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      <pubDate>2025-05-14 12:45:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Joe mun corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Nixon,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about swimming club. I can’t wait to share with you about the information. Believe It or no? The coach, Mrs Wong is an experienced coach. The class is scheduled on weekend so it won’t interfere our daily routine tine. Plus,if we are well-trained,we stand a chance to represent. Let’s  not  miss the boat. Let me now if you are  interested, bye. </p><p><br/></p><p>Regards </p><p>Joe mun</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Nixon,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice <strong>about the swimming club. </strong>I can’t wait to share <strong>this exciting news</strong> with you! Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs Wong,<strong> is very experienced</strong>. The class is scheduled on weekends, so it won’t interfere with our daily routine. Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent the school to<strong> take part in the competition.</strong></p><p>Let’s not miss the boat! Let me know if you’re interested.</p><p>Regards,<br>Joe Mun</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:11:06 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Giselle Leong corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Aurora,                                                          </p><p>How are you?I hope you are in the pink of health.The reason I am writing this email to you is because I want you to join the swimming club with me.The swimming club's coach is Mr's Wong,she is an experienced coach as she's been coaching for 10 year's.The lesson is on weekends,Saturdays or Sundays.If we join,we have a chance to join schoolcompetitions and represent our school.I would like if you could join with me because,this is an big opputunity for us!                                                                         Thank you for considering my request.That is all from me.Bye for now.        Regards,                                                           </p><p>Giselle Leong</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Aurora,</p><p>How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. I'm writing to invite you to join the swimming club with me. The coach, Mrs Wong, is very experienced<strong> and she has been coaching for 10 years.</strong></p><p>Lessons are held on weekends, either Saturday or Sunday, so they won’t interfere with our weekday schedule. If we join, we might get the chance to participate in school competitions and represent our school!</p><p><strong>I would really love for you to join me </strong>because this is a <strong>great</strong> opportunity for both of us.</p><p>That’s all from me—bye for now!</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:20:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tze Xuan  corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what,I came across a notice about swimming club.I can't wait to share with you.</p><p>Believe it or not?The coach,Mrs Wong is an</p><p>Experienced coach.The class is scheduled on</p><p>Weekends, we have chance to join school competitions and training represent school.</p><p>Let me know if you are interested.</p><p>Take care!</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to tell you about it!</p><p>Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs Wong, <strong>is very experienced.</strong></p><p>The classes are held on weekends, <strong>so it won't interfere our daily schedule. The best part is,</strong>  we have a chance to join school competitions and represent the school.</p><p>Sounds, interesting , right? Let me know if you're interested.</p><p>Take care!</p><p><strong>Best Regards,</strong></p><p><strong>Tze Xuan </strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:21:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tang Pei Ern corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To: <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="mailto:lyssa@yahoo.com">lyssa@yahoo.com</a> </p><p>Subject: </p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Lyssa,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to share with you about the information. </p><p><br/></p><p>Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs Wong is experienced coach who has 10 years' coaching. The class is scheduled on weekends so it won't interfere our daily rou tine. Plus, if we're well-trained, we stand a chance to represent school.</p><p><br/></p><p>Let's no miss the boat. Let me know if you are interested, Bye!</p><p><br/></p><p>Best regards,</p><p>Pei Ern</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Lyssa,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to share the<strong> exciting news </strong>with you!</p><p>Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs Wong, is an experienced coach who has 10 years of coaching experience. The class is scheduled on weekends, so it won't interfere with our daily routine. Plus, if we're well-trained, we stand a chance to represent the school t<strong>o take part in the competition.</strong></p><p>Let's not miss the boat! Let me know if you're interested.</p><p>Bye!</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:22:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Esther corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p>     Guess what? I came across a notice about Lingua Swimming Club. I can't wait to share with you. Believe it or not? The coach, Mr's Wong is an experience coach. The class in scheduled on weekends. Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent school. Let's not miss the boat. Let me know if you're interest.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Esther</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Ben,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the Lingua Swimming Club, and I couldn't wait to share it with you!</p><p>Believe it or not, the coach—Mrs Wong—<strong>is an experienced coach</strong>. The classes are scheduled on weekends, so they won’t interfere with our weekday routine.</p><p>Plus, if we train well, we<strong> might even get the chance to </strong>represent the school in competitions.</p><p>Let’s not miss the boat! Let me know if you're <strong>interested.