https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz en-us 2018-03-28 19:04:59 UTC 2018-04-30 12:58:04 UTC hello@padlet.com oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051521 Person 1) so many interpretations! great, added photos will clarify it
Person 2) she's trying to go and kill someone, he is trying to stop her, not sure what dancer shows but shots look amazing! some shots missing but I'm sure it will make sense when they are added
Person 3) obviously she is trying to kill someone, the man is trying to stop her, who is she trying to kill? why is he stopping her? who is the dancer? new shots will explain I'm sure
Person 4) I'm not too sure, you could give more background of the characters together
Person 5) the man is trying to stop the girl from doing something, the ballet sections are really nice but not sure what they represent yet
person 6) vendetta? chasing after a killer, man trying to stop her from doing more harm
Person 7) not sure, is the singer a character in the narrative? why is there a dancer? is she feeling under pressure? all creates enigma codes which is good
Person 8) girl running away from abusive boy? rose gets blood on it when it gets intense?
Person 9) contrast is well presented, we see the woman trying to kill when she runs with the knife]]> 2018-03-28 19:12:59 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051521 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051757 Person 1) yes I love it! really unusual
Person 2) lip-syncing part works really well, positioning of band is great, really well lit
Person 3) yes, warmer and brings something different to the video and gives us a break from the story
Person 4) yes I love the look of it and it really fits with the rest of the video, especially the rose shots
Person 5) yes I like the lighting
person 6) mostly yes, the band member on the left doesn't seem to be as suitable as the others, I love that choice of lighting, makes it moody and mysterious
Person 7) yes
Person 8) lip-syncing fitted good, lighting was very effective because you can still see the lip-syncing
Person 9) yes, it is very effective and works well]]> 2018-03-28 19:13:48 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051757 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051776 Person 1) no, I like it, builds tension and works with lyrics
Person 2) they work well and the slow motion makes them more dramatic and tense, first shot of woman running is slightly blurred but that's not an issue
Person 3) no they look good! brings confusion, makes the audience think and reflects the atmosphere very well
Person 4) I think they do look a bit blurred but I'm not too sure how you would fix it, making it smoother would make it look more professional
Person 5) yes I think it is effective
person 6) most of them work but the first slow motion shot seems odd
Person 7) yes but maybe cut it to the beat slightly more
Person 8) I didn't find they were blurry, with the different angles and cuts it was effective
Person 9) they look good and provide a diversity]]> 2018-03-28 19:13:54 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051776 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051796 Person 1) yes
Person 2) the slight contrast between song and visuals (slow motion/pace) is great because you might not put them together but it's worked very well I think!
Person 3) not sure what the genre is but your storyline fits perfectly with the particular song
Person 4) yes definitely, the integration of the narrative works really well
Person 5) it was really suitable as I feel it's an ambiguous song and the video shows that
person 6) yes it think the video/story worked well with the story, I love the rose and ballerina parts, the spotlight works very well
Person 7) not sure what the genre is (alt j are odd) but video suits the song well
Person 8) yes the music and video fitted in very well together
Person 9) yes definitely, good editing and fits well with the song]]> 2018-03-28 19:13:57 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051796 oriellaro https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051821 Person 1) more of the rose with blood on at the end, more cuts to the beat, colour saturation on dancer, dissolves as transition maybe? build intensity/pace when the music builds, fade at the end
Person 2) maybe more shots of band as the lighting is great, however that could distract the audience from the narrative so up to you! fight shots in black and white? other than that, brilliant! love the rose shot!
Person 3) not sure about the shot of her throwing the knife, love the video and the shots though! I really like the variety of shots and angles you have, more and more characters going and this is very engaging, I like how the dancing accelerates as the video goes on and tension grows, clear difference between pace at beginning and end, good editing skills
Person 4) I think you need to reflect the song more in the editing, for example in the 'la la la la' section, you could have a cut to the beat more which would be satisfying for an audience member to watch
Person 5) maybe show some of the colouring when they're in the field and running because it does look quite different from the other sections (dancer) maybe darker or more saturated, really good though!
person 6) the knife-throwing shot seems odd as it is stabbed into the ground, filters on the outside shots, grey/blue filter to make it misty?
Person 7) more shots with the man? overall really well shot, I like the rose and the end shot
Person 8) make sure you add in the new shots effectively to fit with the narrative, then it will be clear! love it!
Person 9) maybe one or two more shots of the dancer as they work very effectively, they have really good lighting (but don't make them too long)]]> 2018-03-28 19:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/oriellaro/neotob12z2iz/wish/247051821