Review Theoretical Framework examples_wg2 by Yan Shao https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn Made with mirth en-us 2020-11-24 10:58:46 UTC 2025-11-24 10:54:52 UTC hello@padlet.com Structure https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955776117 + Sub title usage
+ Indent usage
+ Formal language


]]> 2020-11-24 11:30:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955776117 Dislike https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955777713 2020-11-24 11:31:16 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955777713 First theoretical framework https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955778801 1)Several definitions for each variable
2)No proper back up by sources
3)The model relationship is not clearly stated 
4)The first hypothesis was not clearly structured. 
5)doesn't understand the difference between moderation and meditation]]> 2020-11-24 11:31:47 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955778801 2nd Framewrok https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955782074 1)very coherent 
2)Gives one definition for each variable 
3) The model relationship is clearly stated as mediation. 
4)And well use of the literature to backup his model and hypothesis. ]]> 2020-11-24 11:33:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955782074 Was very good and clear https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955786301 2020-11-24 11:35:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955786301 Explains well each variable individually and then links them at the end https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955786643 2020-11-24 11:35:33 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955786643 Referencing well https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955787478 2020-11-24 11:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955787478 https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955794158 it does not explicitly mention the moderation effect which can make the audience confusing

]]> 2020-11-24 11:39:00 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955794158 https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955795579 1. APA isn’t correct
2. Poor grammar
3. H1 is not correctly formulated ]]> 2020-11-24 11:39:36 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955795579 https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955795944 the formulation of relationship seems logical based on the literature provided]]> 2020-11-24 11:39:47 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955795944 https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955797047 clear understanding of mediation effect that is well presented ]]> 2020-11-24 11:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955797047 https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955797657 logical progression; hypotheses are well-supported by the literature ]]> 2020-11-24 11:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955797657 https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955798490 1) good use of apa
2) some grammar issues 
3) good use of literature ]]> 2020-11-24 11:41:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yshao4/nlkrpc99f5i4algn/wish/955798490