</strong></p><p><strong>Regards,</strong><br>Esther</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:24:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lam Hoi Ling corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>To: <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="mailto:viqing@gmail.com">viqing@gmail.com</a></p><p>Subject: Swimming club</p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Vi Qing,</p><p><br/></p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the Lingua swimming club. Before it or not? The coach, Mrs Wong is an experience coach  who has  10 years coaching. The class schedule is on weekends so it won't interfere my daily routine. Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent school. Let's not miss the boat. Let me know if you're interest.</p><p><br/></p><p>Best regards,</p><p> Hoi Ling</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Vi Qing,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the Lingua Swimming Club!</p><p><strong>Believe it or not</strong>, the coach, Mrs Wong, is an <strong>experienced</strong> coach who has 10 years of coaching experience. The classes are scheduled on weekends, so they won’t interfere with my daily routine.</p><p>Plus, if we train well, we <strong>might even get the chance</strong> to represent the school in competitions!</p><p>Let’s not miss the boat. Let me know if you’re <strong>interested.</strong></p><p><strong>Best regards,</strong><br>Hoi Ling</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:29:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hong Ze corrected </title>
         <author>m14339563</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Aurora,                                                            </p><p>Guess what? I came across a poster about a swimming club I want you to join the swimming club with me. The swimming club's coach is Mr's Wong,she is an experienced coach as she's been coaching for 10 year's. The lesson is on weekends,Saturdays or Sundays. If we join,we have a chance to join school competitions and represent our school. I hope you could join the swimming club with me because,this is an big opputunity for us!                                                                         Thank you for considering my request. That is all from me. Bye for now.        Regards,                           ChinHongZe</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Aurora,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I came across a poster about a swimming club, and<strong> I’d love for you to join it with me!</strong></p><p>The coach of the club is Mrs Wong. She’s an experienced coach who has been teaching for 10 years. The lessons are held on weekends, <strong>either Saturday or Sunday</strong> so they won’t interfere with our weekday routine.</p><p>If we join, we’ll have the chance to take part in school competitions and represent our school. I really hope you’ll join me because this is a <strong>great </strong>opportunity for both of us!</p><p>That’s all from me, bye for now!</p><p><strong>Regards,</strong><br>Chin Hong Ze</p><p><br></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:29:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Liew Jia Yu corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Joey, </p><p><br/></p><p>Guees what? I came across a notice about a swimming club. I can't wait to share with you. You can't believe it, My coach is Mr's Wong, She is an experienced coach as she is been teaching for 10 year's. The lesson is on weekends, Saturday or Sundays. If we join, We can have a chance yo join a school competitions and represent our school. I would like if you could join with me because this is an big opputunity for us! </p><p><br/></p><p>Best Regards </p><p>Jia Yu</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Joey,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about a swimming club, and I can't wait to share <strong>it </strong>with you! You won’t believe it—Mrs Wong is the coach. She is very experienced and<strong> has been teaching for 10 years.</strong></p><p>The lessons <strong>are</strong> on weekends, either Saturdays or Sundays. If we join, <strong>we’ll have a chance</strong> to participate in school competitions and represent our school.</p><p>I would love it if you could join me because this is <strong>an awesome opportunity </strong>for us!<strong> Let's not miss the boat!</strong></p><p>Best regards,<br>Jia Yu</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:30:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Giselle Cham corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p>        Guess what? I came acroos a notice about swiming club .I can’t wait to share with you a new notice.Believe it or not? The coach ,Mrs Wong  he has 10 years’ coaching.The class is scheduled on saturday or sunday so it won’t interfere my daily schedule .Plus if we are well -trained,we stand a chance to represent affordable.</p><p>Let’s not mis the boat.</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Giselle Cham</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Ben,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club, and I couldn’t wait to share it with you!</p><p>Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs Wong, <strong>has 10 years of coaching experience.</strong> The classes are scheduled on Saturdays or Sundays, so they won’t interfere with my daily schedule.</p><p>Plus, if we’re well-trained, we might even get the chance to represent<strong> the school in competitions—how exciting is that?</strong></p><p><strong>Let’s not miss the boat!</strong></p><p><strong>Regards,</strong><br>Giselle Cham</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:30:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Law Qin Er corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about swimming club. Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs Wong is an experienced coach who has 10 years' coaching. The class is scheduled on Saturday so it won't interfere our daily scheduled. Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent swimming competitions. Let me know if you are interested. Bye for now!</p><p>Regards,</p><p>Law Qin Er</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs Wong, <strong>is an experienced coach who has 10 years of coaching experience. </strong>The classes are scheduled on Saturdays, so they won’t interfere with our daily schedule.</p><p>Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent the school in swimming competitions.</p><p>Let me know if you’re interested. Bye for now!</p><p>Regards,<br>Law Qin Er</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:31:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lucious Ong corrected</title>
