CW3 Extended Essays, Oct PM by CULISC Student Service Team https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM Tips for researching and writing long essays en-us 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC 2025-11-12 18:43:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270d.png CW3 Assessment Brief llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298464 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298464 CW3 Checklist llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298465 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298465 How CW3 is marked llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298466 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298466 Cover Sheet for Final Submission llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298469 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298469 Useful website for collocations llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298471 This is a good website to expand your productive vocabulary. For example, type in disadvantage and discover collocations such as distinct disadvantage, obvious disadvantage, serious disadvantage, etc. ]]> 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298471 AWL Checker llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298474 Use this website to check how many academic words you used.  Copy and paste your writing into this site and it will highlight all of the words that are on the Academic Word List (AWL).]]> 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298474 What helps you write most effectively? llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298477 What works for you?
How do you get started?
How do you divide your essay writing into smaller, more manageable tasks?
What other tips do you have?]]> 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298477 How do you organise your research? llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298482 How do you save the articles that you are using?
Do you use any digital tools to help you?
How do you take notes or annotate?]]> 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298482 Do you have any useful apps you use to organise your research or help with reading? llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298487 Please share below or in the comments.

Has anyone ever used Speechify on Google Chrome?  Is it useful?  Or have you used any other apps that change reading text into speech to save you time?]]> 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298487 Essay on Robotics llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298491
  • What is the writer’s position?  How do you know?

  • Why is this a good example of CW3?

  • How could it be improved?

    • ]]>     2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298491     The writer's position llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298492 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298492 Positive things llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298494

    ]]>     2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298494     Things to improve llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298496 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298496 Avoid personal pronouns llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298497  xI will argue... I strongly believe...

    It is argued that...

    This essay will argue that...

    make your position clear through vocabulary, hedging, etc.

    ]]>     2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298497     More Student Examples llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298498
  • What do you think the student did well?
  • What could be improved?
  • What mark did they get?  Below pass, pass or above pass?

    • ]]>     2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298498     llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298499 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298499 llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298501 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298501 llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298502 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298502 llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298503 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298503 Discuss llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298505 What makes a good introduction?
    What makes a good conclusion?
    What makes a good main body paragraph?]]>     2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298505     Thesis Statements llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298506
    A thesis statement should...
    •State your position
    •Be argumentative, not descriptive
    •Answer your full question
    •Use clear and direct language (although not over-simplified)
    •Come at the end of your introduction and be echoed in your conclusion
    ]]>     2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298506     Lesson Slides llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298507 Here are the slides we saw in today's lesson.  We only looked at a few of them, but there are some more examples that may be helpful for some people. 

    ]]>     2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298507     How to get started writing your CW3 extended essay llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298508 Ignore using your CW2 and focus on using your CW1 outline.]]> 2022-02-07 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033298508 Thesis Statements: Peer feedback ssculc https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033310936
    Share your thesis statement with your classmates.  

    1.What is effective about it?
    2.What needs to be improved?


    Some ideas to think about:
    •Is there a clear position?
    •Could someone have the opposite viewpoint?
    •Can you imagine what the main arguments and counterarguments will be in the essay?
    •Does it answer ALL parts of the question?
    •Can you understand it?
    •Does the grammar/vocabulary need to be changed to make it clearer?
    ]]>     2022-02-07 15:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033310936     How to plan an essay padlet ssculc https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033344000 2022-02-07 15:27:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033344000 How to add a counterargument padlet ssculc https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033348967 2022-02-07 15:29:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2033348967 Dilson Pereira https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035254185 Essay Question: Over the last decade there has been an increase in the number of entrepreneurs establishing their own business using social media (SM). Analyse the benefits and drawbacks of using SM for establishing a business and evaluate whether SM is primarily responsible for this growth.

    Thesis Statement: It is a fact that social media can be a powerful ally to business growth, even though there’s other tools for it.]]>     2022-02-08 11:37:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035254185     FIZZA ALI https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035255782   | Title: Employees are the most critical resource for any organization. Organizations have leveraged the technological innovation and have started utilizing HR information systems to move away from traditional management methods. Evaluate the effectiveness and challenges of HR Information Systems (HRIS) and importance of employee productivity in organizations.| Thesis statement: HRIS contributes to the efficiency and effectiveness of HR planning, data management, training needs assessment, succession planning etc.
     |]]>     2022-02-08 11:39:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035255782     Thesis statement: The impact of climate change on the Global economies can cause massive damage. https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035260512 Title: Climate change is a major reason for global crises with the rising temperature on earth. Many corporations have to be responsible for the environment and adhere to Corporate Social Responsibilities (CSR). Evaluate how effective two UK energy companies are at dealing with the climate crisis. 

