more in depth]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531785 Riley Pate rpat8480 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531796 Three interesting facts I learned was the ARMS method, the CUPS method,.
I learned that you should use synonyms to make your writing better and to hook the reader to keep reading more.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531796 Arish amar9160 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531806 Synonyms give the reader more attention when they are reading,while dead words would make the reader not want to read the book.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531806 Synonyms lles7050 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531813 Synonyms make your story more vivid and interesting ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531813 The Synonyms have a better meaning than just saying "im sad" jcar6800 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531816 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531816 Trinity tcar0350 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531821 it fixes up our words to make them more professional :))]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531821 They make it better by making the reader comprehend it better and make it more interesting to read syou8940 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531824 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531824 Liza evas8230 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531827 It makes it look professional and not like we're in 1st grade

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531827 Nehemiah https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531830 It makes it less boring, because you're not using boring words. You're using words that are more complex but mean the same thing.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531830 Mason mcar1260 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531835 because is makes the readers think of new words.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531835 Hailey hmen8440 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531839 they use words more interesting than just good bad and happy]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531839 Maggie young myou2950 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531842 There not the same thing]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531842 I learned that editting a mmac2150 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531846 2018-10-11 01:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531846 i learned that editing and revising are very different the both have acronyms like arms and cups. dbru8040 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531849 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531849 I learned that you revise and edit A LOT. ddug6030 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531857 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531857 Jadyn jsce7790 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531861 Three interesting facts i learned about editing and revising are, you don't just edit and revise once you edit and revise about 5 times. I also learned that you can use ARMS to help with revising. I learned that you can use CUPS to help with editing.

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531861 SAM Jeppson sjep3570 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531871 I now know a fast way of remembering steps of editing and revising and they are not the same and also have a specific order]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531871 Arish amar9160 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531879 I learned what strategies you should use for revising/editing.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531879 Three Interesting Facts lles7050 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531890 1.) The methods : CUPS and ARMS
2.) I also learned what CUPS and ARMS stand for. CUPS C=Capitalization U=Usage P=Punctuation S=Spelling
ARMS A=Add R=Remove M=Move
S=Spelling
3.) I learned how to use editing and revising more effectively. ]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531890 Juana jala8950 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531902 I learned that editing is looking for mistakes and revising is all about ideas. I also learned the meaning of CUPS and ARMS.

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531902 Interesting Facts jcar6800 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531910 1. They Are not the same.
2. Editing is CUPS
3. Revise is ARMS]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531910 Samantha Garrett https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531921 I learned that ARMS is a revising strategy.
I learned that CUPS is for a editing method.
I learned that you should use synonyms to increase the strength of your writing.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531921 Hailey hmen8440 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531936 Didn't learn much only the cups and arms]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531936 Liza evas8230 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531949 i learned that ARMS and CUPS where a strategy

]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531949 Trinity tcar0350 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531960 honestly, nothing really.]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531960 I really didn't learn anything syou8940 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531976 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531976 Rachel rhil1240 https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531988 2018-10-11 01:56:09 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291531988 Nehemiah https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291532002 I didn't really learn anything]]> 2018-10-11 01:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/alewis310/nmkjpd4s8kqs/wish/291532002