Essay writing by ELMANITA YANA https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09 what is the thesis statement? what is the central idea? en-us 2021-03-17 06:16:56 UTC 2021-03-31 07:19:14 UTC hello@padlet.com Rahel Pionanta rahelpionanta2002226 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319202200 1. The thesis statement is Americans are friendly to strangers.
The central idea is about Americans people.
2. There are two examples.
It explained adequately.
3. I do think that adding one more example will make it better.
The sentence that restate the thesis statement from the concluding paragraph is "In general, Americans are friendly to strangers".]]> 2021-03-17 06:29:55 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319202200 elmanitayana2002226 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319213045 1. The thesis statement is American are friendly to strangers.
The central idea is American traditions. 
2. There are two examples and already explained adequately.
3. I think 3 examples at least.
4. The sentence that restatement of thesis statement is the first sentence.


]]> 2021-03-17 06:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319213045 Jenny Putri Siahaan / 200222608406 jennyputri2002226 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319216076 1. the thesis statement is: Americans are friendly to strangers.
the central idea is: Americans
2. there are 2 examples. the examples are explained adequately. 
3. I don't think so. I think we should at least give 3 examples.
4. I think the sentence "Americans are friendly to strangers" is the sentence that restatement the thesis statement.]]> 2021-03-17 06:36:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319216076 Amanda Pramoedya Wardani / 200222608412 amandapramud https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319217434 1. The thesis statement is American are friendly to strangers.
The central idea is American social relations.

2. I think there is 2 examples.
Yes, in my opinion, the examples that already explain adequately.

3. No, I think is not enough because the author has explained 2 examples in there.

The concluding sentence that restatement the thesis statement is first sentence of the last paragraph.]]> 2021-03-17 06:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319217434 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319223421 The thesis statement is Americans are friendly to strangers and the central idea is]]> 2021-03-17 06:39:17 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319223421 shafaputri2002226 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319227808 1. The thesis statement is Americans are friendly to strangers. The central idea is how Americans treat strangers.
2. There are two examples and the writer explained it adequately.
3. I think we need at least three examples to make it even clearer.
4. Paragraph 5 - "In general, Americans are friendly to strangers."]]> 2021-03-17 06:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319227808 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319228982 Jamilah Nurul M
1.Thesis statments : America is friendly to starngers from another country. The central idea is : how american people treat starngers

2. There are two examples

3. I think its enough

4. On the concluding paragraph “in general american are friendly to strangers”
]]> 2021-03-17 06:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319228982 Maslikhatul Fitria maslikhatulfitria2002226 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319232968 1. The thesis statement from the passage is : After i attended college, I discovered the opposite of what I had expected
The central idea is : Americans are friendly to stranger
2. There are two examples. I think the examples are already adequately
3. Maybe we can added more examples

I think the first sentence of concluding paragraph is the restatement of the thesis satetment]]> 2021-03-17 06:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319232968 Ghifary Izza Ramadhani Ghifary_Izza_Ramadhani https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319235866 1. Thesis statement: American are friendly to strangers.
Central idea: how Americans treat strangers.
2. There are two examples and they are explained adequately.
3. I think the essay needs on more example.

I think the last sentence is the restatement of the thesis statement.]]> 2021-03-17 06:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319235866 Rizqa Biizzatillah/200222608424 rizqabiizzatillah https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319237621 1.The thesis statement is Americans are friendly to strangers.
From my point of view the control ideas is about Americans traditions.
2.  There are two example and the example is explain adequately.
3. Yes its is enough

4. In the concluding paragraph is the restatement of the thesis statement " In generally, Americans are friendly to strangers.]]> 2021-03-17 06:45:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319237621 Gatra Kusuma Hidayat gatrakusuma2002226 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319240133 1. The thesis statement is Americans are friendly to strangers

The central idea is the way Americans treat strangers

2. There are two examples and the examples are explained adequatly
3. I think one or two example more is better
4. "In general, Americans are friendly to strangers. "]]> 2021-03-17 06:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319240133 Hanindya Putri Salsabila https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319240600 The thesis statement is Americans are friendly to strangers. And the central idea is how American treat strangers.]]> 2021-03-17 06:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319240600 Allegra Rheyandra // 200222608411 allegrarheyandra2002226 https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319241091 1. Thesis statements: Americans are friendly to strangers.
The central idea: How Americans treat strangers.

2. There are two examples that are adequately explained.

3. I think it is necessary to add another one because I think there should be at least 3 examples.

4. In the concluding paragraph "In generally, Americans are friendly to strangers." ]]> 2021-03-17 06:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319241091 Ajeng Marcelliani Azzahra/ 200222608468 ajengmarcelliani https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319250312 1. Thesis statement is Americans are friendly to strangers. Central idea is how Americans treat strangers. 

2. I think there are two examples. Yes, it is already explained adequately.

3. Yes, it is.

4. The sentence in the concluding paragraph is the restatement of the thesis statement is from my experience, a person who treats people well will put them in position where they have to respect him in return, but if they treats them badly they will treat him in the same way.]]> 2021-03-17 06:50:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319250312 Hanindya Putri Salsabila https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319331796 2. There are two examples and its explained adequately.
3. I think its enough because essay has limited word.But the writer also can write more.
4. In paragraph 5. ”In general American are friendly to strangers” I think this statement is restatment of the thesis of parahraph.]]> 2021-03-17 07:21:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elmanitayana2002226/n92cx3gatjxuhr09/wish/1319331796