    ]]>     2022-02-08 11:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035260512     Syeda Farwa Haider https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035260635 Essay Question:
    Demotivation in employees has been a major concern for business organizations. Maslow a scholarly motivational theorist, has come up with hierarchy of needs which are human needs that dictate an individual's behaviour. Evaluate the effectiveness of Maslow’s hierarchy of needs in workplace motivation.


    Thesis statement: Maslow’s motivation theory is one of the best known and effective theories for workplace motivation.

    ]]>     2022-02-08 11:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035260635     Yinan Zhang https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035260639 Essay Question:Video games is big business and many games are marketed across the globe. However, there is a lot of scrutiny aimed at this industry due to its perceived negative impact on the mental health; especially in relation to children. Evaluate some the risks of playing video games and proposed solutions on how these companies can resolve these issues.
    Thesis statement:     
    In the following essay will discuss there are some risks of playing video games, and the video companies have come out the solutions for video game classifications, also the e-sports have some significant effect for the video game market.]]>     2022-02-08 11:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035260639     Roman Mubeen https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035261572 Q. Scheduling is a major task in project management. Projects regarding product development, production and supplies usually go beyond the scheduled duration or some stayed incomplete. Project managers face the issue to search for alternative methods for scheduling to break the bottleneck period. Critical chain project management (CCPM) is a method that emphasizes the resources required to execute project tasks. To what extent CCPM method can overcome these challenges? 
    Thesis Statement: This essay will argue that CCPM is more effective strategy of scheduling a project than traditionally used CPM method to avoid delays in project completion. ]]>     2022-02-08 11:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035261572     Jaskirat Kaur-2641813 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035265440  Title-Online shopping is now commonplace and, in many cases, has taken over traditional physical stores. Analyse the advantages and disadvantages of promoting a business through social media platforms with reference to two industries.

    The thesis statement-The main objective of this essay is to find out the significance and drawbacks of social media promotions in the Retail and Electronic Industry. It will also, discuss the popularity of online shopping in the recent era.     


    ]]>     2022-02-08 11:45:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035265440     Anand Vijaykumar https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035271058 Title: Agile methodology (Application for project management) is the most effective in mitigating risks. To what extend do you agree?

    Thesis statement: This essay will argue that agile methodology can be beneficial for handling risk factors in project management ]]>     2022-02-08 11:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035271058     Samreena https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035280032 Title: 

    Advancement of technologies has influenced firms switching from traditional marketing to digital marketing. Many people argue that digital marketing has a significant impact on business growth in Tourism industry. To what extend do you agree with the statement.
    Thesis statement:
     Improvements in technology made firms switch from traditional marketing to digital marketing, and the fact is, this change has made organisations grow significantly.



    ]]>     2022-02-08 11:55:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035280032     Syed M Bilal Haider https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035281426 Title: ICT in Accounts Consultancy Firms can be beneficial for this field. 
    Analyze the pros and cons of using ICT.

    Thesis statement: 
    In this essay we will discuss the impact of ICT in accounts consultancy firms. How these systems work, their costs, implementation problems and how efficient these systems are. ]]>     2022-02-08 11:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2035281426     Hedging Reflection llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2046093497 Task 1: 
    1. Look at your CW3 draft.
    2. Can you find an example of hedging or cautious language?
    3. Share with your classmate and decide if hedging was used effectively. 
    4. Is there any part of your essay which would be improved with more cautious language?  (This may be difficult to spot--don't worry if you can't answer this.)

    Task 2:
    1. Read the example essay on Robotics or Sample 1 on Law.
    2. Can you find any examples of hedging or cautious language? 
    3. Is it effective? 
    4. Is there any part of these essays which would be improved with more cautious language?  (This may be difficult to spot--don't worry if you can't answer this. Hint:  for the essay on Law, think range of modal verbs)
    5. What other aspects of these two essays are effective? What is less effective?

    ]]>     2022-02-14 12:38:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2046093497     Peer Review Instructions llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2084216849 2022-03-08 15:21:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2084216849 Peer Review Document llaubacher2 https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2084221718 2022-03-08 15:23:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ssculc/CW3OctPM/wish/2084221718