https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9 Please post some positive feedback for your classmate about FORMAT based on the rubric! en-us 2017-10-31 12:42:57 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:45 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114666 Good job at connecting with some humor
Awesome job at being transparent with the audience 
Good job at just continuing with your presentation even after you studder


]]> 2017-10-31 13:17:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114666 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114737 - very creative invention
- look at the camera more when talking
- your parents are really adorable & acted very well
- the pop up drawing looked very nice
- the free offer made the commercial more realistic ]]> 2017-10-31 13:17:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114737 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114739 - Very informative! Love the amount of effort put forth ]]> 2017-10-31 13:17:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114739 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114748 Nice use of humor in your presentation.
Funny incorporation of your family.]]> 2017-10-31 13:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114748 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114785 - Very creative and entertaining]]> 2017-10-31 13:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114785 shraitar000 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114823 Full of energy and confidence. Very enjoyable.]]> 2017-10-31 13:17:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114823 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114931 you seem relaxed and added humor to make your presentation more enjoyable and engaging.
I liked your presentation and your video was very cute.
The format was a little rushed but overall a persuasive video.

]]> 2017-10-31 13:17:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202114931 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115125 - I LOVE YOUR PROJECT
- It’s very well formatted and slides through well
- you can tell you spent time on your project ]]> 2017-10-31 13:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115125 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115141 Good connection with the audience 
I like the introduction on your video presentation 
The video really ties to your choice
I like how the video flowed from presentation, information to testimonies and how to use it.
I love it, I want a my plate calculator now ❤️]]> 2017-10-31 13:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115141 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115247 I like how persuading you sounded in the video. Nice video editing and the audio is very easy to hear. I liked the humor you used in the video. One suggesting could be to look into the camera more. The script was very well written and there was a good variation in the tone of voices. ]]> 2017-10-31 13:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115247 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115264 The video was well written, the script is very entertaining and the idea is original. The characters and the enthusiasm made the project made the video hilarious. Although the concept of the video is made with precision, it could be improved by the addition of multiple angles, or more edits, also possibly music in the background would have enhanced it even more. Yet, overall, the video project was fantastic.]]> 2017-10-31 13:18:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115264 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115530 Everything is very fast paced, maybe some time in between each scene 
Your parents are adorable
Everything is placed in a well flowing order
Music would be nice]]> 2017-10-31 13:18:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115530 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115603 -Interesting premise of the video!
-This is just basically an infomercial
-How do you drink milk from a plate?
-Cheesy, but creative and cute.
-Could have used some music

Good creativity, could have used some more polish.]]> 2017-10-31 13:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202115603 bayonjoh001 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202116395 Really enjoyed the video. It made it easy to understand your product. And I really enjoyed your “actors”.]]> 2017-10-31 13:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202116395 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202116442 I liked how you included interview from “customers” who’ve tried your product]]> 2017-10-31 13:20:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202116442 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202116663 I like how you had a script so it didn't seem like it was improvised and a well thought out plan]]> 2017-10-31 13:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202116663 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202116977 This was a really creative and unique video. I like how specific and detailed it was.]]> 2017-10-31 13:21:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202116977 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202117005 I love Caroline enthusiam when presenting as well as it in the video. Also Your family is so cute very creative great job !]]> 2017-10-31 13:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202117005 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202118478 Very enthusiastic !]]> 2017-10-31 13:24:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202118478 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202118570 It was detained and fun to watch. 10/10 would buy a MyPlate Calculator ]]> 2017-10-31 13:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202118570 https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202119215 The video flowed nicely, and your parents are so cute!]]> 2017-10-31 13:25:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ngbknvljuna9/wish/202119215