-        Common task

INTRO:

-        General statement about the topic: Traffic problems

-        The 2 opposing views: paraphrase: can be solved by using public transport >< other ways

-        Your opinion (I believe/ In my opinion): Agree with one side or agree with both

People have different views about the best solution to deal with traffic issues. Some believe that traveling by public transport is the only solution while/ whereas others think there are other ways. Although the first point of view is reasonable to some extent, I largely agree with the second one. //

Personally, I agree with both points of view. 

 

1^st Body paragraph: Public transport

-        View 1 (paraphrase): topic sentence

-        Reason

-        Example

-        Relate example to view 1

On the one hand, encouraging peole to use public means of transport can help solve traffic problems. à 2 reasons + example

2^nd body paragraph: Your view (other ways)

-        View 2 (paraphrase)

-        Reason

-        Example

-        Relate example to view 2

On the other hand, I think there are some other solutions to these problems. à 2 reasons + example

Conclusion

-        The opposing view vs. your opinion

-        Sum up main points

-        Call for action!

In conclusion, despite the fact that public transportation can reduce traffic issues, … and … are much better. ….

 

One of the first benefits of such a measure is that the heavy taxes would discourage car owners from using their cars because it would become very expensive to drive. This would mean that they would begin to make use of public transport instead, thus reducing traffic problems and pollution as well. Another benefit would be that much more use would be made of public transport if it was improved. It is often the case that public transport in cities is very poor. For example, we often see old buses and trains that people would rather not use. High taxes would generate enough money to make the necessary changes.

Nevertheless, there are drawbacks to such a solution. First and foremost, this would be a heavy burden on the car drivers. At present, taxes are already high for a lot of people, and so further taxes would only mean less money at the end of the month for most people who may have no choice but to drive every day. In addition, this type of tax would likely be set at a fixed amount. This would mean that it would hit those with less money harder, whilst the rich could likely afford it. It is therefore not a fair tax.

To conclude, this solution is worth considering to improve the current situation, but there are advantages and disadvantages of introducing such a policy.

     First and foremost, people should recgnize that homework has a significant role in education. A very important point to consider is that it help children learn better. This is because of the fact that completing the homework is one of the best way to make students revisit the knowledge what they have studied voluntarity and then they can remember it more durable. Moreover, when they try to finish their schoolwork they might have some new problems and they are neccerssary to expand information that has not been taught by teachers. Secondly, It is a good method for parents and teachers to cultivate children’s self discipline and respondibility. Because when they are at home, teachers can not monitor whether students do the task or not and it depend on them. 

     On the other hand, the are several argument in support of the idea that schoolwork is not significant. It is also convincing to realise that it have have some effect on their relation ship. This means that they have to spend time on finishing the task instead of family. And they do not have enough time to make friend with others. It will make their relatiionship become worse. For example, in the Tet holiday, they have to do the task before go to school again instead of having time for their family. It is so bad.

     All things considered, I agree that homework is one of the most important things but It should be inmoderation so that students can consolidate their knowledge but still have time for other things.