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I liked it, but it hasn’t enough content for me. I‘d liked more emotionally deep characters; and (maybe I‘m wrong) where did the atmosphere go?
The Narrator changes his perspective at the end, just we read in the text „Laura“. It is grammatically correct, but „1v1“ and „gg“ are in everyday language.
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