https://padlet.com/26schan/nmghesmvbsqb Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 19:28:49 UTC 2020-02-21 19:23:45 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f363.png 26sbirck https://padlet.com/26schan/nmghesmvbsqb/wish/420957080 I really liked how you made Becky seem like she was very insecure. It made me feel like she was a real person and that she was always like this. I also really liked how you described Emma. It really painted a picture in my head. :) But, I feel that you added too many characters, and they had no importance throughout the book, for example, Miranda, Jessie, Chelsea, and the dad. Maybe you can add the characters back in at the end.]]> 2019-12-06 19:21:41 UTC https://padlet.com/26schan/nmghesmvbsqb/wish/420957080 https://padlet.com/26schan/nmghesmvbsqb/wish/421663714 I liked how Becky was very paranoid and worried and this girl, Emma, whom she found crazy in the beginning actually ended up helping her towards the end. I also enjoyed Emma’s personality, I think it added some jazz to your story that I enjoyed. My wish is to add extra detail to make your story stand out. But I really liked this book a lot overall!

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