He cared about getting paid more than learning and gaining experiences, which shows that money was his top priority.

the author thinks money is important to be able to live in this world

justification :

the text shows us that author although thinks money doesn't make us happy we need it to live “Money doesn’t make you happy. And yet, we need it to live.”

It shows that chasing money hurt his relationships, he was always in a bad mood, he snapped as his girlfriend, and he didn't have time for family and friends.

"money doesn't make you happy and yet we need to live"

money is necessary for living

But later on he realized that money limits his emotional freedom.

"I have 0 debt, have savings, and work for myself. Plus, I don’t care about my reputation. Hence, I don’t have to answer to anybody else, other than my own morals."

True freedom comes from discipline and living by our values, not from piling up money. By staying strong, avoiding debt, and focusing on what really matters, the author found real freedom.

It’s a plan that takes hard work and thinking. I’ll do it too and I hope you do the same. Nothing here is sure, so be ready to start again.

"I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money"

the inference

this means that chasing money affects your relationships in a bad way

justification: the author stated that even though money doesn't buy happiness it is essential for necessities

2- Because he demanded more money. But that didn't stop him from earning more.

justification: the author stated that he demanded a higher salary because he was money-focused.

3- The author Snapped at his girlfriend . Didn’t have time to see his friends and family.

justification:

The author stated that he had slowly lost perspective of his personal relationships including his family, friends, and girlfriend.

4- He believes emotional freedom is more important than money.

justification: the author stated having emotional freedom is more important as it cultivates mental and physical strength, which helped him reorient himself.

5-discipline and values carve the path to true freedom

justification: The author stated that without resilience, self-discipline, and a clear sense of values, wealth becomes another chain holding you back.

the inference ,3

justification : According to the text " I woke up at 6 AM and worked until I went to bed. I was in a bad mood all the time. Snapped at my girlfriend. Didn’t have time to see my friends. In fact, I didn’t have time to enjoy anything. " he says that he is always in a bad mood and he don't have time to see his friend .

Evidence: "Money doesn’t make you happy. And yet, we need it to live."

As you can see, the author states that we need money to "live".

4

He didn't care about his role and success

Evidence: "I even lost the opportunity to work for a very successful entrepreneur because I asked for too much money. But that didn’t stop me from earning more."

"The verb earning means that he never wanted to stop making money at the time. That shows how greedy he was."

Money plays a big role in everyone’s life. It gives people power, respect, and opportunities to have a better life. With money people can afford education, health care, and better life styles.

Back in the days, men were the ones who controlled anything financial. Men used to hold the highest  jobs and businesses, which gave them control over money.

Nowadays, things are much better for women. They go to school, work, and some owned famous companies. They started businesses and are becoming more independent with themselves.

Even with everything good that is happening, women still don’t have complete equal right. In many jobs women are  paid more than men even if they do the same work. Family responsibilities and our communities’ expectations make it harder for women to focus on their career.

In conclusion, money plays a powerful role in today’s society. Men have held control over money for most the past time, and women are continuing to make process towards equal financial right. The future will depend on making sure money is in equal rights between everyone.

In the past, men used to control money and financial power by owning property, earning wages, managing business and dominating legal rights, owning lands, and limited women's access to education or jobs, keeping financial power mostly men.

Women often do not have the same chances as men to earn money or become leaders. But today is differant, they can lead businesses, brands etc. So women do have a higher chance today to earn more and become leaders in some kinds.

corrected version

Paragraph 1

• Alot → A lot (spelling correction).

• for example: They → for example, they (punctuation + lowercase “they”).

• money etc. → money, etc. (comma before “etc.”).

• Once your money finishes → Once your money is finished (grammatical correction, natural phrasing).

• you won't have power anymore. → and you won't have power anymore. (added “and” for sentence flow).

Paragraph 2

• managing business → managing businesses (plural form for subject agreement).

• dominating legal rights, owning lands, and limited women's access → dominating legal rights, and owning land, while limiting women's access (parallel structure + grammar fix).

• keeping financial power mostly men → keeping financial power mostly with men (added “with” for correct expression).

Paragraph 3

• differant → different (spelling correction).

• differant, they → different; they (semicolon for correct punctuation).

• brands etc. → brands, etc. (comma before “etc.”).

• leaders in some kinds. → leaders in some ways. (idiomatic correction, “some kinds” is incorrect in this context).

Today , women have far more opportunities to earn money and take leadership roles than the past , women run successful businesses , hold top position in companies , and make such a important decision in politics and society .

Money may rule the world , but it should not be a man's game .As women continue to break barriers and gain more financial power , society moves closer to real fairness and balance .

In the past, men controlled their money and financial power through laws and paying off debt. Back then, more job offers were for men to conduct their family and their own life. This left women completely dependent on men for money.

Even today, women don’t have the same opportunities as men to earn money and become leaders. The way different genders are treated is a big part of this, as women are often paid less for the same work, and are more likely to work in lower positions, where fewer women are promoted to management roles from the beginning.

Today, women have far more opportunities to earn money and take leadership roles than in the past. Women run successful businesses, hold top positions in companies, and make such important decisions in politics and society.

Money may rule the world, but it should not be a man's game. As women continue to break barriers and gain more financial power, society moves closer to real fairness and balance.

1. high paying → high-paying (compound adjective needs hyphen)

2. than the past → than in the past top position → top positions

3. such a important decision → such important decisions

4. .As → . As