The table was filled with all the food my stomach was craving and the aroma punched my nose with flavours.

AI: The air was filled with the warm scent of garlic and herb

Improved: The table was filled with all the food my stomach was craving and the air was filled with the warm scent of garlic and herb.

AI:A feast of vibrant fruits and vegetables covered the table.

The table was surrounded by the mouthwatering smell of fresh herbs.

Improved: Stepping into the room, the aroma of all the dishes suddenly went into my nose. A feast of vibrant fruits and vegetables covered the table which was surrounded by the mouthwatering smell of herbs. Each dishes was like a kingdom. As I travell from the pasta to the chicken rice, the salty, delicious taste rushed into my mouth, making me excited.

Every inch of the table was filled with plates of amazing dishes. I looked around me, each plate of food was even more delicious than the next.

AI: sense: sight, smell (copy and paste the selected phrases here)

Improved:

Every inch of the table was overflowing with colourful and amazing dishes. I stared in wonder at the rows of dishes around me, each dish more delicious than the next. Piled up high on the table were vibrant fruits and vegetables, adorned with a rainbow of desserts. The rich scent of roasted meats wafted through the air, finding my nose. The inviting smell of spices and herbs made my stomach growl.

The table was full of different types of food,as the aroma of food filled my nose,as I could smell my favourite chicken rice.even when I was waiting for my table.

AI: The table was full of the savoury smell of roasted chicken and herbs

Improved:

The table was full of different types of food, but when the roasted chicken came the savoury smell of chicken and herbs.

The table was full of delicious dishes, such as satay, fried rice, and wonton soup. I could not wait to savour every bite of these dishes!

AI: The table was overflowing with colourful dishes.

Improved:

The table was overflowing with colourful dishes, such as satay, fried rice and wonton soup. I could not wait to savour every bite of these dishes!

The table was full, filled with the tangy flavour of pickled cucumbers.The table was full of savoury food

Al: The table full, filled with the tangy flavour of pickled cucumbers.

Improved:

The table was full of foods,the chicken was juicy and soft. The aroma of chicken rice filled in the air and   smell hot soup with fresh salad flew into my nose

AI: The aromatic scent of spices filled the airmaking my mouth water.

Improved:

The table was full of my favourite food like Chicken rice and Hot pot as it was filled with chattering and people were buzzed very loudly.

AI: The table was covered with colorful dishes, each one more tempting than the last dishes as table was overflowing with food, creating a feast for the eyes with the clinking of utensils echoing as everyone served themselves.

Improved:

The table was full with mouth-watering and sizzling hot plates as I can’t contain my excitement to eat.

AI: The table was glistening under the warm light, covered in delicious foods.

Improved:

The table was full with mouth-watering and sizzling hot plates that was glistening under the warm light, covered in delicious foods.

Edited by Mdm Uuchi:

The table was full with mouth-watering and sizzling hot plates that were glistening under the warm light.

covered in delicious foods - this is a repetition

• covered - table was full

• delicious - mouth-watering and sizzling hot plates

AI : Colourful dishes lined up, bursting with vibrant colours.

• A gleaming centerpiece that catches the light.

• Steaming bowls filled with rich, hearty stew.

• Freshly baked bread, golden brown and warm.

• Brilliantly arranged fruits, glistening in the sunlight.

Sense of Smell:

• The aroma of roasted meats wafting through the air.

• Sweet scent of ripe fruits mingling with the savory dishes.

• The spicy fragrance of herbs and spices filling the room.

• The inviting smell of warm cookies fresh out of the oven.

• The earthy scent of freshly chopped vegetables.

Improved:

The table was full of plates covering every inch of the table with the aroma of roasted meats wafting through the Colourful dishes lined up, bursting with vibrant colours, which had filled the whole house with an aroma of tasty food. It is like a gleaming centrepiece that catches the light , with steaming bowls filled with rich, hearty stew. Mom just took out freshly baked bread, golden brown and warm, and the spicy fragrance of herbs and spices filling the room. 

All the sounds of people talking all jumbled into a loud cacophony the. Smell of food wafting throughout the entire meal.

AI: mouthwatering aromas wafted from the table

Mouthwatering aromas were wafted from the table all the noise jumbled into a loud Cacophony the rich smell of butter wafting of the food

Improved:

Chatter and clatter crossed the table as I was actually relishing the aroma.

AI:

• The table overflowed with plates and cups.

• Colorful food filled every inch of space.

Colorful food filled every inch of space on the table. I could not believe my eyes. All the dishes were like islands, and I was a pirate, looking for the savoury treasures on each dish. Unfortunately, the table was overflowed with plates and cups. How was I going to finish all of this?

The minute I stepped into the food court,I noticed people chiting and chattering at full tables.Pure dishes such as chicken rice and roti pratafilled up the table as people were eating.

AI:Overflowing with food

• Covered with colorful dishes

• Brimming with delicious treats

• Adorned with vibrant fruits

• Stacked high with plates

• Laid out like a feast

• Filled to the edges

• A cornucopia of flavors

  Improved version:

  Tables overflowing with food filled the table covering with colourful dishes.I could not resist it as I heard a gulp run down.My jaw

The table was full of chitter and chatter.People non-stop.While waiting for the food to arrive I could hear the food sizzling nearby a stall.The table was filled with delicious meals.As I ate every meal it got better and better.

AI: The heaviness of a full bowl in your hands

• The coolness of glasses filled with cold drinks

• Laughter and chatter echoed around the tables

• The sizzling of food being served

  
  

Once I arrived at the hawker centre I saw many tables filled with people I heard many different voices and lots of chitter chatter

Ai:overflowing with colour full dishes,laughter filling the air

Improved:

I arrived at the hawker centre and I saw many colour dishes that it was at the edge of the table with lots of people crowding it and lots of laughter filled the air as more laughter came in

The table was filled with fragrant smell of chicken rice and nasik lamak. The aroma of food is making my mouth water.

AI: the table overflowed with the fragrant aroma of chicken rice and Nasik, lamak, feeling the air and making my mouth water with very delicious wiff

Improved :

The table was overflowed with fragrant smell of chicken rice and nasik lamak, filling the air and making my mouth water with very delicious wiff