https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition Made with good vibes en-us 2017-10-03 11:22:33 UTC 2023-02-13 23:51:54 UTC hello@padlet.com nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/193356915 2017-10-03 11:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/193356915 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194280084 O murd'ress
Feigned vestal
Poor aspen wretch

-Chloe]]> 2017-10-05 13:04:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194280084 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194288931 O murd'ress, feigned vestal, poor aspen wretch, a verier ghost 

]]> 2017-10-05 13:19:10 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194288931 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194289903 Severely negative, he wants her to suffer ]]> 2017-10-05 13:20:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194289903 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194289988 Severely negative]]> 2017-10-05 13:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194289988 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194290261 The poetic voice shows a large amount of resent to the addressee and shows them in a spiteful manner. The poetic voice has a very negative and hateful view of this woman ]]> 2017-10-05 13:21:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194290261 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194292358 That it is possible that when in a relationship a sense of rejection can destroy someone to the point that they feel as if they have been murderedby the other person. Also it suggests that when you find the right person you should not let them go as then you can never get someone that could ever be as the same standard of them. The part of the poem where it suggests this is 'in worse arms' which shows that no one will ever be as good as the poetic voice 

]]> 2017-10-05 13:24:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194292358 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194292520 2017-10-05 13:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194292520 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194293954 Feigned vestal,poor aspen wretch,verier ghost, o mud'ress,]]> 2017-10-05 13:26:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194293954 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194294382 'When by they scorn']]> 2017-10-05 13:27:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194294382 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194297436 'Then shall my ghost come to your bed'
'Then thy sick taper will begin to wink' 

]]> 2017-10-05 13:31:45 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194297436 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194298635 'Then shall my ghost...'
'Then they sick taper....'
'Then'
'And']]> 2017-10-05 13:33:34 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194298635 williamsa18 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194301569 The poetic voice comes across as quite sarcastic and cynical towards the woman he is addressing, calling her a feigned vestal (a fake virgin) implies lack of trust between the two, and the use of the descriptive adjective 'poor' comes across as quite condescending; he doesn't actually pity her but is saying it to emphasise the apparent wrongs she has committed.]]> 2017-10-05 13:38:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194301569 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194302303 The poetic voice seems quite angry and tormented by the woman who he is addressing due to the rejection he is feeling . He clearly has lost any love and has turned it to pain and anger this could be demonstrated because of the phrases the poetic voice uses. For example the poetic voice brands her as fake when he calls her a 'feigned vestal'. The poetic voice mentions her as a 'poor aspen wretch' this could be ]]> 2017-10-05 13:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194302303 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194304250 Murd'ress
Feigned vestal
Poor aspen wretch 

]]> 2017-10-05 13:42:31 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194304250 williamsa18 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194306459 This poem suggests that relationships are false, there is no longer any loyalty in them. The repetition of feigned/false implies that the bond between them, the poetic voice believes is false.]]> 2017-10-05 13:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194306459 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194307006 The poetic voice seems angry and in an insufferable pain


]]> 2017-10-05 13:47:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194307006 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194318980 Hateful hateful with a strong desire for revenge
-Chloe]]> 2017-10-05 14:07:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194318980 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194319525 "When by when by thy scorn"
"Then shall my ghost"
"And thee"
"Then thy sick taper"
"And he"
"And in"
"And then"
"What I will say"
"Lest that preserve"
-Chloe]]> 2017-10-05 14:07:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194319525 williamsa18 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194320487 The use of pronouns and possessive determiners 'thy' suggest intimacy between the two main people of interest, as it shows they had a very close relationship. It is not a poem open to interpretation, about a vague relationship which could be between anyone. It is between this woman and man, and specifies her rejection of him. The use of declarative 'I will say,' also shows the closeness of their relationship, or what was their closeness. There is no need for politeness between the two]]> 2017-10-05 14:09:21 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194320487 nieldw https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194321560 Using possessive determiners and pronouns. Such as thy,he,and,my.]]> 2017-10-05 14:10:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194321560 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194322396 'Then' is repeated]]> 2017-10-05 14:12:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194322396 https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194322781 The poem suggests that relationships cause insufferable pain to at least one of those involved and that the love is one sided and not returned. It further suggests that rejection causes one to feel discarded and alone. In addition to this it suggests that it causes a thirst for vengeance. ]]> 2017-10-05 14:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194322781 moorek https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194324693 The poem implies that relationships and the emotion of love is able to damage a person to the point of 'desth']]> 2017-10-05 14:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nieldw/apparition/wish/194324693