Thesis Statements by Ms. Sall https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx For your assigned thesis statement, comment on the REVISIONS it would need to make in order to meet our FORUMULA for composition #2 thesis statements. en-us 2023-10-12 15:25:53 UTC 2023-10-12 20:11:16 UTC hello@padlet.com The educational success of Arthur and William at their respective schools was influenced by several external factors. These include the role of coaches, the level of school funding, and the attitudes of the students themselves. ksall1 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743836394 2023-10-12 15:26:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743836394 Coaches, school’s funding, and students are all external factors with the individual schools of Arthur and William that affected their educational success. ksall1 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743836551 2023-10-12 15:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743836551 Poverty and violence impacts students' educational experiences. It highlights the sociocultural issues within the Chicago area, how issues in the system can negatively impact students trying to achieve a better future. ksall1 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743836671 2023-10-12 15:26:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743836671 Despite living in a rough area of Chicago ridden with crime and bad influences as well as facing plenty of personal issues regarding their families and themselves, Arthur and William still worked hard and put most of their energy towards chasing their dream of becoming professional basketball players, achieving success at the end in one way or another. ksall1 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743837077 2023-10-12 15:27:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743837077 Due to the turbulent family situations, injuries, and different school lives that Arthur and William experienced, their attitudes towards education were changed for the worse. ksall1 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743839365 2023-10-12 15:28:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743839365 ksall1 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743870543 2023-10-12 15:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2743870543 shukla1376 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744185432 The impacts on education need to be specified. Their attitudes were changed for the worse, but we don’t know how those problems manifested themselves. A possible solution to the problem should also be added to this thesis statement. ]]> 2023-10-12 20:06:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744185432 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744185656 It needs a solution added in the end. I feel like it needs to be a little more specified ]]> 2023-10-12 20:06:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744185656 manchandani9194 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744186015 Possibly a solution would be nice ]]> 2023-10-12 20:07:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744186015 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744186117 How exactly were the attitudes changed in a negative way? Be more specific]]> 2023-10-12 20:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744186117 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744186367 The effect of the external factors would need to be more specific and it needs a solution statement at the end]]> 2023-10-12 20:07:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744186367 patel7305 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744186927 Needs an alternative impact and an impact and a solution sentence ]]> 2023-10-12 20:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744186927 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744187017 Say how they impact education and add a solution statement ]]> 2023-10-12 20:08:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744187017 aqsa1383 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744187325 One thing that is missing is the solution that goes with this statement, something that shows how they could overcome those external factors. ]]> 2023-10-12 20:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744187325 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744187525 The specific effects of poverty and violence would need to be specified as well as a solution statement at theend]]> 2023-10-12 20:09:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744187525 antuna6386 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744187798 Don’t include the wording “external factors” in your statement. Include how attitude is impacted and give a solution.]]> 2023-10-12 20:09:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744187798 martinez8725 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188059 It needs a solution]]> 2023-10-12 20:09:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188059 koziol1312 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188103 Say how they impact education]]> 2023-10-12 20:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188103 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188393 No solution statement at the end ]]> 2023-10-12 20:09:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188393 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188426 Needs a solution statement to the external factors affecting their education and personal lives.

]]> 2023-10-12 20:10:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188426 patel9351 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188593 I believe a solution to a problem would be great]]> 2023-10-12 20:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188593 Immaculate thesis. https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188609 2023-10-12 20:10:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188609 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188703 Thesis 2 is a shorter version of thesis 1]]> 2023-10-12 20:10:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744188703 lopez1461 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744189148 Needs a solution]]> 2023-10-12 20:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744189148 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744189153 According to my calculations, this one needs a solution.]]> 2023-10-12 20:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744189153 https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744189493 3 michelin stars]]> 2023-10-12 20:11:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ksall1/nh5fab8c6o0ak4gx/wish/2744189493