         <author>onglucious</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/laukeeling16/nkt99r894ukmgmmv/wish/3450583684</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben, </p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to share with you about it. Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs. Wong is an experienced coach who has 10 years' experience. The class is scheduled on Saturday and Sunday, so it won't interfere our time. Plus, if we are well- trained, we stand a chance to represent to join the school competitions. Let's not miss the boat, let me know if you are interested. Take care, bye for now!</p><p>Best regards,</p><p>Lucious</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Ben,</strong></p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club, and I can’t wait to share it with you! Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs. Wong, i<strong>s very experienced with 10 years of coaching.</strong></p><p>The classes are scheduled on Saturdays and Sundays, so they won’t interfere with our <strong>daily routine.</strong> Plus, if we train well, we’ll have a chance to represent the school in competitions.</p><p>Let’s not miss the boat! Let me know if you’re interested. </p><p><strong>Best regards,</strong><br>Lucious</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:32:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jessmin Lim Chen Min 林宸慜 corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about swimming club. I can't wait to share with you. Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs. Wong is an experienced coach. The class is scheduled on Saturday and Sunday, so it won't interfere our daily routine. Plus, if we are well at training, we stand a chance to represent chance to join school competition. Let's us not miss the boat. Let me now if you are interested. Bye for now.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Jessmin</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club, and I can't wait to share it with you! Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs. Wong, is an experienced coach <strong>and she has been coaching for ten years.</strong> The classes are scheduled on Saturdays and Sundays, so they won’t interfere with our daily routine.</p><p>Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent the school in competitions.</p><p><strong>Let’s not </strong>miss the boat. Let me know if you are interested. Bye for now.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,<br>Jessmin</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:32:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rou Xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To:noell@gmail.com</p><p>Subject: Swimming Club</p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p><br/></p><p>How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. I came across a notice </p><p>about the swimming club at our school during recess. Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs.Wong has ten years of coaching experience. The clas is scheduled on Saturday so it won't interfere my daily schedule. What's more, well-trained we stand a chance to represent our school to take part in the competition. Let's not miss the boat. Let me know if you are interested. Please reply me as soon as possible.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p><strong>Dear Ben,</strong></p><p>How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health.</p><p>I came across a notice about the swimming club at our school during recess. Believe it or not, the coach,<strong> Mrs Wong,</strong> <strong>has ten years of coaching experience.</strong> The class is scheduled on Saturdays, so it won’t interfere with my daily schedule.</p><p>What’s more,<strong> if we are well-trained, </strong>we stand a chance to represent our school in competitions.</p><p>Let’s not miss the boat! Let me know if you are interested. Please reply as soon as possible.</p><p><strong>Regards,</strong></p><p><strong>Rou Xuan</strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:33:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jia Xian corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,                                                             </p><p>Guess What? I came across a notice about swimming club.I can't wait to share with you.Believe it or not?The coach,Mrs Wong is an experienced.The class is scheduled on weekend so it won't interfere mydaily scheduled.Plus,if we are well-trained,we stand a change to represent school.Let's not miss the boat.Let me know if you are interested.                                                                                                                               Regards,                                                             </p><p> Jia Xian</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess <strong>what?</strong> I came across a notice about the <strong>swimming club. I</strong> can't wait to share with you. <strong>Believe it or not?The coach,Mrs Wong is an experienced coach and she has been coaching for ten years. The classes are scheduled on weekend</strong> so it won't interfere my daily <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://scheduled.Plus"><strong>schedule . Plus</strong></a><strong>,if we are well-trained,we stand a chance to represent school to take part in the competition. .Let's not miss the boat.</strong></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Jia Xian</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:34:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tan Powell corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ee Veen,</p><p><br/></p><p>I hope you are in the pink of health. Guess what? I came across a notice about Lingua Swimming Club. Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs Wong is an experience coach that she is been coach 10 years. The lesson will only be held on weekends. Plus, if we are in well-training we have chance to join our school competition. It is a golden opportunity to join the swimming club. Let me know if you are keen to join.</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Powell</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ee Veen,</p><p>I hope you are in the pink of health.