https://padlet.com/26rcatallo/nd564xe6vwc2 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 16:40:24 UTC 2019-12-09 19:23:02 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3cc-2642.png 26jcolvin https://padlet.com/26rcatallo/nd564xe6vwc2/wish/420791646 I saw the story and I like how Jake was a shy guy and when he saw Sam getting bullied he acted. Jake did the right thing by acting. And he can use physicalness to stop it but it was also good that he used his words. I also liked how Niko knocked out Sam and all that rage changed him. I like how the teachers didn’t act and Jake did. Something you could improve on is punctuation. I was confused if Jake was ending or starting a sentence.

]]> 2019-12-06 15:24:22 UTC https://padlet.com/26rcatallo/nd564xe6vwc2/wish/420791646 26jfriedman https://padlet.com/26rcatallo/nd564xe6vwc2/wish/421701922 2019-12-09 16:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/26rcatallo/nd564xe6vwc2/wish/421701922 26ldurante https://padlet.com/26rcatallo/nd564xe6vwc2/wish/421812611 Awesome story. Good describing how he would help and I could picture what is happening.I like how you said use your words not your fist. Try and describe what Sam looks like when he gets bullied.]]> 2019-12-09 19:21:44 UTC https://padlet.com/26rcatallo/nd564xe6vwc2/wish/421812611