https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg Comment Positively and suggest a grade with support evidence. en-us 2016-07-25 23:34:44 UTC 2016-07-27 22:29:20 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117091008 Members: Sunny and Shakirah, Desmond and Khang

Speech Feedback:
Zain: He forgot some of his speech, so he should've brought some Que cards, but he was loud and clear. (HIGH ACHIEVED)
Jorja:  She was clear, loud, but no hand gesture and she kept looking at her Que cards. (LOW EXCELLENCE)
Tannin: He does eye contact to the audience, but he needs to be more louder and more body language. (LOW MERIT)
Jessica: She needs to be louder and she needs more hand gestures, but she has a wonderful speech, but it'd help if her tone was louder. (HIGH ACHIEVED)
Shakirah: She needs more hand gestures and eye contact, but she is loud and clear. (HIGH ACHIEVED)
Makayla: She needed more hand gestures and eye contact. (ACHIEVED)
Raunak: He needed more tone to his voice and more hand gestures. (LOW ACHIEVED)
Sami: He is using hand gestures, but a little bit louder, he needs to slow down, overall very good. (MERIT)
Ikoy: He used hand gestures but needs to slow it down a bit and needs to change his tone. (HIGH MERIT)
Rhys: He makes good hand gestures and changed his voice but needed to make more eye contact. (HIGH MERIT)]]> 2016-07-27 20:34:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117091008 https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117091009 Members: Annie, Ikoy, Liam , Prina, Aathif and Jorja

Zains Speech:
He forgot some of his speech in a moment, so it would have been much easier if he had some Que cards.needs Q cards
at times he would stop for an awkward period of time. this wouldn't have happened if he memorized it or had Q cards. But his volume was good. (Achieved)

Jorja Speech:
She was clear loud and brave and she was straight to the point. (Low Excellence)




]]> 2016-07-27 20:34:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117091009 https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117091078 Zain´s Speech
Rhys and Isabelle:  In the beginning Zain needed more of a hook, he had good points but his speech feels a bit too futuristic
Jessica and Harshveer: Spoke clearly and loudly. nice hand gestures. He was really confident about his speech and he spoke really loudly.
Ronak and Zain:
I think that there should have been more tone in voice and he was not prepared but hand good hand gestures.

Jorja´s Speech
Rhys and Isabelle:  In the beginning of her speech she had a loud clear voice. She has a lot of eye contact
Jessica and Harshveer: Great start, need more hand gestures
Ronak and Zain: This was a nice empowering speech that was strong but needed more hand gestures. High Merit. She  had a good eye contact and she was loud and clear. Low exellence.

Tannin´s Speech
Rhys and Isabelle: Needs to be much louder, needs more gestures and tone. He had some good informing facts.
Jessica and Harshveer: Had good eye contact. Need to be more louder and hand gestures.
Ronak and Zain: It was a nice speech but he could make variation in tone and could increase his voice. High Merit.

Jessica´s Speech
Rhys and Isabelle: The speech was good but
needed more tone, hand gestures and much louder and her laughing ruined her speech as it removed her serious tones and enviroments.(LOW ACHIEVED)
Jessica and Harshveer: She is not talking that clearly and loudly but she is really confident about her speech. Low Achieved.
Ronak and Zain: She was not using hand gestures and she was forgetting some parts of her speech and she was speaking too fast. Low Achieved. Need more of a wow factor but a nice speech. Merit.

Shakirah´s Speech
Rhys and Isabelle: Shakirah had a good hook, but maybe needed to change her tone more often and have more hand gestures.
Jessica and Harshveer: Great topic. more hand gestures and could speak louder but overall good speech. She was really confident and really clear with her speech, but she needs to be louder.
Ronak and Zain: She was really good. Low Merit

Makayla´s Speech
Rhys and Isabelle: not many
Jessica and Harshveer: Great topic. Need more hand gestures. She spoke clearly and loudly. This was a really good speech.
Ronak and Zain:

Raunak´s Speech
Rhys and Isabelle:
Jessica and Harshveer: Great speech, but needs more hand gestures and needs to be louder. Great topic.
Ronak and Zain:

Sami´s Speech
Rhys and Isabelle:
Jessica and Harshveer: Great hand gestures, but you need to be a bit louder. Great topic, need to talk more clearly and more tone. Overall great hand gestures and good eye contact
Ronak and Zain:

Ikoy´s Speech
Isabelle and Rhys:
Jessica and Harshveer: Great hand gestures, you were really loud and confident. Best so far. Great topic, good hand gestures and good eye contact. Spoke clearly and loudly. (EXCELLENCE)
Ronak and Zain: 

Rhys´s Speech
Isabelle and Rhys:
Jessica and  Harshveer: Great hand gestures. Spoke loudly and clearly. You were really confident.Great topic. Started great with a hook.
Ronak and Zain:

´s Speech]]> 2016-07-27 20:35:36 UTC https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117091078 https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117092392 Tannin speech:
he needs to work on his volume and sometimes his use of grammar would not make sense . At times he seemed like he forgot small parts of his speech, i would also say that he needs more hand gestures, otherwise it is good. (Merit)

Jessica speech
She would need to work on her hand gestures and in some moments it felt like she forgot her speech for awhile. I don´t think she practiced her speech enough, and giggles too much. I feel as if she was racing through the starting of her speech the second the time she did the speech and including the first time it felt like she was trying to rush the speech. At times she would speed up out of nowhere causing the flow of her speech to disappear. I think she needed to practice her speech more. (low merit/ high achieved)

Shakirah speech
She needs to work on her hand gestures and eye contact to everyone because in most times, she would look down, to remember her speech. Great topic, you need to work on your eye contact and hand gestures. merit


]]> 2016-07-27 21:04:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117092392 https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117093755 makayla
I think Makayla had a good speech it was a strong topic but she could have learnt the speech more and not had to rely on her q cards so much achieved

raunak
Strong start the hook, stuffed up but skipped that bit. learn your speech more and dont rely on your q cards so much. take a breathe and carry on like nothing has happened. dont worry everyone makes mistakes .

Sami
Awesome hook, good hand gestures, needs a diffirent tone for his speech and maybe needs to be a bit louder and clearer. Try to be yourself. Slow down and needs eye contact. Really doing a good job and has a good content. (low Merit)

Ikoy
Really good, good content, hand gestures are really good. your going to the finals.(i hope) maybe dont walk around..

Rhys
learn it a bit more, tone needs to vairy, get rid of the paper infrount of you,LEARN YOUR SPEECH MORE. its fine but really ovious that you have only spent about 1 hour learning. tomany q cards. Merit or excellence]]> 2016-07-27 21:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vsingh3/ncyjli0a07xg/wish/117093755