</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the Lingua Swimming Club. Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs Wong,<strong> is an experienced coach who has been coaching for 10 years. </strong>The lessons are  held on weekends <strong>so it won't interfere our daily routine.</strong></p><p>Plus, if we<strong> are well-trained,</strong> we will have a chance to join our school competitions.</p><p><strong>This is</strong> a golden opportunity to join the swimming club. Let me know if you are keen to join.</p><p>Regards,<br>Powell</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:37:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Loh kah Him corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>To: Ben@gmail.com</p><p>Subject: Join the swimming club </p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait share with you the information.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Believe it or not? Mrs Wong is an experienced coach. She has 10 years' coaching experience. The class is scheduled  on weekend so it won't interfere our daily routine. Plus, if we are well- trained, we stand a chance to  represent school to join the competitions .Let don't miss the boat.Let me know if you are interested, Bye!</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Kah Him</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club, and I can't wait to share the information with you.</p><p>Believe it or not, Mrs Wong<strong> is an experienced coach with 10 years of coaching experience</strong>. <strong>The classes</strong> are scheduled on weekends, so they won’t interfere<strong> with </strong>our daily routine.</p><p>Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent the school in competitions.</p><p>Let’s not miss the boat! Let me know if you are interested. <strong>Bye for now!</strong></p><p>Regards,<br>Kah Him</p><p><br/></p><p>                                                   </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-14 13:39:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Yan Ann corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben, </p><p>  Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to share with you SJK(C)Lingua Swimming Club. Believe it or not? Mrs Wong is an coach who has 10 year's experienced. The class is scheduled on weekends so it won't interfere my daily schedule. Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent school. </p><p>Let's not miss the boat. </p><p>Bye for now, </p><p>Yan Ann</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to share with you some exciting news about the SJK(C) Lingua Swimming Club. Believe it or not, Mrs Wong is<strong> a professional coach</strong> who has 10 years of experience. The class is scheduled on weekends, so it won't interfere with my weekday routine. Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent the school<strong> to take part in the competition. </strong></p><p>Let's not miss the boat!</p><p>Bye for now,</p><p>Yan Ann</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p><br/></p><p>Guess what, I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to share you about the swimming club! Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs Wong is an experience coach who has 10 years' coaching. The class is scheduled on weekends. Plus, if we are well-trained, we can stand a chance to represent school. Let's not miss the boat. Let me know if you are interested. Bye for now!</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Yun Xuan</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can’t wait to share <strong>the details with you!</strong> Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs Wong, is an experienced coach who has <strong>10 years of coaching experience.</strong></p><p><strong>The classes are scheduled </strong>on weekends <strong>so we are available to join.</strong> Plus, if we are well-trained, we have a chance to represent the school<strong> to take part in the competition.</strong></p><p>Let’s not miss the boat. Let me know if you are interested. Bye for now!</p><p>Regards,<br>Yun Xuan</p>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to share with you this imformation. Believe it or not? this is an coach, Mrs Wong is an Experienced Coach. Who has 10 years' coaching experience. The class is scheduled on weekends so it won't our daily routine. Plus, are we are  well trained, We stand a chance to represent school to join school competition. Let don't miss the boat. Let me know if you are interested. I am looking forward  your reply. Bye for now!</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Kayson Lau</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about the swimming club. I can't wait to share<strong> the details</strong> with you. Believe it or not, the coach, Mrs Wong, is an<strong> experienced coach</strong> who has 10 years of coaching experience.</p><p><strong>The classes are scheduled</strong> on weekends, so they won’t interfere with our daily routine. Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent the school <strong>to join the </strong>competitions.</p><p>Let’s<strong> not </strong>miss the boat. Let me know if you are interested. Bye for now!</p><p>Regards,<br>Kayson Lau</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-15 07:47:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p>Guess what? I came across a notice about swimming club. Believe it or not?  The coach Mr's Wong is an experience coach who has 10 year's coaching. The class is scheduled on Saturday and Sunday, so it won't interfere our time. Plus if we are well -trained , we stand chance to represent to join swimming competitions. Let me know if you are interested in this activity. Bye for now!</p><p>Warm regards,</p><p>Yihan</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 10:19:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ben,</p><p><br/></p><p>  Guess what? I came across the notice about swimming club. I can't wait to share with you. Believe it or not? The coach, Mrs Wong is a coach who has 10 years' cocaching. The class is scheduled on weekends so it won't interfere my daily schedule. Plus, if we are well-trained, we stand a chance to represent to join school competitions. Let's not miss the boat. Let me know if you are interested. Write back soon!</p><p><br/></p><p>Regards,</p><p>Zhen Hong</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-21 10:31:26 UTC</pubDate>
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